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How To Clone A Human Heart

Updated on January 22, 2014
Each and every poem has a life & a purpose to be discovered, shared...but not interpreted
Each and every poem has a life & a purpose to be discovered, shared...but not interpreted | Source

December 12, 2001

Snow fell silently

a sharp cry pierced

her soft caress calmed

smiles dawned slowly


smiles dawned slowly

Snow fell silently

a sharp cry pierced

her soft caress calmed


her soft caress calmed

smiles dawned slowly

Snow fell silently

a sharp cry pierced


a sharp cry pierced

her soft caress calmed

smiles dawned slowly

Snow fell silently

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Not at all what I was expecting. Glad I stopped by. thanks

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      Darrylmdavis 4 years ago from Brussels, Belgium

      Thanks for stopping by, Mhatter. I aim to... Not bore people ;-)

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      Jim Higgins 4 years ago from Eugene, Oregon

      Really interesting structure!

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      Valleypoet 4 years ago

      Beautiful piece...reminds me of when my daughter was born..thank you for sharing this Darryl:-))

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      Beautiful!

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      Darrylmdavis 4 years ago from Brussels, Belgium

      Thanks, xstatic. I wanted to capture the way life feels when you have a newborn on your hands: life just rotates around a few key events ;-)

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      Darrylmdavis 4 years ago from Brussels, Belgium

      Cheers, Valleypoet. Thanks for stopping by :-)

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      Darrylmdavis 4 years ago from Brussels, Belgium

      Glad you enjoyed it :-)

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      Anna Haven 4 years ago from Scotland

      This is completely different and interesting.

      With a newborn everything does seem to almost disappear except that moment you are in.

      A skillful write.

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      Darrylmdavis 4 years ago from Brussels, Belgium

      Thanks, Anna :-)

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      Randi Benlulu 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      Beautiful!

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      Darrylmdavis 4 years ago from Brussels, Belgium

      Thanks, btrbell :-)

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Beautiful use of form here!

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      First time I've read a poem with this form repeating the last line as first of next stanza. Well done.

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      vespawoolf 3 years ago from Peru, South America

      Your poetry flows so beautifully!

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Your poetry is unique. I enjoyed the read, thanks.

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      manatita44 2 years ago from london

      Interesting poem. I like that.

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