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I wrote a poem

Updated on June 28, 2011


I wrote a poem


i wrote a poem

I wrote a poem about you.

You won't have seen it yet

because this is it.


I didn't want it to be funny

I didn't want it to be serious

I just wanted to write something

because i was thinking of you.


I was thinking of you and your smile and your laugh

and trying to put it down on this page.

I was thinking of you and your face and your warm voice

wanting,above all,to do them justice.

Thinking of your bold and joyful eyes.

The pleasure of just seeing them seeing.

Watching them watching.


Just to show that i was thinking of you

i wrote this poem

I wrote this poem about you.

I wrote this poem for you.

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    • attemptedhumour profile image

      attemptedhumour 5 years ago from Australia

      Well thank you very much, i'm truly touched.

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      Leptirela 5 years ago from I don't know half the time

      haha awesome :)

      it simply just comes out

      thank you for sharing excellent poem.

      VOTE UP for you - no doubt!!!

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      michael ely 5 years ago from Scotland

      Hi attemptedhumour, Ha Ha. How did you guess? Yes i just went for a change of tack. It started out going to be funny then it just became all different. Cheers. Michael.

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      michael ely 5 years ago from Scotland

      Hi Leptirela, Thanks a lot for your fantastic comments. I really appreciate them. Thanks . Michael.

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      attemptedhumour 5 years ago from Australia

      It's a great way to write, where you don't know where you going to end up. I do it too, and find it more creative. Cheers mate.

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      michael ely 5 years ago from Scotland

      Thanks for the comment attemptedhumour. Yes sometimes i've got a fair idea what i'm going to write and others it just happens as i go along!!

      Cheers. Michael.

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      Angie Jardine 5 years ago from Cornwall, land of the eternally youthful mind ...

      Michael ... I really liked this ... and I don't usually 'get' poetry. I thought it was very clever.

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      michael ely 5 years ago from Scotland

      Thanks a lot Angie. Glad you like it.

      Michael.

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