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Inside the Sea

Updated on June 25, 2015

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My gaze was fixed where the water met the shore...
But I found at once....my heart longed no more...
Time was spent...craving the company of the sea....
When all the while it smiled and cast my reflection back at me...
And what had failed to be seen...the beast that grasped and gnawed the soul so desperately...was nothing more than the fear of being me......
solace was not to be found in the sea...because I am it, and it is me.

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© 2015 Rebecca

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      manatita44 2 years ago from london

      Beautiful poem, Rebecca. Peace!

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      Paula 2 years ago from The Midwest, USA

      The sea is such an interesting thing, multi faceted to say the least! There is so much beauty and yet so much depth and complexity, even fear ( a healthy fear at time.) I enjoyed reading this, thank you for sharing it.

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      The Examiner-1 2 years ago

      At least I did something with my comments Rebecca. :-)

      Kevin

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      Rebecca 2 years ago from USA

      Ha! Thanks for the comments. The Examiner-1 you made me chuckle. :)

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      Suhail Zubaid aka Clark Kent 2 years ago from Mississauga, ON

      Beautiful poem about ocean! Admittedly, some people have same reverence and attraction for deserts.

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      Janis Leslie Evans 2 years ago from Washington, DC

      I did like it alot, Rebecca. I enjoyed your thoughtful wisdom about the ocean and return to embrace the self. Voted up and interesting.

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      The Examiner-1 2 years ago

      Well Rebecca, it was hard to say. It was in between good and bad so it was hard to rate by your standards. I gave it thumbs up and pinned it.

      Kevin

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      Rebecca 2 years ago from USA

      Thank you both! Frank...you're a great writer, that's a great compliment.

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      Rob Welsh 2 years ago from Tomorrow - In Words & NZ Time.

      I concur Rebecca, nicely rounded, piece with a trick ending :) Gettig better with each new post poet... take care.. PD

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      Frank Atanacio 2 years ago from Shelton

      wow very well written Bishop :)