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63 "Just Two Silhouettes on a Bridge"

Updated on April 15, 2013

Warms hearts in the cold.

Here we are, standing on a bridge,

It is so cold out, it feels like a fridge.

Snow flakes drift down, land on your face,

Nothing could be warmer than your embrace.


The floating snowflakes reflect the street light,

As though glitter was falling in the night.

There was no one on the late night street,

Only I was enjoying this sight, this treat.


Our kisses were so sweet and so warm,

It was a wonder there was no fire alarm.

You lifted your face for another kiss,

I could only stare, this was a moment not to miss.


I will treasure this moment for life,

As I will cherish every moment with you as my wife.

One day we will become one and the same,

It will be a picture worthy of a beautiful frame.


As we are standing on this bridge covered in snow,

Holding you in my arms only makes my love grow.

I love you heart and soul more every day,

I just can’t imagine any other way.

Greg

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      Subhas 

      5 years ago from New Delhi, India

      Very beautifully crafted poetic gesture to touch the very cord of human emotion.

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi BMax, Thank you. I am glad I could paint those images with words of love. Greg

      Hi OC, Thank you. Those emotions come from the heart because of her love for me. Thank you for the votes. Greg

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      Olde Cashmere 

      6 years ago

      Wonderful poetry gregas, I can feel your emotions coming through in the writing, pure as love can get. Voted up and beautiful (:

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      BeyondMax 

      6 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Amazingly painted images, I was feeling like I was there as a silent bystander to this magical beautiful moment!

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi LD, Thank you for your critique and praise. I feel it is the commited and true love that inspires me. Greg

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      lovedoctor926 

      6 years ago

      A beautiful poem of committed love that many people long for. The title is very catchy. The imagery of the snowflakes drifting down and landing on her face is amazing! I hope I can write poetry like this someday!

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Lady, Thank you. They are just natural feelings when you have someone in your life like I do. Greg

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Amy, Thank you. I don't know if it is rare or not, but thank you very much. Greg

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      Joanna Chandler 

      6 years ago from On planet Earth

      This was spectacular i love it :)

      Keep up the wonderful work

    • Amy Becherer profile image

      Amy Becherer 

      6 years ago from St. Louis, MO

      Rare and magnificently stated.

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Tony, Thank you. I too like bridges and feel they can span many relationships. I have also learned, early in life, not to burn bridges because you bay have to walk back across them at some point in your life. Greg

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      Tony Mead 

      6 years ago from Yorkshire

      HI Gregas

      nice poem, good verse structure, which allows for an easy read. I think bridges are interesting and curious things, they are used as a symbol like holding out your hand to someone. They can cross far more than rivers and railways, like gulfs in relationships and between nations, and they are always good to meet on.

      cheers Tony

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Rosemay, Thank you. Love will always keep you warm. Greg

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      Rosemary Sadler 

      6 years ago from Hawkes Bay - NewZealand

      A lovely sweet poem, It doesn't matter how cold it gets love always keeps us warm.

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Sheila, Thank you for the visit and votes. Greg

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      sheilanewton 

      6 years ago from North Shields, UK

      Ooooh - so sweet. The way you lay your words out on the page is really something special. Voted up. This is awesome and beautiful

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      Justin W Price 

      6 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      greg... you're welcome

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Lady, Thank you, but I still think I am the lucky one. Greg

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      Elena 

      6 years ago from London, UK

      It's beautiful.

      Lucky her. :)

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      WD Curry 111 

      6 years ago from Space Coast

      It doesn't hurt. I tune it out.

      If my wife sees this, there will be a domestic violence charge to deal with.

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Chip, Thank you for the visit and comment. You just remember those days always and the nagging won't hurt so bad. Greg

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      WD Curry 111 

      6 years ago from Space Coast

      The poem is precious. It reminds me of the days before she got rid of my comic book collection and started nagging me half to death.

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi PDX, Thank you for the visit and the comment. Greg

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      Justin W Price 

      6 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      very wonderful sentiments, Greg. Thanks for sharing!

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Gmaoli, Thank you for the Visit, comment and quote. Greg

      Hi Sue, Thank you for the visit, comment and vote. You have a great day too. Greg

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      Sueswan 

      6 years ago

      Hi Greg

      This so beautiful romantic and heartfelt. Love it.

      Voted up and away!

      Have a good day.

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      Gianandrea Maoli 

      6 years ago from South Carolina

      Wow, nice! Very touching and heartwarming love poem. My personal favorite line: "

      One day we will become one and the same,

      It will be a picture worthy of a beautiful frame."

      You overall painted a great picture with this work.

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi B., Thank you for the visit, comment and the follow. I hope you enjoy. Greg

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      b. Malin 

      6 years ago

      A Beautiful Tribute to Romance and your Love...An Enjoyable Read. I look forward to Following your Hubs Gregas, and Thank You for becoming a Follower of mine.

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Rebe, Thank you for the visit and comment. As I said in an earlier comment, I am the lucky one. There's a lot that goes with that, but that is a whole other story. Greg

      Hi Sweethearts, The memories are great, aren't they. Greg

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      sweethearts2 

      6 years ago from Northwest Indiana

      Hi gregas

      I love the memories, the gift of what used to be. Thank you for asking.

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      Rebecca Mealey 

      6 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

      Lovely poem, so sweet and full of sentiment.Someone is a Lucky girl!

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Gloshei, Thank you for the visit, comment and votes. I'm glad I could make you feel that way. Greg

      Hi Sweethearts, Thank you for the visit and comment. Why is it "used to love"? Greg

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      sweethearts2 

      6 years ago from Northwest Indiana

      I use to love snowflakes on eyelashes and cold lips warmed by the lips of my husband as we stood in the falling snow. Thanks for sharing.

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      Gloria 

      6 years ago from France

      Lovely words that make you feel you are their. Truly romantic great hub.

      Thanks for sharing. voted 'B' & up

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Raciniwa, Thank you for the visit and comment. It can be romantic in any situation if you are with the right person. Greg

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      raciniwa 

      6 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      soooooooo romantic...i envision my lover to take me in his arms on this bridge...

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Ann, Thank you for the visit and the comment. As long as she is in my arms it can snow all it wants, Greg

      Hi Suzy, Thank you for the visit and comment. A picture similar to that is what inspired the poem. Greg

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      Susan Britton 

      6 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Great hearfelt poem and the picture is a perfect match. Well done.

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      anndavis25 

      6 years ago from Clearwater, Fl.

      Let it snow, let it snow, let it snow!

      Bridge, nice visual.

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Kashmir, Thank you for the visit, comment and vote. Greg

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      Thomas Silvia 

      6 years ago from Massachusetts

      A very lovely winter love poem,thanks really enjoyed reading it !

      Vote up !!!

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Swetankraj, Thank you for thr visit and comment. Greg

      Hi Ian, hank you for the visit and comment. Greg

      Hi Gypsy, Thank you for the visit and comment. That's the weather we have here in Colorado too at times. It does make it much warmer when you have someone to hold. Greg

      Hi Dim, Thank you for the Visit, comment and votes. I cosider myself the lucky one. Greg

      Hi Jamie, Thank you for the visit and comment, and you are welcome. Greg

      Hi Pickles, Thank you for the visit, comment and vote. Greg

      Hi Ghaelach, Thank you for the visit and heartfelt comment.

      Greg

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 

      6 years ago from Reno NV

      Thank you for this poem! Jamie

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      Dim Flaxenwick 

      6 years ago from Great Britain

      voted up and beautiful. You showed so much love here for one lucky lady.

      Great poem.

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      picklesandrufus 

      6 years ago from Virginia Beach, Va

      true love...is there anything better! vote up!

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      Ghaelach 

      6 years ago

      Morning Greg.

      A beautiful written poem straight from the heart.

      LOL Ghaelach

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 

      6 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful! Love your line feels so cold out it feels like a fridge. That's exactly the weather we have here in Riga and snow everywhere make me want to hibernate like a bear.

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      Ian D Hetri 

      6 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      Beautiful hub with taste of romance.

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      Swetank Raj 

      6 years ago from India

      Very lovely poem and the way you expressed is truly admirable. It will be best for Valentines Day as "teaches12345" stated. It truely touches my heart.

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Joyce, Thank you for the visit, kind comment and the votes. Greg

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      Joyce Haragsim 

      6 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Loved your poem, voted up,awesome and beautiful, Joyce.

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Teach, Thank you for the visit, comment and vote. I am working on a very special one for Valentine's Day for her. Greg

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      Dianna Mendez 

      6 years ago

      So sweet and how appropriate for Valentine's Day coming up. Very nicely written and voted up!

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      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Cleaner, Thank you for the visit and comment.

      Greg

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      cleaner3 

      6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Greg, I like it.

      Thanks for a super poem.

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      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Georgiann, Thank you for the visit and comment. Greg

      Hi Blossem, Thank you for the visit, comment and vote. Greg

      Hi Deborah, thank you for the visit and comment. Greg

      Hi Flash, thank you for the visit and comment. Greg

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      flashmakeit 

      6 years ago from usa

      How lovable and romantic

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 

      6 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Oh how beautiful and sweet...I love to read about true love...what a great poem...

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 

      6 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      What a beautiful poem. It creates such a romantic atmosphere. Voted up and beautiful.

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      Georgiann 

      6 years ago

      Very sweet!

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      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Jeyaramd, Thank you for the visit and comment. Greg

      Hi GTS, Thank you for the visit, comment and votes. For the record, we aren't married. We have been the best of friends and a couple for almost 28 years. A relationship of unmatched love. Greg

      Hi Stessily, they are romantic. Apicture similar to the one I used was my inspiration for the poem, along with thoughts of her. Greg

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      stessily 

      6 years ago

      Bridges are romantic places!

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      girltalksshop 

      6 years ago

      A man of romance and words after many a woman's heart! Wow! Beautiful poem. Marked it awesome, up and beautiful of course. ; )You have one lucky wife, good sir!

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      jeyaramd 

      6 years ago from Mississauga, Ontario

      Thanks for sharing.

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