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63 "Just Two Silhouettes on a Bridge"
Warms hearts in the cold.
Here we are, standing on a bridge,
It is so cold out, it feels like a fridge.
Snow flakes drift down, land on your face,
Nothing could be warmer than your embrace.
The floating snowflakes reflect the street light,
As though glitter was falling in the night.
There was no one on the late night street,
Only I was enjoying this sight, this treat.
Our kisses were so sweet and so warm,
It was a wonder there was no fire alarm.
You lifted your face for another kiss,
I could only stare, this was a moment not to miss.
I will treasure this moment for life,
As I will cherish every moment with you as my wife.
One day we will become one and the same,
It will be a picture worthy of a beautiful frame.
As we are standing on this bridge covered in snow,
Holding you in my arms only makes my love grow.
I love you heart and soul more every day,
I just can’t imagine any other way.
Greg
Comments
Very beautifully crafted poetic gesture to touch the very cord of human emotion.
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Hi BMax, Thank you. I am glad I could paint those images with words of love. Greg
Hi OC, Thank you. Those emotions come from the heart because of her love for me. Thank you for the votes. Greg
Wonderful poetry gregas, I can feel your emotions coming through in the writing, pure as love can get. Voted up and beautiful (:
Amazingly painted images, I was feeling like I was there as a silent bystander to this magical beautiful moment!
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Hi LD, Thank you for your critique and praise. I feel it is the commited and true love that inspires me. Greg
A beautiful poem of committed love that many people long for. The title is very catchy. The imagery of the snowflakes drifting down and landing on her face is amazing! I hope I can write poetry like this someday!
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Hi Lady, Thank you. They are just natural feelings when you have someone in your life like I do. Greg
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Hi Amy, Thank you. I don't know if it is rare or not, but thank you very much. Greg
This was spectacular i love it :)
Keep up the wonderful work
Rare and magnificently stated.
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Hi Tony, Thank you. I too like bridges and feel they can span many relationships. I have also learned, early in life, not to burn bridges because you bay have to walk back across them at some point in your life. Greg
HI Gregas
nice poem, good verse structure, which allows for an easy read. I think bridges are interesting and curious things, they are used as a symbol like holding out your hand to someone. They can cross far more than rivers and railways, like gulfs in relationships and between nations, and they are always good to meet on.
cheers Tony
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Hi Rosemay, Thank you. Love will always keep you warm. Greg
A lovely sweet poem, It doesn't matter how cold it gets love always keeps us warm.
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Hi Sheila, Thank you for the visit and votes. Greg
Ooooh - so sweet. The way you lay your words out on the page is really something special. Voted up. This is awesome and beautiful
greg... you're welcome
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Hi Lady, Thank you, but I still think I am the lucky one. Greg
It's beautiful.
Lucky her. :)
It doesn't hurt. I tune it out.
If my wife sees this, there will be a domestic violence charge to deal with.
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Hi Chip, Thank you for the visit and comment. You just remember those days always and the nagging won't hurt so bad. Greg
The poem is precious. It reminds me of the days before she got rid of my comic book collection and started nagging me half to death.
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Hi PDX, Thank you for the visit and the comment. Greg
very wonderful sentiments, Greg. Thanks for sharing!
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Hi Gmaoli, Thank you for the Visit, comment and quote. Greg
Hi Sue, Thank you for the visit, comment and vote. You have a great day too. Greg
Hi Greg
This so beautiful romantic and heartfelt. Love it.
Voted up and away!
Have a good day.
Wow, nice! Very touching and heartwarming love poem. My personal favorite line: "
One day we will become one and the same,
It will be a picture worthy of a beautiful frame."
You overall painted a great picture with this work.
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Hi B., Thank you for the visit, comment and the follow. I hope you enjoy. Greg
A Beautiful Tribute to Romance and your Love...An Enjoyable Read. I look forward to Following your Hubs Gregas, and Thank You for becoming a Follower of mine.
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Hi Rebe, Thank you for the visit and comment. As I said in an earlier comment, I am the lucky one. There's a lot that goes with that, but that is a whole other story. Greg
Hi Sweethearts, The memories are great, aren't they. Greg
Hi gregas
I love the memories, the gift of what used to be. Thank you for asking.
Lovely poem, so sweet and full of sentiment.Someone is a Lucky girl!
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Hi Gloshei, Thank you for the visit, comment and votes. I'm glad I could make you feel that way. Greg
Hi Sweethearts, Thank you for the visit and comment. Why is it "used to love"? Greg
I use to love snowflakes on eyelashes and cold lips warmed by the lips of my husband as we stood in the falling snow. Thanks for sharing.
Lovely words that make you feel you are their. Truly romantic great hub.
Thanks for sharing. voted 'B' & up
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Hi Raciniwa, Thank you for the visit and comment. It can be romantic in any situation if you are with the right person. Greg
soooooooo romantic...i envision my lover to take me in his arms on this bridge...
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Hi Ann, Thank you for the visit and the comment. As long as she is in my arms it can snow all it wants, Greg
Hi Suzy, Thank you for the visit and comment. A picture similar to that is what inspired the poem. Greg
Great hearfelt poem and the picture is a perfect match. Well done.
Let it snow, let it snow, let it snow!
Bridge, nice visual.
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Hi Kashmir, Thank you for the visit, comment and vote. Greg
A very lovely winter love poem,thanks really enjoyed reading it !
Vote up !!!
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Hi Swetankraj, Thank you for thr visit and comment. Greg
Hi Ian, hank you for the visit and comment. Greg
Hi Gypsy, Thank you for the visit and comment. That's the weather we have here in Colorado too at times. It does make it much warmer when you have someone to hold. Greg
Hi Dim, Thank you for the Visit, comment and votes. I cosider myself the lucky one. Greg
Hi Jamie, Thank you for the visit and comment, and you are welcome. Greg
Hi Pickles, Thank you for the visit, comment and vote. Greg
Hi Ghaelach, Thank you for the visit and heartfelt comment.
Greg
Thank you for this poem! Jamie
voted up and beautiful. You showed so much love here for one lucky lady.
Great poem.
true love...is there anything better! vote up!
Morning Greg.
A beautiful written poem straight from the heart.
LOL Ghaelach
Voted up and beautiful! Love your line feels so cold out it feels like a fridge. That's exactly the weather we have here in Riga and snow everywhere make me want to hibernate like a bear.
Beautiful hub with taste of romance.
Very lovely poem and the way you expressed is truly admirable. It will be best for Valentines Day as "teaches12345" stated. It truely touches my heart.
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Hi Joyce, Thank you for the visit, kind comment and the votes. Greg
Loved your poem, voted up,awesome and beautiful, Joyce.
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Hi Teach, Thank you for the visit, comment and vote. I am working on a very special one for Valentine's Day for her. Greg
So sweet and how appropriate for Valentine's Day coming up. Very nicely written and voted up!
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Hi Cleaner, Thank you for the visit and comment.
Greg
Greg, I like it.
Thanks for a super poem.
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Hi Georgiann, Thank you for the visit and comment. Greg
Hi Blossem, Thank you for the visit, comment and vote. Greg
Hi Deborah, thank you for the visit and comment. Greg
Hi Flash, thank you for the visit and comment. Greg
How lovable and romantic
Oh how beautiful and sweet...I love to read about true love...what a great poem...
What a beautiful poem. It creates such a romantic atmosphere. Voted up and beautiful.
Very sweet!
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Hi Jeyaramd, Thank you for the visit and comment. Greg
Hi GTS, Thank you for the visit, comment and votes. For the record, we aren't married. We have been the best of friends and a couple for almost 28 years. A relationship of unmatched love. Greg
Hi Stessily, they are romantic. Apicture similar to the one I used was my inspiration for the poem, along with thoughts of her. Greg
Bridges are romantic places!
A man of romance and words after many a woman's heart! Wow! Beautiful poem. Marked it awesome, up and beautiful of course. ; )You have one lucky wife, good sir!
Thanks for sharing.
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