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Knotted

Updated on March 15, 2011

fire of orb

your eyes

burn thru my soul


you trace me

but can’t find

what you lookin for


don’t know what I want

you unwrap me

skin to skin

kisses blaze me in


I push you

you pull me in

I can’t roll away


cling like a mud

knotted strangely

more poems

about you and me


you chase me

but dunno

what I’m looking for


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© Copyright 2011 by Fehl Dungo All Rights Reserved

Photo from musumemiyuki flickr photostream

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    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      6 years ago from close to you...

      Nothing makes a poet more fulfilled and happy when her readers were fascinated and spellbound. :) Thank you for that, Max. Hope you read my other hubs, poetry and prose mixed together.. Have a sweet day!

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      BeyondMax 

      6 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      LOL thank you Fehl for your sweet compliments, really =) I love to read your poetry, it's so exquisitely beautiful and overwhelming. Sometimes I just feel like I'm spellbound, I read the poem again and again and I am seeing it from different angles, it's fascinating!

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      6 years ago from close to you...

      You hungry Max? Hehehe I am so flattered by your comments and reading my poems today. Your styles are raw and I am a real fan :)

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      BeyondMax 

      6 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      I love this poem to bits, it is so crisp and fresh, love love love! I just wanna read again and again! wow.

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      6 years ago from close to you...

      would be cool if they find each other at the same time..just like kisses..lips to lips.....

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      Cathy Nerujen 

      6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Sometimes what we look for... we find ... or it finds us...

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      6 years ago from close to you...

      absolutely right my friend :) thanks!

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      Nikki Wicked 

      6 years ago from Louisiana

      sometimes what we are looking for is right under our nose and we dont even know it. beautiful poem.

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      7 years ago from close to you...

      thanks Midianite :)

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      Midianite 

      7 years ago from Australia

      Nice poem

      "skin to skin

      kisses blaze me in"

      :)

      p.s you're profile picture is cute, just saying.

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      7 years ago from close to you...

      I just write..

      Thanks a million Epi! :)

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      epigramman 

      7 years ago

      ..... I know what I 'look for' in a great writer ......................................................................................................................... someone like you!!!!!!!

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      Cassandra Mantis 

      7 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Just commenting again, Fehl. Making sure my comments are getting through okay.

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      7 years ago from close to you...

      Aw thank you lovely Dim :) xx

      Little Kim hello! Yeah? :D Thanks for dropping by.

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      Little Kim 

      7 years ago from Any town U.S.A.

      I have a strange feeling I've been there before. Several times! Beautiful!

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      Dim Flaxenwick 

      7 years ago from Great Britain

      Your talent shines through in every line. lol x Dim x

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      Dim Flaxenwick 

      7 years ago from Great Britain

      I think your talent shines through every line .

      lol x Dim

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      7 years ago from close to you...

      Pee pee Phew! So funny! Thanks for the email. I'm learning new tricks from you. Totally brilliant! I tried those lil curls before, I looked so Asian LOL I'd like to try the Afro curls, one time big time :D Love the angelic curls..

      Wow, your St. Patrick's Day sounds exciting. I want to drown the shamrock right now LOLOL

      Hello Cathy! hahaha yeah me too. I think you can teach her improve it ;) I dunno if I can help you. I mean am I good? LOL

      What's with the white smoke really? Is that a metaphor or something? LOL Don't tell me there's a new Pope :D Don't listen to me, I didn't sleep so well. My mind is not on my head LOL

      -Checking my sentence- They're two sentences. LOL

      Happy weekend to you as well :) XO

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      Cathy Nerujen 

      7 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Hahaha, you read it finally. That was the funniest thing I read in ages, Fehl, Cassy needs some lessons in poetry, want to help me improve her? LOL. It will tame some cheekiness in her, for about 2 minutes. Ha. :D

      Okay, I will get back to that smoking...what was it smoking hot? Oh yes. (laughs) You have presented me with a hard task, you do realise this, Fehl. LOL.

      It's nice to see smoking hot, pretty and unusual in the one sentence for me. Hehe. Do have a nice weekend, my not-so-curly Fehl. :D XOXX

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      Cassandra Mantis 

      7 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      I am smiling now, Fehl. I knew you would find it funny, as it ends funny. LOL! I just sent you an email, make sure you read it, okay? Oh my teasing - that's cool! My hair will always be curly! Heh! You should try the curly look, it might look good on you! ^_^

      Justin singing my lyrics. Um, it won't be the same coming from him Fehl. He's a man. ROFL! We had a great day, and we did try to drown the "Shamrock", but he hid in the bathroom and locked us out, we have him trapped in there now. LOL! Long story!

      Happy Weekend from Team Cheeky here! :) xo

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      7 years ago from close to you...

      I literally ROFLOL! I read the damn thing like rapping. Not that it's a bad lyrics, it's so funny! But cute anyway.

      Wasn't downgrading moi self. Was just teasing you so your hair curl itself more LMAO

      Aw Bieber? He should sing your lyrics ROFL Cheers! Happy St. Patrick's Day to you Team Cheeky! :D

      Hi Cathy! It's cool. She's cheeky! LOL Wow, new poem coming up :)Your poetry always smoking hot :D Pretty unusual! TC XX

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      Cathy Nerujen 

      7 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Cassy should not be teasing you, I will tick her off for that. Bad Kitty. Hehehe. Oh the poem is under way...don't know when I will finish. Watch out for white smoke, or whatever... LOL. Take care Fehl. XX

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      Cassandra Mantis 

      7 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Hy Fehl, I emailed the damn lyrics to you. Remember to laugh your ass off.

      I was kidding and teasing you, us competing...Goodness! We are cool! Heh! And stop downgrading yourself. It's that damn algorithm, it's affecting everyone on hubs. LOL!

      Ooooh, you're a fan of Tyler! I am a fan of Justin Bieber, but he's waaay too young and inexperienced for me. LMAO! I will search him out, see what all the fuss is about. Cheers! Enjoy your day! :)

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      7 years ago from close to you...

      OK let me see how awesome they are :D I give the crown to Astra, she's the queen of poetry here.

      haha competition..hmmm what are we competing really? Come on, you reign on every bit of writing. Astra's the queen of poetry. Me, uhm, not a royalty LOL

      LMAO I'm a fan of Tyler. Doesn't mean I want him. He's too poetic for me. LOL Have a good day moi cheeky friend! :D

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      Cassandra Mantis 

      7 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Fehl, I will email you the embarassing lyrics. But believe me I think they are SH&T !! Hehehehe! Will email them tonight after work. Astra wins me in the poetry stakes I accept that, and so do you, Fehl. :) Okay, time for me to split!

      I think we have a bit of competition here, do you think? Does your boyfriend Tyler approve?? LOL! I am kidding here! *grins like hell now!* Ingat ka! :D

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      7 years ago from close to you...

      I love Tyler's String Theory. I almost read it everyday LOL Your 'locked boxes' theory sounds interesting. Wow, you would dedicate it to me too? *blushes* I wish Mr. Tyler was a hubber, too. LMAO It's a big flattery when a star dedicates something to her fan :D You know I'm a real fan of you Cath!

      haha yup come on Cheeky! Don't be shy!

      Someone would be better than Mr. Tyler. She's writing about locked boxes :D

      Oh thanks for saying that. :) I'll think bout it. Can't wait to read your books. You're great yourself! :D XX

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      Cathy Nerujen 

      7 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Hi Fehl. Humm, I could try writing about locked boxes. I have a mad theory about locked boxes, I told Cassy about. Okay, I will write it and dedicate it to you and Cassy. Heh. Challenge accepted.

      I would so love Cassy to put those lyrics on a hub. They are ... uh... unusual. Ha. Come on Cass. Don't be SHY. LOL.

      Aw Fehl, thanks for saying that about my poetry. I will also look out for Mr Tyler the best poet on earth. Must be veeeeery good, Fehl. (laughs)

      We will buy your next book too. Your poetry is always beautiful. You inspire in so many ways. :)

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      7 years ago from close to you...

      Haha yah she's wired that way. She writes beautifully..She's a raw poet my friend. Would love to read her next. Would be a challenge if she wrote bout locked box LOL This locked box thing has become a thread I notice. Heh! Wow, lyrics! hahaha Hmmm Now I wonder if I ruined my name publishing poetry and stuffs ROFLOL

      Tyler's poetry and haikus are the best in the web. Yup,that's what make them beautiful :D

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      Cassandra Mantis 

      7 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      H'mm, might ask Cathy to write a hub about locked boxes, see what she thinks. But he insists any of her hubs has to be poetry. Her brain is wired that way. Heh! Me, uh...well it's her baby so I will let her do it! Fehl, I have to confess I am not really a poet. I can write the writing, but believe me, I tried writing a set of lyrics to a song recently and it was sh$t! LOL! If I published it my name would be ruined forever. Hehehe! Although it would be funny too.

      Tyler Knott, string theory - okay, will look out for that. Well, it is beautifully inspired, as always, Fehl! As for the other, don't worry. There is always a nice mystery in some of the best poetry, not all things ought to be explained. :)

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      7 years ago from close to you...

      I'm a real fan of you two. Oh yeah loved the locked boxes too. Where the hell she got that beautiful idea? LOL Seriously, beautiful imagery :) Why doncha make a hub bout that? Or a poem maybe. You're a great novelist. Would love to read poetry from you LOL

      Aw I just write. Cathy is great. Ah this poem Knottted, I wrote it after reading a pretty poetry from Tyler Knott. It's called String Theory. Damn it's awesome! And this was a sort of reaction. Partly like that and the other I can't explain. LOL

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      Cassandra Mantis 

      7 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Fehl, you know us well enough. We are fans forever! :) The tussle and push pull thing was regarding your poem here. ;D But thanks for complimenting moi hair anyhooo! Hehehe! I like Cathy's idea about locked boxes. Wow! I think when we find that special person we have those feelings for - it's like we almost want them to find that box, and even give the person the key to our heart. That could make a great hub! LOL!

      Aw we are so happy to be your satisfied customers! LOL! Seriously, you are a great poet, Fehl. And this poem "Knotted" is just more proof. I am sure Cathy feels the same way. :D

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      7 years ago from close to you...

      You’re not a cave man. A cave man doesn’t have a bike and huge aircrafts LOL I love your hubs Mik! You rock :)

      Wow Enigmatic! You always flatter me. What can I say...you’re one of the ace poets among these guys here ;) Thank you.

      Always Exploring, I always trace you :D Thanks!

      Hi Cathy! That’s one of the most amazing things bout poetry…we get to know how people see it. The way you see this is quite interesting and it has a power over me ;) Love compared to a locked box with a key, that’s so enthralling. Like that, this poetry overflows a lot of meanings. There are thousands of strings between me and the person and I think I’ll just let the connection move along.

      Anyway, this was as always a spur of the moment..

      Your comments and views are always beautiful. Thanks Cath! xx

      Hello Cassandra! Wow great book coming up :) You kinda tussled and pushed and pulled? I can imagine how curly you are now ROFLOL It seems that the ‘tracing’ part is the most loved here. Heh! I loved how you said something bout the knots. You guys are great writers and friends. Forever honored you bought my book and made a review of it :) Thanks Cheeky! xx

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      Cassandra Mantis 

      7 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Still editing moi book, Fehl. Wow, getting there slowly. This is great - I sense a kind of a tussle and pushing yet a pulling too. Whoever is "tracing" needs a better set of eyeballs! Heh! Finding the real "us" or the person is the ultimate goal, and wanting to be found too, and our need to be understood is so important to all people.

      Some knots need unravelling yet there are some knots that are better treated different. The human heart can be complex, yet so sturdy. Love can really test us, and asks so many amazing things of us.

      You are a cool poet, Fehl! So glad we bought your Toss and Turn poems collection! Roll on the next book! And hubs too! Have a nice weekend, moi friend! :D XOX

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      Cathy Nerujen 

      7 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Um wow. I really loved this, Fehl. We all search for ways to understand love better. It's like there is a locked box inside all of us and we want that special person to find the key to it and open it...

      Your poetry is an uncanny force to be reckoned with, and it has a power over me. :)

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      Ruby Jean Richert 

      7 years ago from Southern Illinois

      You trace me !! Great

    • Enigmatic Me profile image

      7 years ago from East Coast Canada

      emblazoned on my mind

      a truer poet I doubt I will find...

      Another hit.. !!

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      Micky Dee 

      7 years ago

      So pretty, the words and thoughts that women have. Well- especially comparing to a cave man's (like me). Nice Blaise!

    • blaise25 profile imageAUTHOR

      Fehl Dungo 

      7 years ago from close to you...

      Honored to receive critiques from you Prof A :) You're exceptionally great! So glad for every word and comment you always leave on my hubs. Thanks a lot :) And thanks for reading my book ;)

      Hello Randy! Glad you loved that. :)

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      Randy Behavior 

      7 years ago from Near the Ocean

      "you trace me

      but can’t find

      what you lookin for"

      Ahhhh, love that.

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      Mentalist acer 

      7 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      Your poetry,I find,expects exception from another as you take exceptional expectation,"of thine own self be true"as it should be of yourself Fehl,my critique of "Toss and Turn.;)

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