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Lets duet

Updated on June 18, 2016


you insist a solo act,
i wish a duet.

"Be detached", you impose,
yet inspire me, to compose.

How should we perform,
and reform?

what should be done,
to make these contradictions undone.?

act in haste,
before its too late.

time and tide never waits,
decide before the music resides.

you, me,
or we.?

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      Hari Prasad S 11 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks surabhi.

      - hari

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      Surabhi Kaura 17 months ago

      This was woven aptly. Gracefully. I like Ravi Shankar's ...'Mile Sur Mera Tumhara'... used to sing back then. Don't we miss Doordarshan T.V. channel? Bring the old days back.

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      Hari Prasad S 17 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you devika.

      - hari

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      Devika Primić 17 months ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Beautiful and your message is great.

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      Hari Prasad S 18 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you Eric. :-)

      - hari

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      Hari Prasad S 18 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you jodah for your appreciation.

      -hari

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      Eric Dierker 18 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      I sure love a duet more than a solo act. Wonderful message wonderfully said.

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      John Hansen 18 months ago from Queensland Australia

      A simple but clear message.

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      Hari Prasad S 18 months ago from Bangalore

      Thanks ruby. Yes. Time is getting wasted by egos.

      :-)

      - hari

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 18 months ago from Southern Illinois

      I liked this. Time's wasting!

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      Hari Prasad S 18 months ago from Bangalore

      Vishnu sir, what an apt explaination.

      I in thee,

      Thee in me

      Maketh we.

      - hari

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      Hari Prasad S 18 months ago from Bangalore

      thank you bambi for visiting. Pl look into other ones as well.

      - Hari

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      Bambi 18 months ago

      N I C E.....

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      Vishnu 18 months ago

      First Independence and then Interdependence,both you/me and we are needed!

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      Hari Prasad S 18 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you so much siddharth for visit and appreciation.

      - Hari

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      Hari Prasad S 18 months ago from Bangalore

      Thank you manatita. Life is all about togetherness.

      - Hari

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      Siddharth Kapoor 18 months ago

      shprd74 - you are classy my friend. Good poem here.

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      manatita44 18 months ago from london

      Nice one. Why procrastinate. Time is eternal; yet Time is NOW. Let's sing together. Nice message and video.