Love is a Train

Audrey, having a postive outlook means so much. Thank you for sharing. Jamie

It certainly is though provoking Audrey. In just a few words you have awakened us!

Voted up, useful, awesome and beautiful.

Short and Sweet Audrey

I love the metaphor! This is one train we can't afford to miss. Lovely poem, beautifully done.

picture belies expectations aud

A lovely poem, beautifully written.

Very nice enjoyed your poem. Voted up.

A very lovely work here......sharing and votes all up.

Clean, sweet and beautiful! So well put together!

And yes my awesome Audrey your train always stay on track and it's a smooth pleasant ride. You have the heart and soul of a true poet too.

I am not a poe-it. I am a guy who just writes words.

You are a sublime writer indeed and hubbravo from the epi-man.

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This was great Audrey, a train, taking us where we want to go. Of course like Gypsy I'm hearing that song in my head!

Voted up and awesome.

Voted up and beautiful. Somewhere in the back of my mind I hear the words of the song, Love train, love train....

It is pretty. It reminds me of that old soul song, Love Train. You probably have no idea what I am talking about, and your poem is much more intellectual.

Very thought provoking, Audrey. Nice work. Have you checked out ePoetry yet? You should consider submitting some work :-)

Beautiful and cheaper than gas indeed :)

Sharing it across

Sweet, imaginative poetry, Audrey, and outstanding graphic. Thank you.

You do leave the door open & the track free for each passenger to see & board his/her own truth on that train you suggest, Audrey. Ingenious!

(Yours is not revealed!)

A very lovely and short poem that expresses so much !

Refreshing in every way, Audrey. Brief like a cleansing summer rain. Perfection...

I like it... thought-- provoking indeed

"In your smile i find my heart awake and ready to hold the hearts of others"

Indeed when we are in love we love the world and that train journey takes us a whole place.

Love the depth of this Audrey.

Thank you for this opportunity for reflection.

I agree....love can sometimes be overrated, because it can come and sometimes go just as quickly. A great share, Audrey.

Audrey,

Interesting metaphor. Love is train, but this train does not run smoothly, to lodge and dislodge passengers.

Riding into eternity, the tracks disappearing over the horizon, beckoning.

Mark

Everything has been said Audrey...that is what I love about poetry, sometimes less is more, and it certainly is here...loved it:-))

Love the closing stanza!..............and the cautionary note therein! An almost playful reminder that life is good, esp. considering the alternative---or the classic, "All good things cometh to he who waiteth, as long as he who waiteth worketh like hell while he waiteth". It's a gorgeous little poem Audrey, I'm just feeling playful. The bloody SUN is shining! We haven't seen it for three weeks, midnight last night was 5 degrees below zero, today it hailed hailstones about 3.8" diameter, then snowed furiously for two hours, now the sun is out. Spring, ha! Flowers. ha!

Quite a thought provoking and beautiful look at love, Audrey.

Indeed thought-provoking! Love is a train. As long as you stay in it, you will enjoy the ride.

Wonderful! Shared, pinned etc. 'ready to hold the hearts of others'....you will hold a lot of our hears with this poem, very affecting!

I do like the short and sweet ones. Great work.