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Love's Perfect storm

Updated on July 12, 2013

Love's Perfect Storm

Lightening strikes, Thunder calls.

See my eyes, as the rain falls.

Hand on heart, as it quakes.

The simplest touch, shiver and shake.

Tornado whirling, inside my head.

Take me now, forget the bed.

Open my flower, quench its thirst.

Gentle later, I want fast first.

Volcano eruption, orgasmic delight.

Not holding back, not going to fight.

Soft kisses, start the storm.

Erotic tides, loves passion born.

Hurricane winds, all around.

Love me now, love me abound.

Sexual fires, burning the flesh.

My body, your body begin to mesh.

Feed the hunger until nothings left.

Exhausted and glowing, finally at rest.


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      4elements 6 years ago

      Glad you liked it of my favorites

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      Scarface1300 6 years ago

      A great piece of writing...Thanks

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      4elements 6 years ago

      Thanks jaded. I actually wrote that when on my way home from new york

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      JadedLove 6 years ago

      It is always a beautiful feeling seeing you write. You still amaze me. So much more than up and beautiful, but that's what they allow. Awesome

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      Rodney Fagan 6 years ago from Johannesberg South Africa, The Gold Mine City

      From the other side

      that passionate hot rush

      that intense need

      that pleasant promise

      of slower


      more passionate


      .... later

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      4elements 6 years ago

      Thank you exotic queen. I do appreciate it. Blessings

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      ExoticHippieQueen 6 years ago

      Whooaaaaa, erotic, exotic, you've got it all goin' on, sistah! Your rhythm just flows oh so well. Your choice of words just perfect. Voted up and very awesome!

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      4elements 6 years ago

      Thank you all for comments. I do enjoy them

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      Ghaelach 6 years ago

      Hi 4elements.

      Seems to me you had a "Tsunami Explosion". Never mind a wirlwind or hurricane. When i sit back and think of all that went on the hair stands up on my arms. Wonderfull and up

      LOL Ghaelach

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      Karen A Szklany 6 years ago from New England

      Love it, especially "take me now, forget the bed." :0)

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      grace 6 years ago from india

      awesome :)