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Memories of Glass Mountain – Flash Fiction Poetry - Accepting a Writing Challenge

Updated on June 1, 2017
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Shyron is a retired Customer Service Rep. for Verizon. Colleges attended: Triton, Melrose Park, Illinois and Elgin, in Elgin, Illinois.

Glass Mountain in the town of Memories.
Glass Mountain in the town of Memories. | Source

The Challenge and the rules


A writers challenge by Bill Holland (a.k.a. billybuc)

  1. We must have the word Mountain in our title

  2. We must use the 4 photo and they must be used with the story

  3. Short story ….flash fiction…. No word limit …. No prequel… No sequel

  4. We choose the genre

  5. Publish the finished article by September 10th

Note to Bill: I hope you do not mind if I write in rhyme,

it is just easier for me to write in poetry.


Memories of Glass Mountain

© by Shyron Shenko


Stacy arrived at the old farm house as the memories came back to life

Both good and bad from ten years passed

When she lost her son Jay

With the memories of the mysteries buried there


In the shadows of Glass Mountain, she felt the chill of night air

Just as she had the day she went away

As she wondered, would she be able to stay?

Or would the memories of lost loves again drive her away?

Ten years ago to the day

Jay Stanton had been on death row for eight years

His son just one year old when he was sent away

For a crime he did not commit

But a crime for which he would dearly pay


Stacy arrived at the prison

On her weekly visitor’s day

To meet with her husband and both of them would pray

Jay’s execution was scheduled two weeks away


I bought a farm beneath Glass Mountain

Not too far away

It has a family grave yard, I can visit everyday

Where you can rest in peace and watch your son grow and play


The rusty old barn on the farm in the Town of Memories
The rusty old barn on the farm in the Town of Memories | Source

She said I bought the farm dirt cheap

Because of the grave yard hauntings

From the mysteries that it keeps

And thought it a fitting for you to sleep


The abandoned rail road yard in the town of Memories
The abandoned rail road yard in the town of Memories | Source

It has a rusty barn I hope to restore one day

And there is a rail road yard which is not too far

But we will not be disturbed by the abandoned Rails and Cars

Which is better than the cell and bar


The grave yard on the farm in the town of Memories
The grave yard on the farm in the town of Memories | Source

Someday we will buy a headstone

Stacy told her son, no need Jay Junior told his mom

In the rusty old barn there is one

And when they read the words both of them was stunned



An innocent man

Jay Stanton

Is resting here today

His wrongful conviction will be overturned come the judgement day


Jay Stanton was buried in the grave yard on the farm

With just his wife and son standing all alone

The only family he had ever known

Now he would be safe at home


The day after the headstone was placed

Stacy gazed out the window

Glass Mountain looked like a great white whale

Rising out of a sea of misty clouds


Jay Junior and two friends were playing near the rusty barn

When Stacy heard the rumble and the crack

Glass Mountain had broken open and the avalanche

Buried the rusty old barn and everything else in her sight


After they pulled two small bodies out of the snow and ice

Unrecognizable from the crushing blows where the ice cut like a knife

With no report of missing children

Both children were buried in the family grave yard


Beside herself with grief Stacy knew that she must leave

And find a comforting place to grieve

She returned almost every day

To tend the house, the yard and graves


Back to reality


Back to today

Back to today and the memories

With the melting ice and snow

The rusty old barn looked like it did before


Tonight as Stacy laid down to rest

A boy knelt beside the pallet on the floor

Wake up mom!

Come on mom, come with me to explore…

© 2016 Shyron E Shenko

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      Shyron E Shenko 5 weeks ago from Texas

      I don’t know where this is coming from, but it does not read like it is coming from my hub, it sounds more like it is coming from my question about the NFL/NBA taking a knee.

      I would say that 99% of cops are descent men and women.

      Athletes taking a knee has nothing to do with respect they simply found a venue to reach the largest number of people, these players care about money and causing chaos, they care nothing about anyone but themselves.

      What would Jesus say, He said it. In the verse where he talks about going into the closet closing the door to kneel and pray instead of pretending to pray in front of people so the people would think they are Virtuous/devout by TAKING a KNEE. I call that showboating.

      Everyone should protest brutality of any kind, but not in the venue the players chose.

      I will sleep very well, and maybe have a heart attack/stroke. I hope you are getting lots of rest yourself.

      Blessings to you also.

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      C E Clark 5 weeks ago from North Texas

      Today cops charge, try, and execute people all by themselves for minor things like a broken tail light or suspicion of some offense, and the people they execute never go home, never have the chance to say good-bye to loved ones, and when it happens it's a total shock and serious disruption to the victim's families. Who knew a broken tail light is a death penalty offense?

      Many people think cops conducting the death penalty on the spur of the moment for minor offenses doesn't matter because they believe it only happens to black folks, but the truth is, it happens to white folks sometimes too, but we only hear about it when a person of color is involved.

      Some people worry about disrespect to a piece of cloth that is printed to be a U.S. flag, and they worry that someone isn't properly respecting the U.S. anthem as it's played, caring nothing at all about the lives that are snuffed out so often over what are mostly trivial offenses when an offense is involved at all. The piece of cloth and the sound of the anthem are more important than life apparently, in some people's minds at least.

      Wonder what Jesus would say? Wonder if He would agree that honoring the flag and the anthem are more important than cops snuffing out lives just for the heck of it?

      So all is well with tiny minds; so long as they have their free speech, no one else's matters. Let the whole world die for nothing so long as they are people of color dying, but don't disrespect their flag or their anthem!

      If a broken tail light deserves the death penalty, how much more so disrespecting the national anthem and the flag? Would that these miscreants who object to being killed over a mere traffic stop could be killed twice as they deserve, for not standing when the anthem is played as has been the tradition at football games since 2009. A very long tradition indeed!

      And so the tradition of killing people of color simply because their skin has color -- something they didn't choose, goes on. But at least the more important things are still sacred, honoring the cloth that depicts our flag, and honoring a song that happens to be the U.S. anthem that can be played over and over again, any time anywhere.

      Truth is, white folks are killed a lot more often than anyone realizes for these same offenses or non-offenses, but it just isn't publicized very often.

      What will it finally take for people to put these things in logical perspective and to end the senseless murders by cops? What will it take for white folks to understand that the right of free speech belongs to Americans of all colors and not only to white Americans? And that right is not their personal right alone, but the right of all Americans? The price of that right is sometimes seeing or hearing things a person may not agree with or like hearing/seeing.

      Much as I dislike people disrespecting our flag or our anthem, I dislike, indeed, downright hate cops abusing their authority and beating up or killing people of any color for minor offenses -- or worse, simply for existing. It is the job of judges and juries to determine guilt, and punishment if guilt is determined, NOT the job or even the license of cops.

      Anyone who can't do the policing job fairly and correctly should not be a cop. Vetting for the job of cop should be stringent and thorough, but if someone is discovered to be incapable of doing their job without abusing their authority as a law enforcer, they should be permanently removed from law enforcement.

      In our enlightened day there should be no one receiving the death penalty when they are not guilty of something truly heinous. Personally, I dislike the death penalty for any reason, but it if is to be utilized, then every effort should first be made to be absolutely certain the person receiving that punishment is guilty of the charges against them. And not of merely driving with a broken tail light or for driving while black or brown.

      Hope all is well with you Shyron and that you are managing to get your sleep. I've read that people who don't get their sleep are at much higher risk of stroke and heart attack. Promise you, the work will wait. There are no elves that will sneak in while you're sleeping and do the work for you, so you can rest assured it will be there when you get around to it. So make sure to get your rest so you have the energy to do all that work in the first place.

      Blessings dear friend . . .

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      Shyron E Shenko 11 months ago from Texas

      Ann, thank you so very much for the comment and compliment, I do appreciate you so very much.

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      Ann Carr 11 months ago from SW England

      I missed this one but I'm so glad I found it just now! It's amazing! Well done you for responding in rhyme, Shyron. You do that so well. The story was compelling and the ending unexpected! Excellent.

      Ann

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      Shyron E Shenko 11 months ago from Texas

      Devika, thank you for the comment. I don't like winter it makes me so sad, it was miserable in Illinois, here in Texas it is cold but not as bad. I hope you are well an happy.

      Blessings always my friend

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      Devika Primić 12 months ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Hi Shryon, it is the beginning of winter and has been cold. I try to keep up with my daily walks when its cold. I prefer it then. Hope you keeping well!

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      Shyron E Shenko 12 months ago from Texas

      Patricia, thank you for the comment, and compliment and a special thank you for the Angels.

      Blessings and hugs my dear friend.

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      Patricia Scott 12 months ago from sunny Florida

      Poetry composition to me is a mystery...a gift I do not possess. Clearly you have THE gift...what a lovely, heartfelt story you wove as the words captivated me from beginning to end.

      Well done.

      Angels are once again on the way to you ps

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      Shyron E Shenko 13 months ago from Texas

      Marie, thank you for the compliment and comment, I really appreciate you.

      Blessings and hugs my dear friend.

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      truthfornow 13 months ago from New Orleans, LA

      Love the way you told a story with a poem. Really beautiful, full of love, sweet and sad all at the same time.

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Kallini2010, thank you from the bottom of my heart for your comment, compliment, and your wonderful interpretation of my poem.

      I am a logophile, so my love of words help me with poetry, my mom wrote poetry and so did my grandfather, that is what attracted my grandmother to my grandfather was his poetic nature, she use to tell us about a poem he said in 3rd grade, his teacher's name was Miss Blodgett, and my grandfather wrote "a little mouse ran up the stairs to hear Miss Blodgett say her prayers" and the other kids were laughing and passing it around and the teacher got the poem and read it aloud to the class. Keep in mind that was a time when teachers were allowed to strike a child on the hand with a ruler for misbehaving. She call my grandfather up in front of the class and told him if he did not make up another one that good he would be punished, and he promptly said "here I stand before Miss Blodgett, she's gonna strike and I will dodge it."

      I think that I could guess what you theory is as to why the mountain is called Glass Mountain, and that is as it should be because it was meant for anyone reading it to interpret it any way the like.

      Blessings and hugs my friend.

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      kallini2010 14 months ago from Toronto, Canada

      Hello Shyron:

      Coming straight from Zodiac to your somber poem. I loved your check marks, I love symbols for their visuality. I also like words for their malleability and twistity.

      I also love that you write poetry so easily, for me, it's a struggle - both to write and to understand.

      I have "a manual" on poetry - a, sort of, textbook aptly called "Literature. An Introduction to Fiction, Poetry, and Drama" in all its short 2,030 pages all in one volume. Absolutely marvelous.

      That's where I learned that "poetry is what poets write" (I can't argue with that) and that it is recommended to read only one poem per day for poetry is more than mere words strung together, poetry is like an abstract painting calling for contemplation and interpretation.

      What struck me in your Mountainous Poem is the emphasis on impermanence (mind you, it's my interpretation). Everybody dies no matter justly or not, sooner or later, happy life or otherwise, living on a farm being dirt poor or being filthy rich and living on the top of the mountain.

      And, of course, I have my own theory as to why the mountain is Glass Mountain, but that's my poem - an impression without expression.

      Cheers,

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Devika, thank you for the comment and for taking the time to visit, I know how hard it is to find time when you are working to be on the computer. I have outside work to do, I use to love cutting the grass, but this year it has become a drag.

      When does your winter begin?

      Blessings and take care dear friend.

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      Devika Primić 14 months ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Awesome! I have been busy with my summer job. An amazing write and most thoughtful.

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Kim, thank you for the compliment, and comments. I really appreciate you.

      Blessings and Hugs my dear friend

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      ocfireflies 14 months ago from North Carolina

      Shyron,

      How you rose to the challenge and then some. Thank you for bringing the story to a happier reality. Beautiful work my friend and so creatively presented.

      Blessings Always,

      Kim

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Emese, thank you so very much for the compliment, and comment I do appreciate you.

      I am thrilled that you liked my poetic story.

      Blessings my friend.

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Thank you Larry, I appreciate you.

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      Larry Rankin 14 months ago from Oklahoma

      Always interesting.

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      EmeseRéka 14 months ago from The Desert

      Wow. This definitely has to be one of my favorites. Great story, totally unexpected (for me at least), told in verse, it is just beautiful. I feel so lucky that I had the opportunity to read it! Thank you for the experience.

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Martie, thank you for the comment and compliment, I do appreciate you and so glad you stopped by to read my rhyming story.

      Blessings and hugs: '\:~)

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      Martie Coetser 14 months ago from South Africa

      Oh my, what a gripping sad story. Quite successful in rhyme. Blessings to you, Shyron :)

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Ok, good night, I have to go to bed also, we have a big day tomorrow, Hubby going to a sleep lab for the sleep apnea test and we have a lot to do before we go.

      Blessings

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      shanmarie 14 months ago

      Sweet of you to offer, Shryon. I didn't know there was a difference between a text capsule and a link capsule, actually. I never differentiated before. I simply add the links. All I know is they were there this morning and then gone and when I tried to fix it, they disappeared again. I'm just perplexed. But I've got more important things to stress over if I'm gonna stress. LOL. I'm going to go to bed, I think, and maybe figure it out in the morning.

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Shan, I just went back to your hub and it is not niched but you are right the list is still there. Did you accidently put them in a text capsule instead of a "Link capsule." If not that is strange.

      How can I help? Let me know.

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      shanmarie 14 months ago

      I don't know. . .Maybe. The list of other entries is still there, but the links won't stick. I tried to add them back and they still didn't stay.

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Shan, I am sorry to hear your links disappeared, did HP niche your entry? I read somewhere they snip links.

      Blessings and (((hugs)))

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      shanmarie 14 months ago

      All my links to the other hubs disappeared? How do they just unlink themselves?????

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Frank, thank you for the compliments and comment... I am absolutely thrilled that you were blown away. All the stories are amazing, I hope you have the time to read them all and I hope you will take up the challenge also.

      Blessings and hugs.

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Au fait, thank you my dear friend for the compliments and comments. I looked to see if you comment went somewhere else and no it was not somewhere else. No I did not think about my comment having to be approved, I guess I am just too tired to think about it.

      It did not rain here and that made it really nice to cut grass, the air was cool and it cloudy. I hope you were not caught in the rain showers and I hope all is well with you.

      Blessings and hugs dear friend.

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      Frank Atanacio 14 months ago from Shelton

      Shyron.. simply blown away... amazing entry to this challenge so glad I am catching up.. again amazing :)

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      C E Clark 14 months ago from North Texas

      Well done as always. I don't know what I could possibly add that everyone hasn't already said many times. You do have a way of coming up with interesting unusual stories too. You really need to write a book.

      Thought I had already commented on this. I'm sure I read it before, so why didn't I leave a comment?

      Regarding the disappearing comment you mentioned on my recent effort, you remember that my comments are on approval, right? They won't be visible until I approve them.

      Hope you were inside during our rain showers and that all is well with you both. Congratulations on another excellent story poem. Sharing of course. Blessings and hugs for you dear friend. Take care . . .

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      Genna Logan 14 months ago

      Yesterday, I put a commentary on here and it disappeared. Whaat gives? Guests can't leave commentary?

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Dear Suzette, thank you so very much for the comment, and compliment, I am overwhelmed. Yes Bill will have a really tough time choosing one entry out of all the one that entered and I did not find and that was an absolute no, I would not be able to choose, I loved everyone.

      Blessings my friend.

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Chitrangada, thank you so very much for the compliment and comment, I do appreciate you. You answer to Bill's challenge was super and I have no idea how he will be able to choose, when everyone I have read is so good.

      Blessings my friend

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      Suzette Walker 14 months ago from Taos, NM

      Beautiful story and poem. I like your take on Bill's challenge. He is going to have a tough time choosing just one as "winner" because everyone I have read is a winner.

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      Chitrangada Sharan 14 months ago from New Delhi, India

      Telling a story through a poem is a unique talent and you have done it so beautifully.

      I loved the twists , the way you weaved your words to include all the photo prompts and I thoroughly enjoyed your response.

      Thanks for sharing this creative response!

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Oh my! Jay, thank you for letting me know, I have fixed it and feel so bad because it is such an important part of the story/poem. Thank you for bringing it to my attention.

      I Love You too.

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Flourish, thank you for the comment.

      In my mind I was thinking the boys were imaginary except for her son Jay, or maybe two boys hiked up the mountain and died and froze and came down with the avalanche, their bodies could have been preserved for years.

      Blessings and hugs dear friend

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      J.J. 14 months ago

      is the same one you read to when I talked to you? it is missing a paragraph, I think.

      love jay

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      FlourishAnyway 14 months ago from USA

      I like that you used poetry to tell your story. It left me wondering about the identity of the two small bodies and why no one had reporting missing children.

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Dear Maria, thank you so much for the comment and compliment. I do appreciate you.

      Blessings and hugs my beautiful friend.

      Love Shyron

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Shauna, thank you for the comment and compliment, I appreciate you so very much.

      I think you could imagine it either way, but I was thinking that she was so deep in her sorrow that she made her pallet on the floor went to sleep forever and remember that she had only one son, and the other two boys could have been the ghost of two boys who died on the mountain and their bodies frozen in the ice and snow and came down in the avalanche, maybe her son died in it and his ghost came to welcome his mom to their heavenly home. Or maybe it was a child who thought it was his mother sleeping on the pallet when he could not see her face.

      Blessings and hugs dear friend

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Dana, thank you so much for the comment and the compliment, I really appreciate you.

      Blessings and hugs my friend.

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Audrey, thank you so much for the thumbs up, and for the comment and compliment. I really appreciate you. Blessings and hugs dear friend. P.S. my grandson plans to do the same job as you.

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Nell, I really appreciate that you loved my story in rhyme. Thank you for the comment. Blessings and hugs my friend.

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      Maria Jordan 14 months ago from Jeffersonville PA

      Dear Shyron,

      This is the first poetic response I've read for Bill's challenge.

      You have pulled my heart strings - and Merle Haggard was the perfect song selection.

      Beautiful interpretation! Love, Maria

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      Shauna L Bowling 14 months ago from Central Florida

      Shyron, poetry is definitely your strong suit. You manage to tell a story that flows rhythmically. This is a sad one and very well done.

      Tell me, was Mama dreaming or did her dead children come back to ease her broken heart?

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      Dana Tate 14 months ago from LOS ANGELES

      Very creative work Shyron. I loved the poetic flow which added a nice twist to this story.

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      Audrey Hunt 14 months ago from Nashville Tn.

      What an amazing story this is! As I read one line I couldn't wait for the next one. Like a good book that you can't put down. I truly enjoyed your creative piece of flash fiction.

      A big thumbs up my friend!

      Audrey

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      Nell Rose 14 months ago from England

      That was awesome! I love the way you did the story in poetry, and the different twists and turns too, loved it!

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Thank you John for the comment and compliment. I appreciate you.

      Blessings always my friend

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      John Hansen 14 months ago from Queensland Australia

      A very unique poetic response to the challenge, Shyron. Quite a touching story in verse.

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Dear beautiful Faith/Theresa, thank you for the comment and compliment. So glad you like my story.

      Blessings and Hugs dear friend

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Paula, thank you for the awesome comment. I really appreciate you.

      Blessings, and Peace to you also.

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Shan, thank you for the 'Wow' I really appreciate you. Blessings and hugs my friend.

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Ruby, Ruby, my gem of a friend

      Rhyme your words

      And make them blend

      You have such a good flow

      That much I know

      Words entwined to make stories grow

      From all the beautiful seed of emotion you sow.

      Blessings and hugs to you my gem of a friend.

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Bill, thank you for the comment. I am glad you liked that I wrote this in rhyme.

      All the awesome stories I have read so far is going to make it very difficult to choose a winner. How do you choose? I think I would just give each writer a number in a hat and choose one that way.

      Blessings my friend.

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      Faith Reaper 14 months ago from southern USA

      Dear Shyron,

      What an amazingly beautiful submission to the challenge, talented lady!

      This is refreshingly different and superbly creative.

      Bravo

      (((Hugs)))

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Mike, thank you so much for the compliment and comment.

      I am glad you found it also.

      Blessings always my friend

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      Paula 14 months ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

      Shyron.....I am in awe of this beautiful poem. Never expected such an impact of emotion! All I can do is sigh and close my eyes in silence. Your work is amazing. Peace, Paula

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      shanmarie 14 months ago

      Wow! I really don't know what else to say about this one. I'm in awe.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 14 months ago from Southern Illinois

      Shyron, your story written in rhyme is beautiful. I still want to rhyme every word I write.

      Your work of poetry is so very fine

      Sadness and heartache gets me every time

      To die for a crime you did not do

      Was a reality for blacks as segregation grew

      Now they're being freed, but only a few

      Most of them died innocent and alone

      Without a chance of ever going home.

      Hugs and blessings my friend

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      Bill Holland 14 months ago from Olympia, WA

      Do I mind that you wrote in rhyme? I'm in awe that you did so. My goodness gracious, this one is a serious contender. File this under a job well done, and thank you so much, my friend.

      blessings always

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      mckbirdbks 14 months ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      Hello Shy - What a great contribution. Your muse returned flying her colors. So glad I found this.

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      Shyron E Shenko 14 months ago from Texas

      Sis! I have missed you, what a surprise you are the first one to comment.

      Thank you for the compliment.

      Blessings and (((Hugs))) to you my dear friend and sis.

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      Jo_Goldsmith11 14 months ago

      Really enjoyed this Sis. I was so captivated and I really felt the thoughtful interpretation of the way you penned this challenge. Amazing work my friend. As always you soar! Blessings & hugs! ***** five Stars~