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My Bravest Mask

Updated on March 31, 2011

Stripped of all disguise

as i see my own reflection

the image of you in my eyes

your memory enshrined in my heart

your scent engraved in my senses

i feel betrayed by my own veil,

my bravest mask of deception

the moan in silent cries

the pain of dying laughter

the sorrow in my waning smile

now i dont want to stare still

and watch fate my own grave till

and i dont want to look away

to banish the doubt and fear

if only in my thoughts, please stay..


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      h.a.chauhdary 6 years ago from Australia

      @ mislee.. i am absolutely speechless !!

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      misslee 6 years ago from Beverly Hills, CA

      I read this over and over again to myself outloud, I simply have no criticism, it feels like perfection to me, I anxiously await your next peice...

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      h.a.chauhdary 6 years ago from Australia

      yea, i like the pic too. =)

      thank you so much no_clue and bella!!

      @mistress of spice: yea we all live behind a facade it seems.

      i will definitely go through your hubs. thanks

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      Mistress of Spice 6 years ago from uk uae

      oh lovely, i like this status...we all do wear a mask sometimes inour lives...well done...gr8t hub...enjoy

      Mistress of spice..


      ps stop by and read some of my hub topic...lemme know how u feell..

      tc chatmore...

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Very great piece of art here H.

      voted Up and awesome...


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      No_Clue 6 years ago

      I felt this! Great write, pic is perfect!