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My Confession (Redux)

Updated on April 20, 2013

My Confession

K.S., where ever you may be at this moment, know that I miss you and think of you. <3


Take a walk with me, not so far from here

And the wind whispers softly, as the sun warms the soul.

I will miss your smile, the eyes that look inside.

I was broken, but now a little more whole.


Pass it on, give it away.

It’s all you’ve got just for today.

A little peace, a sense of serenity.

I know you feel it, you belong.

The weight is lifted, feeling strong.

I hope our paths do cross.

I hope it’s not too long.

Til I see you again.


The hardest part to say, what you meant to me.

The hardest thing to do, to walk away from you.

Tomorrow’s uncertain, I scream internally.

Wishing time had healed, a hurt inside,

And all my plans had worked, for you and me.


Pass it on, give it away.

It’s all you’ve got just for today.

A little peace, a sense of serenity.

I know you feel it, you belong.

The weight is lifted, feeling strong.

I hope our paths do cross.

I hope it’s not too long.

Til I see you again


I would hold your hand, I would lend an ear.

And I can tell you everything that I thought none would want to hear.

Share the feeling, voice may quiver. Put the past where it should stay.

When your life has brought you sorrow.

Start it over, brand new day.


Pass it on, give it away.

It’s all you’ve got just for today.

A little peace, a sense of serenity.

I know you feel it, you belong.

The weight is lifted, feeling strong.

I hope our paths do cross.

I hope it’s not too long.

Til I see you again.


© June 2009 A. Haworth (Original)

Copyright June 2011 Beth100(Revised with refrain for HubPages)


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      Beth100 2 years ago from Canada

      Astra Nomik - Thank you very much for your lovely words. :) I love to write poetry when I have the time.... I suppose I should just make the time. Thank you for taking your time to stop by.

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      Cathy Nerujen 3 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Beth, this is a lovely poem. Very moving and so evocative. You write wonderful poetry. You write with emotion and from the heart. I like your style. Thank you for sharing.

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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      My Confession, I was so interested in this title and you wrote this with such great meaning.

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      Beth100 4 years ago from Canada

      Hi Denise!! Thank you so much. The lyrics are put to a song. :). Hope you are well. xox

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      truthfornow 4 years ago from New Orleans, LA

      Love this poem, very moving and you can feel the emotion. Sad but hopeful.

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      Denise Handlon 4 years ago from North Carolina

      Beautiful poem, Beth. Thanks so much for sharing it. It reads like lyrics to a song-ever think of putting it to music? Rated UP/Beautiful-like you. Hugs.

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      Beth100 5 years ago from Canada

      Rolly A Chabot -- Hi Rolly!! First, a big HUG!! :) Thank you for your wonderful comment. I hope that all is well with you. I hear that it's begun to snow there.... I saw snow here last week but it melted away quickly. I am sure it will be arriving any day soon. :) xo

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      Rolly A Chabot 5 years ago from Alberta Canada

      Hi Beth... lovely as always... you do have a way with words... thank you for sharing this with us...

      Hugs from Alberta

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      Beth100 5 years ago from Canada

      Just Ask Susan -- Thank you. :) This is why I love writing poetry. Reminds me how to feel life. :)

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      Beth100 5 years ago from Canada

      Kwade Tweeling -- Thank for you stopping in and reading. I'm glad that you enjoyed this.

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      Beth100 5 years ago from Canada

      tsmog -- Thank you! I am enjoying myself, and thank you for mentioning my gluten free articles. :) Like you, I am going to have some fun this weekend! :) Enjoy yours! Thank you for dropping by!

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      Susan Zutautas 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      A beautiful poem filled with so much emotion.

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      kwade tweeling 5 years ago from USA

      Thank you for sharing.

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      Tim Mitchell 5 years ago from Escondido, CA

      First, thanks barbergirl28 for sharing opening a door. Thank you Beth100 for sharing these sentiments further opening that door. The poem, for me is reflected reading the comments, which allowed me to see old friends. A neat feeling. And, thank you again for the gluten free hubs. Remember to smile and have fun, fun, fun, , ,

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      Beth100 5 years ago from Canada

      Barbergirl28 -- Thank you! I'm glad that you stopped by. :)

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      Stacy Harris 5 years ago from Hemet, Ca

      That was beyond beautiful and very strong. Loved it!

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      Beth100 5 years ago from Canada

      ExquisiteExtacy - Thank you! :)

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      Beth100 5 years ago from Canada

      vanillavelvet -- Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it. :)

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      Beth100 5 years ago from Canada

      RNMSN - Thank you for coming by and reading. In a way, it is sad that this fits your life, but in a way, good because I have achieved what I aimed to. I hope that the next one is a forever one. :)

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      Beth100 5 years ago from Canada

      Wayne -- I think that we have all had this happen at least once in our lifetimes. Sad, but it is only a small fraction of what makes us who we are. Thank you!

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      Vijay Anand Baree Sunnyasi 5 years ago from Perth

      beautiful poem

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      Angela Hart 5 years ago

      Beautiful Beth!

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      Beth100 5 years ago from Canada

      James -- Thank you! I love your lyrics! Too bad I can`t hear you sing them! :)

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      Beth100 6 years ago from Canada

      Stephen Kalu -- Thank you! Poetry is always written from the heart, at least for me! :)

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      Barbara Bethard 6 years ago from Tucson, Az

      this touched my heart because it fits my life...it is beautiful

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      Beth100 6 years ago from Canada

      MPM - Yes, it was a big OUCH, a bit of an unexpected one, but I guess we don't really ever "expect" it. Thank you... it always helps me to write and the days go forward, as with life. :) I'm well, and hope you are too! xox

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      Beth100 6 years ago from Canada

      Dusty -- Thank you!!! Spreading smiles is a favorite past time of mine. :) Hope you're well!

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      Wayne Brown 6 years ago from Texas

      I had one or two of those "partings" in my single days. Ultimately, it was the right thing but I sure did want it to go the other way. Nice work! WB

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      James A Watkins 6 years ago from Chicago

      Thank you for this lovely poem. It strikes me like it might be song lyrics (of which I have written quite a few). I enjoyed your creative talents. Well done! :-)

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      Beth100 6 years ago from Canada

      Steven -- I'm alright. :) This was written a while back, and thought I'd share it. I'm glad you liked it. xo

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      stephen kalu 6 years ago from Nigeria

      A wonderful poem from a wonderful heart.

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      manlypoetryman 6 years ago from (Texas !) Boldly Writing Poems Where No Man Has Gone Before...

      Ouch...A Heartfelt Poem of the long wait till we see the ones that we miss...once again. It is hard for words to help a loss, but you did a great job with this...with words. Peace to you in the pain of your loss.

      "When your life has brought you sorrow.

      Start it over, brand new day."

      A Powerful line. I hope these words that you said in your poem help...if even in a small way...to bring you some small peace with your loss. God Bless!

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      50 Caliber 6 years ago from Arizona

      Beth a very applicable piece that can widely fit a life open to spreading smiles and good will, I expect it will fit most folks from a variety of angles, I voted it up and awesome as it made me reflect a bit and I think I'll read it a few more times, thanks! dusty

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      Beth100 6 years ago from Canada

      Mtsi -- This was written a couple of years ago. I've kept it with a number of other pieces. Life is about moving forward, and this is what I do. I'm glad that you enjoyed this.

      Thanks Mtsi, for always supporting me. I appreciate your thoughts and enjoy your visits. Hope to see you soon! xo (is the top down yet?)

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      Beth100 6 years ago from Canada

      Husky -- Thank you. This is a very "dear to my heart" piece. :)

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      Steven Escareno 6 years ago

      Wow, I had no idea that you that anything like this happened to you to where you loss someone close to you. I guess it's my own fault for keeping out of touch for so long. However, it sounds like you are trying to move on, and I hope that you'll be okay. As always, you've written a well presented hub, and one that definitely speaks from the heart. Thanks for writing this, as I enjoyed reading it.

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      mtsi1098 6 years ago

      Hi beth - this certainly sounds like you are trying to heal yourself and are on your way. I sincerely hope all is well and this piece is well written...thanks

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      Husky1970 6 years ago

      Beautiful and very moving. I'm sure it is very personal to you but anyone can read this and relate it to themselves somehow. Your hub elicited an emotional feeling for me and probably for anyone else who has read it. Well done. Voted up and beautiful.