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41 "A Star Fell"- (a poem)

Updated on April 12, 2012

Short and sweet.


A Star Fell

One evening I was down by the sea,

When I saw something and was going to flee.

A star from the heavens fell and gave me a start,

It fell to earth and landed in my heart.

A bright fallen star is what you are,

Where you landed was not too far.

You descended from the sky so blue,

I picked you up, and then I fell for you.

Your shining was with a love so very bright,

I fell in love with you on that very night.

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    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Magic, Thank you for the visit and comment and I am glad you enjoyed. Greg

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      magic69 

      6 years ago

      Like your poem very nice words

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi BMax, Thank you. The lady just gives me great inspiration. Greg

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      BeyondMax 

      6 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Breathtaking poem, love your style, it flows from the heart, amazing!

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Lady, Thank you very much. I hope to see you around a lot. Greg

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      Joanna Chandler 

      6 years ago from On planet Earth

      Awesome poetry :) i love your style. See me round more often.

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Jo, Thank you for the comment and inspiration. Greg

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      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Stessily, Thank you. I can say that this falling star has brightened my path. Greg

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      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Shady, Thank you. I guess when we are married we tend to let the thoughts slip a little. I know that they appreciate it once in a while. That goes both ways too. Thank you for the vote too. Greg

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 

      6 years ago from Lincolnshire, U.K

      Gregas, this was simply beautiful.

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      stessily 

      6 years ago

      gregas, So, so beautiful, sparkling with love. Catching a falling star is definitely rewarding. Thank you for sharing this heartfelt tribute.

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      mrshadyside1 

      6 years ago from Georgia

      You know,even the simple things can be profound when they come from the soul.I need to tell my wife how special she is,thanks for the reminder.Voted up.

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      6 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Sweethearts, Thank you for the visit and comment. It sounded correct to me. And she is absolutely my inspiration. Greg

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      sweethearts2 

      6 years ago from Northwest Indiana

      Precious discription of falling in love. - Reminds me of a song

      "Find a falling star and put it in your pocket - save it for a rainy day." (I hope I remember it correctly)

      Love in your heart doesn't allow room for pain and hate.

      Here's to your inspiration.

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      cleaner3 

      6 years ago from Pueblo, Colorado

      Great poem

      I have a previous good friend

      his name is Greg, too

      Now i have two good friends named Greg

      but I am only following you

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      7 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Prasetio, Again, thank you for the kind comment. I hope you read and enjoy more hubs. Greg

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      prasetio30 

      7 years ago from malang-indonesia

      Beautiful poem. Thanks for writing and share with us. You are very talented. I am glad to know this from you. Have a good day! Cheers....

      Prasetio

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      7 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Gypsy, It's a beautiful star and not only on the surface. Thank you for the comment. Greg

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      Greg Schweizer 

      7 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Charlu, thank you for the comment. Greg

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 

      7 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Super poem. Could already see that star. Reading your poem actually made me sigh, so beautiful.

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      Charlu 

      7 years ago from Florida

      What a wonderful poem and so sweet.

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      7 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi LR, thank you for the comment and compliment. I have someone that is a great inspiration for everything I do, especially when dealing with the heart. Greg

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      Alysia McAlister 

      7 years ago from Arizona

      you have the sweetest poetry I've ever seen..

    • gregas profile imageAUTHOR

      Greg Schweizer 

      7 years ago from Corona, California.

      Hi Alastar, than you for the comment. Actually, no there is nothing more divine than the love I receive from that star. Greg

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      Alastar Packer 

      7 years ago from North Carolina

      A love from the heavens; could anything be more divine.

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