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My Heart Can Tell a Story

Updated on April 3, 2011

My Heart Can Tell a Story

Have you ever listened intently to the beat of your heart and how it changes between various emotions. My heart beats so fast when I know he is on his way and then settles with contentment with the sound of his wonderful voice. I believe that so much is locked in our hearts and there it will stay forever in this life and in lives to come. Once we have loved, truly loved, that love will remain with us forever more.


My Heart Can Tell a Story


Listening to my heart

Yearning for your touch

No need for me to worry

You are here with me so much


You have promised to love me

And I really know you do

You need my love so badly

Just as I need you


My heart can tell a story

Of our love through the years

We’ve come so very far

Through the laughter and the tears


My heart always knows

And forever seeks to be

The place to keep our love safe

Secured for you and me


A heart can tell so much

Its beats will let us know

If there are any problems

About our love will show


But our love has no problems

It goes from strength to strength

We are locked in love together

And rarely at arm’s length


Our hearts will beat together

Until the end of time

Such is our perfect love

Your love and mine


You want to hold me closely

And tell me we’ll never part

I believe you so much my darling

And have done from the start


I know that I am lucky

To have found a love like this

It’s as though I am in Heaven

And achieved perfect bliss


Our hearts will beat as one

Forever and a day

Nothing will steal our love

We’ll forever stay this way

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      Darlene Sabella 6 years ago from Hello, my name is Toast and Jam, I live in the forest with my dog named Sam ...

      So beautiful may sweet friend, I can here the heart beat of the world, and we need more of people just like you to fill it with love. Rate up love & peace darski

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks Darski hope you are better. This world needs love and so much of it - I know we can make a difference.

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      Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      ...and the beat goes on,in harmony,lovely acaetnna.;)

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      The beat is pure ecstasy - thank you Mentalist Acer.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Ah yes indeed - Mentalist Acer!

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      WillStarr 6 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

      Lovely sentiments and the sort of words a man loves to hear from his bride.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Wow thanks Will xx

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      Pamela Oglesby 6 years ago from United States

      Beautiful poetry with the special connection of true love.

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      aware 6 years ago from West Palm Beach Florida.

      intense . for sure.

      Ray

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      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      You have an incredible gift of writing, my friend.

      In fact, I have a mission - to study more of your writing about your very special relationship, because, you see, I have really struggled to put mine into writing. I mean, how do you put 32 years together, some 11,0000 days of happiness into words?

      In other words, I can write about everything (and usually do). In fact, as if you didn't notice, it's kinda' hard to shut me up.

      But I have ten thousand reasons I cherish my Robin, and every time I try to write about her I end up with the proverbial waste basket full of crumpled papers. Every clever poem, prose, and fancy writing just fails in comparison.

      I'm at a loss, so, again, I'll follow you my friend, and thanks to your inspiring prose, I will get it right ... someday.

      Thanks so much, my friend. I'm a fan of yours!!! =)

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      shimmering Dawn 6 years ago

      That is some special relationship and words that flows smoothly from the heart... I can relate to that... that vibrant energy that keeps you going. Wonderful poetry Acaetnna....keep the poetry flowing :)

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      I appreciate your words Pamela, thank you.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks Ray.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Bbnix thank you for your remarkable comment. I am so pleased that you have been blissfully together for 32 years, just how wonderful is that. Just carry on remaining in such happiness and don't try too hard with your words. Just let the words flow onto the screen and organise them into verses. Robin will simply love it for sure. Good luck.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Shimmering Dawn thank you. I am so happy that you can relate to my words. To experience such love is incredible isn't it.

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      Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

      ooh, that was beautiful, May you always feel the same way, (forever and a day)

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      Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

      You are like an ocean of love. So sweet! ^_^

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Dim Flaxenwick thank you. I know I will!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      That sounds lovely, thank you Freya.

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      Genna East 6 years ago from Massachusetts, USA

      This lovely poem reminded me of the joy and love I saw in my son when he married the love of his life only recently. Beautiful.

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      Sharon Smith 6 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      This is so beautiful. It is an inspiration to me to begin a new path. I desire to feel this way and unfortunately do not . . . I realize I need to change directions from where my life is today. Thank you for the boost!

      Sharyn

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Genna thank you so much. I so hope that your son's marriage will be as happy and as fulfilled as mine. I am sure that it will be.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Sharyn's Slant Thank you so much for your lovely comment. Yes from today begin a new path and really believe that you will achieve your dream. I am such a firm believer in the power of thought. Good luck and I hope you'll let me know how you get on!

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      Kathi 6 years ago from Saugatuck Michigan

      Yes, you truly are lucky and blessed, both of you...I am so happy for you...keep sharing the love and joy

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Fossillady thank you so much. Yes I know that I am lucky and am completely blessed.

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      Website Examiner 6 years ago

      Acaetnna, you have done it again! May I nominate you as the rock star of love poetry on HubPages; unsurpassed by none. I loved the energy and rhythm flowing from this poem, from your introuction, and from the well-selected images.

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      mckbirdbks 6 years ago from Emerald Wells, Just off the crossroads,Texas

      What a nice spell your words cast upon those that chance to read them.

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      alberich 6 years ago

      Lovely and Beautiful! Rating up!!Take Care of Love!

      BlessYou!!!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Wow thank you Website Examiner that is quite an award and I am very appreciative of your nomination. I do as always appreciate you taking the time to read my poetry and leaving comments. Thank you again.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Mckbirdbks I appreciate that, thank you so much.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Alberich thank you. That is so kind of you.

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      alberich 6 years ago

      I wish I had your feeling!

      Love!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Alberich you will. Just focus your mind and truly believe and then love will come your way. Try it - I did/do and it works. You just need a little patience!

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      alberich 6 years ago

      I know I just like it to be difficult an absolutely perfect.

      Hug!

      ;-)

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      Augustine A Zavala 6 years ago from Texas

      The heart is an organ, but it's also our strongest muscle. It's a vessel that can hold in anything, or pour out everything. Thank you for sharing.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I love this. Your love shines through. Your poetry is beautiful. Bless you .

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Alberich - it will be!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      A.A. Zavala you are so right. Without a heart we are nothing. Glad you popped by, thank you.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Always exploring, thank you. I always appreciate your visits and uplifting comments.

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      StricktlyDating 6 years ago from Australia

      That's one of the most beautiful love poems I've ever read! Well done!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Oh wow Stricktlydating that is so very kind of you.

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      BrdFlwh 6 years ago

      cute poem...

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      BrdFlwh, thanks.

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      Susan Haze 6 years ago from Sunny Florida

      Beautiful poem, so full of felling. How lucky you are to have a love such as this.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks KoffeeKlatch Gals, I know that I am indeed fortunate.

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      MarionAnn 6 years ago from Vancouver Island, BC

      I love your poetry, we all need more love and the world needs love. Thank you for sharing your beauitful words.

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      Helen Murphy Howell 6 years ago from Fife, Scotland

      Beautiful poem. It must be so hard to touch a cord when there is so many love poems around. But your poetry does just that - really beautiful. Hope you don't mind, but I've 'tweeted' this to a friend in the North of Scotland whose daughter gets married very soon and I know for a fact that both Mum and daughter will adore this poem. Many thanks for sharing.

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      Annette Donaldson 6 years ago from Northern Ireland

      acaetnna, what a beautiful poem, such a true trifle of words and one that anyone would love to hear. Your type of love doesn't come along often, it is to be treasured. x

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      MarionAnn thank you. The world in my opinion definitely needs more love. We should begin by loving ourselves and then loving our neighbours. It is so amazing to love our chosen partners too. Love I believe really does make the world go around. Thank you so much for stopping by.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Seeker7 what a remarkable comment! I am more than delighted that this poem will be shared at the wedding. Just how amazing is that? Thank you so much - that is totally awesome!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thebluestar I so appreciate your comment - thank you.

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      attemptedhumour 6 years ago from Australia

      Hi acaetnna, true love really is a wonderful thing. Nothing can make two people more happier. Your poems show how fortunate you and your partner are. My wife and I bought a weekender a year ago which we have almost finished renovating. It is so peaceful there. We wake up to colourful Parrots and Kookabouroughs. I've probably spelt that wrong but who's counting? Cheers from Oz.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Yes Attemptedhumour true love is a totally wonderful thing - and I am SO lucky to be and have experienced it! Your wife and you obviously are living the most blessed dream. Simply awesome!

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      katiem2 6 years ago from I'm outta here

      What pure and sweet words of love from one expressing their true love for another. Embrace love always, Great poem. :) Katie

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      This makes me want to be in love even more I am on the right track now! This is my favorite I cannot express how well you wrote this one it flowed with ease like the water

      smiles :)

      bella

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks Katie - to love and to be truly loved is such a wonderful feeling isn't it. I know that I am very blessed.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Bella I am so pleased that you are on the right track now. Love will always find a way. Take care my friend.

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      Thomas Silvia 6 years ago from Massachusetts

      Hi acaetnna, WOW such a beautiful poem that paints a picture with words of true love !

      AWESOME !!!

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ....from the very first moment my eyes were lucky enough to gaze upon your sacred words - it's true that your heart has always been able to tell a story - and yes there is no heart more pure in its poetic rendering .... than yours!

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      Elena 6 years ago from London, UK

      Wow... this is so lovely. I wish I could find pure love like this. Another gorgeous Poem, that I would like to print out and put in a frame. I am Bookmarking this one.

      Best Wishes and thanks for sharing. The words we read awaken positive vibes in our minds. :)

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Kashmir56 I love it when you read and comment on my hubs. Thank you so very much.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Wow Epigramman you always know which nail to hit on the head! Your comments are just totally unique and awesome. Thank you so very much.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Lady_E thank you. We all have the power to be loved and to love. I know that with your kind heart your love will be boundless!!

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      saddlerider1 6 years ago

      When two hearts beat as one as in yours then all is well in the Universe. Us humans strive for LOVE all our natural life, many will find it and just as many will not. For those who do their is no sweeter music to ones ears, life is fantastic, everything revolves around each others beating heart.

      The thrill and magic it brings, I remember yearning for that feeling of "Just can't wait to be in each other's arms again." what a wonderful feeling. You most definitely are the love Godess and I am in love with how you express your LOVE and sharing with your partner. LOVE is the perfect circle of life. Hugs from the Saddlerider.

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      shygirl2 6 years ago

      You always express such beauty in words of love. The way love is meant to be! : )

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      You are always so right Saddlerider. I really do appreciate that I am so fortunate to have been blessed with a wonderful marriage and a husband who loves me more every moment. I love him too. I really wish that everyone could experience this feeling. Patience is a wonderful thing and ultimately I believe that most people will experience true love.

      I always so appreciate your very wise comments - thank you so very much Saddlerider.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Shygirl - thank you. I just write what my heart says!

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      Website Examiner 6 years ago

      "I really do appreciate that I am so fortunate to have been blessed with a wonderful marriage and a husband who loves me more every moment. I love him too." Then all is well, Acaetnna. Best wishes, W.E.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks Website Examiner - yes absolutely!

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      Doug Turner Jr. 6 years ago

      There's something timeless about the passion you capture with your words. This essence of beautiful companionship has been yearned for and written about and sung about for countless millenia. Thanks to writers like yourself, it's still alive and throbbing. Peace acaetna. The gods are smiling.

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      Audrey Hunt 6 years ago from Nashville Tn.

      You are very blessed to have such a great marriage and to be so in love. Beautiful poetry. vocalcoach

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks Doug, I always look forward to your visits and writing your words of wisdom. The power of love is all around us and I so wish that each person is able to experience such intense emotion. I feel sure that they will in some point in their lives. Take care Doug, I always so enjoy reading your poetry so I shall be over to check out some more of your hubs shortly.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks Vocalcoach. Yes I really do appreciate just how blessed I am. Take care.

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      b. Malin 6 years ago

      What a Beautiful Tribute to the one you Love...Thanks for sharing your Lovely thoughts.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much b.Malin.

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      K.A.E Grove 6 years ago from Australia

      this was so very beautiful, it simply swept me away.

      it is always a pleasure to visit your writings as you have a gift for not only expressing how you feel but uplifting others as you do so. Thank you so much

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      You are always so kind with your words Nighthag - I so appreciate your opinion, thank you so much.

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      prasetio30 6 years ago from malang-indonesia

      You did it again. You always impressed my with all your talent in creating beautiful poem. This was so beautiful and romantic. Can I left my heart for you? hahaha... just kidding. Thanks for making my day so wonderful after read your poem. Rated up up up!

      Love and peace, Prasetio:)

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      warm_whispers 6 years ago

      If i where in his place i would love to reply to you by:

      I have no one but you and you have no one except me

      Half of me hates you and half of me is melting in love with you

      Love conquers all and the command of God prevails

      I must be with you for life neither coming nor going

      As if I was bound and that which binds me is not chains

      That which binds me is loyalty and unless you say

      If the universe comes to an end and earthquakes shake me

      I won't move, residing with you if permissible

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Prasetio it is always such a delight to see you at one of my hubs and I am so very pleased that I made your day. Thank you for taking the time to visit, I very much appreciate that.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Lovely Warm_whispers thank you, but why does half of him hate me? I don't deal with the word hate, only love. If he had told me that half of him hates me then that would be the end of our relationship! Thanks for the visit.

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      A lovely homage to romance and love between two people. It's so wonderful and refreshing. Rating up as always!

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      The Jet 6 years ago from The Bay

      Nothing listening the heart beats of the gal you love. Cool hub.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Astra Nomik you are very generous with your words, thank you. Thanks also for rating up, very appreciated.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks The Jet, so many feelings come from our hearts.

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      The Jet 6 years ago from The Bay

      That is true. And one has to be grateful as well for it.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks once again The Jet - you're are so supportive - thanks again!

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      tom hellert 6 years ago from home

      Ace,

      i gotta tell ya- I never really heard my heart but now,i don't have a choice- thats why I voted it funny ... tick tick tik although it is really more of a ping ping ping.... so... my heart has all sorta stories yoou poem was great.... Everyone's heart has a story and sometimes its a horror story but your story here was great and nice and pretty.

      keepon writing good stuff.

      TH

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      Sarah Winchester 6 years ago

      Beautiful lyric!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Tom I always have a great read when you come to my hubs and always a chuckle! Thank you again.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Sarah - thank you.

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      Jackie Lynnley 6 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Ah, love never runs out of words and you have said them beautifully.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Wow thanks Jackie. Take care.

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Just "liked" this on Facebook. ^_^

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Wow thanks Cathy - you're amazing!

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      Eiddwen 6 years ago from Wales

      Beautiful my dear friend.

      I think that the amount of comments that you receive tells the story.

      I push all the buttons here, as I do every time.

      You are indeed an inspiration.

      Take care

      Eiddwen.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Eiddwen, my friend. Thank you so much for your lovely comments, they are most appreciated. Thank you also for pushing my buttons too.

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      Radioguy 6 years ago from Maine

      Lovely, true, and romantic. You are not afraid to show your feelings...that's rare! Great job! Voted up!

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      Plarson 6 years ago from Alabama

      Very romantic. Any guy should ever be so lucky as to have such beautiful words inspired/written about him. -Paul

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Ha ha Radioguy thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poem. I am a romantic through and through and I find it impossible not to show my true feelings. Thanks for the vote up - you're awesome!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      That is a wonderful thing to say Paul, thank you. I hope he appreciates it!!

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      Cloverleaf 6 years ago from Calgary, AB, Canada

      Adorable! Your husband is a very lucky man :-) it's a breath of fresh air to read your poems, full of joy and true feeling. Thank you for sharing this beautiful hub. Voted up!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Ah thank you so much Cloverleaf - I really appreciate your comment. Thank you.

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      sherrylou57 6 years ago from Riverside

      I love your heart and how your words flow, like a river. You have your fields, your streams, your hills and then you have the stars and the moon!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Ah Sherrylou thank you so much for your poetic comments and of course for stopping by.

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      Ingenira 5 years ago

      Simply beautiful, acaetnna.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much Ingenira.

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      DjBryle 5 years ago from Somewhere in the LINES of your MIND, and HOPEFULLY at the RIPPLES of your HEART. =)

      You play so eloquently with words... I love your story, your heart truly knows what real love and what good life is made of. Voted up for another beautiful and awesome hub! I missed your poems, my friend. God bless!

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much DjBryle. I've missed you too! Yes I am truly fortunate to have had experience and continue to have the experience of true love.

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      JadedLove 5 years ago

      I read and become almost envious and jealous all at once blending a heart of love and passion in flames of desire so cold. I am always amazed by your heart. Beautiful and UP UP UP...

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Ah JadedLove don't be envious! There is love in abundance for each and every one of us.

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      september girl 5 years ago

      Poetic justice to that thing called: 'Love'! : )

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you September girl - I totally agree!

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      JadedLove 5 years ago

      Jenna does say I am insatiable. I now agree.

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      Binaya.Ghimire 5 years ago

      Yes you have a story to tell, a story of emotions and longing. You are a wonderful poet. Your pictures are awesome.

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      JadedLove 5 years ago

      Sorry, I read what Binaya said and you both give me sight. Here is to you both.

      The smile so forgiving,

      eyes crying so beautiful.

      Heart beating strong,

      for a love so warm.

      Nothing left to hide from,

      protected in your arms.

      Light without shadows,

      Love so beautiful.

      Where has your pain taken me,

      is worthy of my life.

      Who I am inside of you,

      is more than one could dream.

      Bleeding hearts so tragic,

      tragedy our path.

      Bound in hatred to find love,

      in a world where we don't belong.

      Breathe into my heart your life,

      life breaking to know this pain.

      Pain unbearable to witness I stand,

      stand next to love and light.

      Each wind blown by her kiss so deep and true,

      making blindness see what I have because of you.

      Your lips so forsaken in a heart beyond my own,

      knowing everything without having to know anything at all.

      Lost have I been.

      So lost within your eyes.

      Making love eternally dead.

      Life so out of control.

      Eyes shinning love.

      Kiss more than poison.

      Dreams falling in forgetting.

      Tears so lost in this rain.

      What have you made me to be,

      is a light even I can feel.

      Who you are inside of me,

      is past the light I now see.

      Johnny Love

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      Binaya.Ghimire 5 years ago

      JadedLove, as always I loved your poetry.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Johnny you are amazing and have a wonderful talent for using the most perfect words. What an honour for me that you have written such an awesome poem on my hub - I do hope that you will now write it on a hub of yours so that many others will read it.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Binaya.Ghimire I thank you for your visit and comments. JadedLove's poetry is amazing isn't it, I hope he makes it into a hub of his own.

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      JadedLove 5 years ago

      it is there

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Well done Johnny - I shall be over to check it out!!

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      JadedLove 5 years ago

      its called something about two friends in love and light

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks JadedLove.

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      JadedLove 5 years ago

      thank you.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      JadedLove - thank you too!

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      QudsiaP1 5 years ago

      Simply wonderful and amazing.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Wow thank you so much QudsiaP1!

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      moneycop 5 years ago from JABALPUR

      beautifull.....feeling cant be expressed the way we feel...still i can understand the depth in it...

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Ah Moneycop, thank you!

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      pennyofheaven 4 years ago from New Zealand

      True love is truly a beautiful thing. You describe this very eloquently. I just love the way you write. Thank you!

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Ah thank you SO much Pennyofheaven!

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      Joanna Chandler 4 years ago from On planet Earth

      Love is a wonderful thing especially if you find that special someone :)

      All the best

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Hi LadyFiddler yes I so agree, love is such a wonderful thing .. I am so lucky that I found the right one!

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      Joanna Chandler 4 years ago from On planet Earth

      Yes you are and thank God for that :)

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you again and take care.

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      moonlake 4 years ago from America

      Beautiful poetry. Enjoyed your hub. Voted up

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much Moonlake, I am pleased that you enjoyed this poem.

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      dreamseeker2 4 years ago

      Your heart story reminds me so much of my brother and his new wife. Beautiful poem and sentiment, acaetnna. : ) Voted it up.

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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Ah ... thank you Dreamseeker ... glad you liked this poem! Thank you so much for the vote up too!

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