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My Stab At Two Sentence Horror Stories

Updated on April 17, 2018
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Set The Mood Quick

I’m taking a stab at writing two sentence horror stories. The subject matter was not my idea. I came across the brain challenge by a follow hubber, shtrigha. I would like to know what you think of my versions….


WITH ONE EYE OPEN


Jeff’s guilt kept him awake; his truck collided with a boy trying to chase his ball and he didn’t stop. Jeff heard a faint tapping noise, the dead boy’s bloody ball slowly rolled out from underneath his bed.



KNEE DEEP CREEK


It has been said, that a hundred years ago, a fisherman panning for gold was robbed and murdered. It has now been confirmed if you pan for gold in his creek, he will cast a hook in your jaw and pull you under until you drown.



BIG RIG


A drunken truck driver brutally rapes a waitress and leaves her for dead. Fifteen years later he finds a note at his doorstep that reads “I’ve got your wife and unborn son”.



BLEEDING JUSTICE


After a corrupt cop slaughters an elderly man, his family is stalked by the dead man’s late wife. His late wife was a ruthless judge.



BRAIN FOG


“Ellie, this fog is too thick…we must pull over”, her husband softly spoke while they were on the way to the Neurology Institute. He then bludgeoned his wife to death with a flashlight because he didn’t remember her.



TEAM SPIRIT


A college basketball player accidentally killed during a hazing incident, vows revenge on those who failed to help him. Once the dribbling begins…there is no where to hide.



TO DODGE A BULLET


"You shot me point blank six times in the head, How come I'm still alive !”, he cries.

“Your not and neither am I", she laughs



THE MISSING MAN


“You hung him, didn’t you”, the Sheriff asked while twisting his mustache.

“I swear on my horse, his body was here a second ago”, the henchman whispered.



X MARKS THE SPOT


Libby celebrates her divorce at a bar when she meets an attractive man to sleep with. In his bed the next morning, she realizes she is bleeding and that is when she finds her female organs in a zip lock bag labeled “compliments of the ex”.

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    • carrie Lee Night profile imageAUTHOR

      Carrie Lee Night 

      3 years ago from Northeast United States

      Poetryman6969: I don't write too much horror anymore, but when I do it can be a bit much. Thank you for leaving me a comment :) I'm sure you'll find variety in my writing style :)

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      poetryman6969 

      3 years ago

      That was disturbing. But then horror is supposed to be.

    • carrie Lee Night profile imageAUTHOR

      Carrie Lee Night 

      4 years ago from Northeast United States

      Frank Atanacio: Thank you for checking up on me ! :). I have been so busy working two jobs that my stories are brewing a bit longer than expected. I am working on three Halloween themed stories simultaneously. The first one will be done soon. I hope to finish all before the deadline of Halloween :)

    • carrie Lee Night profile imageAUTHOR

      Carrie Lee Night 

      4 years ago from Northeast United States

      Audrey Howitt: Thank you so much for your comments :). I really appreciate it.

    • carrie Lee Night profile imageAUTHOR

      Carrie Lee Night 

      4 years ago from Northeast United States

      Kenneth Avery: Thank you so much for your faith in my writing abilities :).

    • Frank Atanacio profile image

      Frank Atanacio 

      4 years ago from Shelton

      just coming back to pay you forward anything new soon?

    • AudreyHowitt profile image

      Audrey Howitt 

      4 years ago from California

      I love this Carrie--especially your first one--but I am a sucker for horror--

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      Kenneth Avery 

      4 years ago from Hamilton, Alabama

      carrie,

      I did enjoy this a lot. Oh, you could write a one-sentence Halloween story in your sleep.

      You are that GOOD.

    • carrie Lee Night profile imageAUTHOR

      Carrie Lee Night 

      4 years ago from Northeast United States

      Glad you enjoyed it :). Maybe I should take one of these and make Halloween short story. Thanks again :)

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      Kenneth Avery 

      4 years ago from Hamilton, Alabama

      carrie,

      Superb; Hilarious (in places); Interesting; Spell-binding and oh so great to read.

      Great job, carrie. I loved every word of this hub.

      Only you could do such a project as this.

      Again, I loved it.

    • carrie Lee Night profile imageAUTHOR

      Carrie Lee Night 

      4 years ago from Northeast United States

      Warren: Thank you for your kind comments ! Glad I got the hall pass... I'll try not to be tardy :). Glad you enjoyed it :)

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      Warren Curtis Daniels Jr 

      4 years ago from Buffalo, New York

      Good job! You hit all the points. You get a pass

    • carrie Lee Night profile imageAUTHOR

      Carrie Lee Night 

      4 years ago from Northeast United States

      Catherine: Thank you for stopping by and giving a read ! :). Glad you enjoyed it.

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      Catherine Giordano 

      4 years ago from Orlando Florida

      You have a great talent.. The first one about the ball under the bed rally grabbed me.

    • carrie Lee Night profile imageAUTHOR

      Carrie Lee Night 

      4 years ago from Northeast United States

      Btrbell: Thank you for your support! :). Maybe it was voted useful to help a Hubber try this style of writing :). So excited you enjoyed it. Be on the lookout in the near future for a Halloween story. Fall is just around the corner....

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      Randi Benlulu 

      4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      Great job! You definitely nailed it. And I think the titles were great, too. I think it's interesting, if not scary that someone voted this "useful"! I sure hope they meant your literary skills!

    • carrie Lee Night profile imageAUTHOR

      Carrie Lee Night 

      4 years ago from Northeast United States

      Jimmar: Thank you for your kind comments and input :) Have a great week :)

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      jimmar 

      4 years ago from Michigan

      This how my stories usually begin, with just a few sentences. When I try to write a love story it turns into a horror story.

      Good work and interesting idea.

    • carrie Lee Night profile imageAUTHOR

      Carrie Lee Night 

      4 years ago from Northeast United States

      Joe dolphin88: Any kind of compliment is awesome ! :). It means a lot to me :). Fans are what keeps us writing. Have a great weekend.

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      Joe 

      4 years ago from north miami FL

      lol sorry the fan mail didn't have more to it.

    • carrie Lee Night profile imageAUTHOR

      Carrie Lee Night 

      4 years ago from Northeast United States

      Joedolphin88: Thank you so much for your kind comments and reading my work :) Awesome fan mail too :)

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      Joe 

      4 years ago from north miami FL

      Very interesting work. Well done with such few words.

    • carrie Lee Night profile imageAUTHOR

      Carrie Lee Night 

      4 years ago from Northeast United States

      Jodah: Great start :). Thanks for sharing

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      John Hansen 

      4 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Jake frantically dug through the ash and rubble. He almost gagged as the last victim of the serial arsonist, the charred body of a small child, appeared. (My attempt)

    • carrie Lee Night profile imageAUTHOR

      Carrie Lee Night 

      4 years ago from Northeast United States

      Jodah: Thank you so much :). Glad you enjoyed them. I will take a stab at limericks soon. I never did those :). Have a great week.

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      John Hansen 

      4 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Amazing stuff here carrie. Very creepy. I especially like "Brain Fog" but they are all great. "X Marks the Spot" the scariest. Love them, voted up.

    • carrie Lee Night profile imageAUTHOR

      Carrie Lee Night 

      4 years ago from Northeast United States

      Moonlake: Thank you for the support. Go ahead and give it a go :). I' m sure you'll have fun with it :)

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      moonlake 

      4 years ago from America

      Enjoyed your two sentence stories now I keep trying write some myself.

      Voted up....

    • carrie Lee Night profile imageAUTHOR

      Carrie Lee Night 

      4 years ago from Northeast United States

      Billybuc: Thank you for supporting my work. If you ever have a writing challenge idea run it by me to see if I can let the creative horses run free :). Your awesome ! Have a great week.

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      Bill Holland 

      4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      Very nicely done, and not an easy task at all. Bravo!

    • carrie Lee Night profile imageAUTHOR

      Carrie Lee Night 

      4 years ago from Northeast United States

      Flourishanyway: Thank you so much for your kind comments :). Its hard to think demented sometimes, but a good challenge for the noggen. Have a great week.

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      FlourishAnyway 

      4 years ago from USA

      Wow! I like no only the idea but also the stunners you generated here. Chilling!

    • carrie Lee Night profile imageAUTHOR

      Carrie Lee Night 

      4 years ago from Northeast United States

      Frank: thank you for your kind comments. This was a challenge and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

    • Frank Atanacio profile image

      Frank Atanacio 

      4 years ago from Shelton

      i think you hit your target.. awesome :)

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