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Not Too Subtle Hint (limerick)

Updated on October 21, 2013

Even a blind man could see

When wife wanted new car from me

Oh her way was won

As people would run

While she parked old one around tree


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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Maybe she needs a driver's ed refresher before you get her that car.

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      drbj and sherry 4 years ago from south Florida

      Let us hope her skill improves by far

      As she drives her beautiful new car.

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      Victor W. Kwok 4 years ago from Hawaii


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      FlourishAnyway 4 years ago from USA

      I bet he will listen next time. If you can't get what you need via one route, then try another. Good one, Martin!

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      Jaye Denman 4 years ago from Deep South, USA

      I always smile (or laugh out loud) when I read one of your limericks. I'll bet you smile while you're writing them.

      Voted Up and Funny/Shared (Everyone needs humor)


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      Karen Silverman 4 years ago


      mayhap he'll listen to her the next time??

      sharing dear..

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Some women have a talent at that.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      Ouch ... if she lived to get one! : )

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Ha! Did she get it? It might be safer not to!

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      Kari Shinal 4 years ago from Seligman AZ

      Ouch! More than one way to get a car. Thanks Martin!

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      Mary Craig 4 years ago from New York

      Your sense of humor knows no bounds! Truly a very "final" way to get a new car!

      Voted up, funny, and interesting.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 4 years ago from Reno NV

      Yikes! Jamie

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      breakfastpop 4 years ago

      Call the Gekko!

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      Oh, this is super and is giving me wonderful ideas!! LOL

      Love it, Martin. One of your best Limericks!


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      wetnosedogs 4 years ago from Alabama

      Oh, wifey is bound to get her way.