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Our Love is Unique

Updated on June 17, 2011
We'll trust in our love
We'll trust in our love
Love securely embedded in our hearts
Love securely embedded in our hearts
We are so in love
We are so in love
Like a flickering candle
Like a flickering candle
Trails of emotion
Trails of emotion
We kiss and caress
We kiss and caress

Our Love is Unique


Our love is like a snowflake

Totally unique

Embedded securely in our hearts

Whether we are near


Or simply far away

We are never apart

For our love is for always

Across the miles

Whispering a longing


Of complete togetherness

Awakened dreams of

Forgotten time

We breathe the same sweet air

Of borrowed time


Years are advancing

Yours and mine

Each moment together

We cannot resist


This sweet love of ours

With continued happiness

Oblivious of others

We kiss and caress

Talking for hours

Until deep in the night


Like a flickering candle

That will never extinguish

We'll trust in our love

This trail of emotion

Our love will forever be

Locked in our hearts




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    • acaetnna profile image
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      acaetnna 4 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks Jackie. The loving part is the greatest part!!!!

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      Jackie Lynnley 4 years ago from The Beautiful South

      Sorry I missed this; maybe I wasn't here yet. I am a meany when it comes to love usually, have to write about the hurting part but I like the loving part too. lol Great job.

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      Johnny Love 6 years ago

      Pleasure is mine.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      My word Johnny you most certainly are a poet. Awesome comment - thank you so much.

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      Johnny Love 6 years ago

      In love i find a purpose,

      reasons to press on.

      finding in the flames,

      dreams to die for.

      tasting life in a kiss,

      making the most of it all.

      no words to express the depth,

      of what love truly is inside.

      Found in water so pure,

      as lovers make their way.

      Becoming one with light,

      under beautiful darker skies.

      Sorry, kinda popped into my braincell

      up and beautiful. Blessings to you.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Peaceful Life - thank you. I do believe that once we have loved, truly loved, it will remain in our hearts forever.

      You take care too.

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      Peaceful life 6 years ago from Las vegas

      how sweet poem...lovely and adorable

      Our love will forever be

      Locked in our hearts

      (this is nice)

      keep writing beautiful poems...take care!!!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Love is grand Darski - it is one of the things in life that is totally free and completely precious. To give and to experience love is completely wonderful. Thanks for visiting Darski, I so appreciate your comment.

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      Darlene Sabella 6 years ago from Hello, my name is Toast and Jam, I live in the forest with my dog named Sam ...

      Oh yes my dear friend, ain't love grand...You have the face of an angle, and write like an angle. Love is the only thing we really have, thank you for giving this to us, it comes in many sizes...and I love you peace darsk

      rate up

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Well thank you Secretmission, I hope that this hub did the trick for you.

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      Secretmission 6 years ago from Sandwich

      When I need to revitalise myself I come to your hubs.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Winsome, I always appreciate your comments.

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      Winsome 6 years ago from Southern California by way of Texas

      "We breathe the same sweet air

      Of borrowed time"

      My favorite line. Lovely. =:)

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much Damian0000.

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      damian0000 6 years ago from Belfast

      Very wistful, soft and gentle --- a beautiful piece this Acaetnna, more of these please :-)

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      I appreciate your comments Lifewellspoken - thank you.

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      lifewellspoken 6 years ago from Vancouver BC

      This is a sweet poem and you my dear is what Snow white is where words are alive.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      You are very kind Dream On, thank you for taking the time to

      read this poem.

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      DREAM ON 6 years ago

      You have captured the beauty that the eyes can't see.Each time you share such wonderful feelings I can't wait to read. Your smile reaches far beyond the pages that you cover.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Us romantics must stick together and spread the word of love. Thank you Denise, so much.

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      Denise Handlon 6 years ago from North Carolina

      Apparantly there is a large group of heartfelt romantics here in the Hubpages Community, and I think most of them are following YOU! LOL Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing. Keep them coming...

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      I will try to, thank you for your lovely words Richtwf.

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      richtwf 6 years ago

      More loving thoughts to enrich our hearts with love. Keep spreading the word of love Lady A. As always beautiful words!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you for visiting my hub Mark and for your comments - much appreciated.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Great to see you here Secretmission, I appreciate your comments, thank you.

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      Secretmission 6 years ago from Sandwich

      Dont know how I missed this one! Another beauty from you.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Dream On, yes I hope this love will last forever, I think there is a very good reason it will!

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      DREAM ON 6 years ago

      You constantly hit the right keys and have found a love that will last.I am so happy for you both.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you for reading my poem and commenting 2usday, I really do appreciate it.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Pamela, yes I just trying to put my feelings into print.

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      2uesday 6 years ago

      Very nicely written romantic poetry, this will touch many hearts.

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      Pamela Oglesby 6 years ago from United States

      The poem is absolutely beautiful. It seemed to be written straight from your heart. I loved it.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Warm_whispers thank you for stopping by.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem Timntim9, I so appreciate your visits.

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      ellacor 6 years ago

      You are indeed the love goddess. You must experience this amazing love to be able to write about it this well. I love your style, so romantic.

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      warm_whispers 6 years ago

      whether across or through or within this candle

      you are always a valentine

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      tlmntim9 6 years ago

      Another lovely poem. What romance!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      I also love your hubs about love - they so inspire me to write even more.

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      katiem2 6 years ago from I'm outta here

      I've never been more inspired to write more about love than now. Your poems are beautiful and inspiring! Write on cupid write on! Love and Peace :)

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Ah thanks Freya, I am sure you will.

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      Freya Cesare 6 years ago from Borneo Island, Indonesia

      I want that kind of love too!

      Lovely, acaetnna. Very lovely!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks SilentReed we just need to spread this word of love still further around this planet and beyond.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      I simply love you dropping by DjBryle and I adore your work too.

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      SilentReed 6 years ago from Philippines

      An open heart see / beyond the poet's homage / the meaning of love... .But in this cynical and materialistic age we live in, we need the breathe of fresh air that your poems bring....pure and unadulterated

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      DjBryle 6 years ago from Somewhere in the LINES of your MIND, and HOPEFULLY at the RIPPLES of your HEART. =)

      Hey, you are truly in love aren't 'ya? You are such a very unique poet and I love your poetry so much so that I never fail to drop by each time I log in to HP! Fascinating works! =)

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much Neil Rose.

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      Nell Rose 6 years ago from England

      Hi, that was lovely, I remember that sort of love well! lol great poem, cheers nell

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Gosh thank you so much Saddlerider, your comments are like a poem itself. I just love you coming to read my poetry, I learn so much from your comments. I really do think that we should always try to see the best in everyone and love them. This love I feel at the moment though gets better day after day. Hugs too.

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      saddlerider1 6 years ago

      You are the love goddess, love makes the world turn, love is forever, love is pure, love is mother nature, love is dancing in the rain, love is your best friend, love is sweet and tender kisses, love is your pet, love is your parents and siblings.

      Love is eternal.....There is not enough paper to write about LOVE. You have it, hang on to it and cherish it. I love that you are in love, I can see you glowing from where I sit. Keep loving you are loved at the hubs. Hugs

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Micky Dee, I am definitely the lucky one, he is all I have dreamed of.

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      Micky Dee 6 years ago

      It's buttons up as usual! You have a lucky man!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Prasetio30 it is always a joy to read your comments and I thank you for reading my poems.Thank you so much for rating it up too, so appreciated. Until the next time, take care.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      It sounds as though you love love and romance too. I thank you very much for your heart felt comments Sligobay.

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      prasetio30 6 years ago from malang-indonesia

      So....beautiful, my friend. You are amazing to play from word by word into romantic poem. You are so different, from uniqueness of love made this so special. Rating Up.

      Blessing and hugs,

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      sligobay 6 years ago from east of the equator

      You have written such lovely and lyrical lines of longing. The uniqueness of a snowflake and the eternal light of the flickering candle resonate with my sense of love and romance. Thank you for your poem.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Oh never give up hope Amy, just smile and always see the best in everyone and I promise you that love will be magnetised towards you. Thank you for your very kind words.

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      AmyTaylor 6 years ago

      Absolutly beautiful...I only wish everyone were lucky enough to experience that which you portray. you are so very luck and so great with words. you give those of us who havent found such a thing hope!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      That is a truly wonderful thing to say Suburban Poet, thank you so much for coming back again.

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      The Suburban Poet 6 years ago from Austin, Texas

      I have a friend who said God is in happy so when I want to go to church I come over here....

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Suburban Poet I love you stopping by, thank you.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Attemptedhumour your comments are simply amazing and I am sure I don't fully deserve them. I am over to read your hubs in a moment.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Cheeky Girl, awesome comments from you as always, thank you so much.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much Nellieanna I am so pleased that you had 28 joyous years, life is so special shared with the write person isn't it.

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      The Suburban Poet 6 years ago from Austin, Texas

      Great poem acaetnna... you have lot's of fans...

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      attemptedhumour 6 years ago from Australia

      Beautifully constructed acaetnna, many people attempt to describe those emotions and of course some manage to convey those feelings. Your poem would sit proudly with the best of them. Bravo!

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      Cassandra Mantis 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      True love is unique, and that what this hub is about. I thoroughly love this. Love is like that candle and yup, we want it to stay lit forever. Very sensual and romantic. just gotta rate this up!

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      Nellieanna Hay 6 years ago from TEXAS

      Lovely words expressing lovely sentiment. When one has the right mate, it is indeed awesome. I had mine for 28 joyous years. So live them to their fullest!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Always Exploring, thank you so much. I am just popping over to read your new poem.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Blaise25 thank you so much for reading my poem and lovely comments. So appreciated.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Astra Nomik, thank you again. I guess when you truly experience such emotions it is easier to write about.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Minnetonka Twin thank you so much.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Oh, i'm so happy i found you.This is so beautiful. Thank you.

      Cheers

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Me loving the flavor of 'true love' in your hubs lately. Beautiful :)

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Beautiful poetry as always. This is love that is trusting and open and has such an honesty too. Marvelous.

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      Linda Rogers 6 years ago from Minnesota

      Beautifully written and brings lovely images to the reader. Thanks for a great uplifting sonnet:)

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Website Examiner it is always a pleasure to receive comments from you - thank you SO much.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Gosh thank you so much Nayothara for your wonderful comments. I am so pleased that my poem filled your heart with love and joy.

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      Website Examiner 6 years ago

      Nicely done. I admired the transitions, where one verse seemed to grip into the next. Technically accomplished, balanced as well.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      I am so pleased that you keep returning to read my poetry Hubpageswriter - thank you so much for your lovely comments too, I so appreciate you visiting.

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      Nayothara 6 years ago

      Love is beautiful, and have no words for me to explain how gorgeous it is.... When I read your poems, my heart fills with Love and Joy and with my personal memories.... You bring the Love to your readers... I want to see more of your poems...

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      hubpageswriter 6 years ago

      Awesome and beautiful. It's like a love epic. Beautiful poetry at its best.;)

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      You are totally awesome Epigramman - thank you x

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ...yes you are our resident 'love doctor' ..... and another exquisite and lovely presentation of words and images .....you even managed to get the bitter and lonely epi-man (lol lol) to write the 'lovey-dovey' stuff which I would say (ahem) .... he's pretty good at - but it's all thanks to you for my new poetic lease on life - you have become quite an influence on me ......

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      I love your comments, thank you Lovingu.

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      Lovingu 6 years ago from London

      Wow, another truly awesome poem from you, you are clearly experiencing true love.