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Our True Love

Updated on November 5, 2011
True love is here from the start
True love is here from the start
True love
True love
Our lips sealed
Our lips sealed
Love promised
Love promised
It would be impossible not to be together
It would be impossible not to be together
The sound of pattering feet
The sound of pattering feet

Our True Love


How lucky and privileged are we to have found a complete and true love. Some people search for a lifetime.

This is the best feeling ever and I so want each and everyone of you to experience this. The oneness and the complete unity of two people so in love.



Our True Love

Believe and follow your heart

True love is here from the start

The very first moment we knew

That look, that touch, like dew


Our depth of sheer emotion

For a life time of perfect devotion

We knew our limbs would entwine

Our lips sealed, yours and mine


We felt from the beginning a deep rapport

Longing to reach and touch even more

Our limbs yearned for loving caress

A complete and total happiness


Never before has a love been as complete

From the moment we knew we would never retreat

This teenage devotion

Would evoke such emotion


Love promised until the end of time

You would profess to always be mine

A love like ours will last for eternity

Our hearts will be joined with total serenity


If we waited from now until forever

It would be impossible not to be together

Our love will never be matched

We will be totally attached


Our love will be complete

With the sound of pattering feet

And our love will confess

To complete happiness

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Cracknutcase - wow thank you so much.

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much Audrey.

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      Cracknutcase 5 years ago from India,bangalore

      Lovely poem.. None could've done justice to this poem but you My friend.

      Voted way up! :)

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      Lovely ans loving write!!!

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much Ubanichijioke, I always appreciate your comments.

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 5 years ago from Lagos

      This is flawless, fantastic and beautiful

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks for your input Cathy. I had forgotten all about it actually, but guess I ought to investigate further. That's amazing you are publishing a poetry book, how exciting is that - well done. Please let me know when it's available to buy.

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Sorry for not answering sooner, acaetnna. I can't publish anything in greeting cards if they appear in a book. That's what I was told. Copyright and legal reasons. Ouch. It's because I am putting my poetry into a book. Sucks. LOL.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Hello Cloverleaf - thank you for your lovely comment. Babies are totally adorable aren't they and that particular photo is wonderful.

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      Cloverleaf 6 years ago from Calgary, AB, Canada

      Lovely poem! The photo of the little baby's feet is just adorable. So much to relate to in this hub, it's great to read something so uplifting and awesome, rated up!! :-)

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      I appreciate that Daydreamer - thank you.

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      daydreamer13 6 years ago

      Lovely!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Dr Irum - I so appreciate your visit and I hope that you will find the time to visit again soon.

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      Dr irum 6 years ago

      Amazing poem ,i enjoyed visit on your pages .

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      What amazing comments Doug - thank you. Your poems are always so amazing - I love them even though they don't feature 'love'!! Hey I love the new profile picture - great strategy for getting the girls to your hubs!!! I hope to be the first to visit!

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      Doug Turner Jr. 6 years ago

      Good Lord, your poems are popular. Maybe I should get over my fear of using the L-word -- it might direct more traffic my way. But let's be honest: the real reason everyone loves your poetry (there's that L-word!) is the elegant simplicity with which you paint your emotions. These feelings are universal, and you convey them with beauty and ease. Cheers and bravo. Well done.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Hello Lifewellspoken how did I manage to miss you out?! You squeaked in without me noticing! Sorry!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Oh wow thanks Devsir. I would love to star a website but have no idea how to!

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      devsir 6 years ago from Earth

      I think I must start a website for LOVE on my domain and publish your poems there. Don't worry full credit will be given to you.

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      lifewellspoken 6 years ago from Vancouver BC

      Wow!!!! your words are magic, thank you for this poem.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Gosh you are so lovely Eiddwen, I do so very much thank you for your kindness. I agree with you about finding the perfect greetings card, I rarely can! I find the most beautiful picture and then discover the words are simply not right! Maybe I really should investigate the possibility. I so appreciate your comments and your friendship. Take care Eiddwen.

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      Eiddwen 6 years ago from Wales

      You are such a star acaetnna because there is so much grief and cruelty in this world but you remind everyone of all the love and happiness there is also all around us.

      I agree with Cheeky Girl and Denise, make that connection with a card company or begin your own. I'm sure that the day will come when you will something along these lines. How many times do we go through cards and none say what we want them to.

      I am so glad to be following you and it's an up/awesome/beautiful here.

      Take care acaetnna.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Hello Pollyannalana great to have you here and to receive your comments. Many thanks for the input - don't know how to go about copyright - may be you can advise me!Will be over to check out your poetry now!

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      Pollyannalana 6 years ago from US

      Very good, poetry is new to me and I have fallen in love with it the last year here and have a copyright on over 200, you may want to watch that because here lately maybe on hubs someone said some people will steal your poems,change a few words and call it their own! Sucks, huh?

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Oh wow Cathy, thanks so much for your advice and help. Did you have any success?

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Yup, greeting cards are so totally right up your creative street. Have you checked the website of Blue Mountain Greeting cards, they request poets to send in poetry submissions. I sent some in to them a while back, at Cheeky's insistence. I also checked out Fina Art America. We advertise them on our website near the Street end of the site. They do greeting cards. Contact artists and painters, as many of them do art for greeting cards there. You can buy art on the site as art or cards or posters.

      "Man does not live by bread alone", goes for ladies too. :)

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Denise, do you really think I could?! What a compliment, thank you so much.

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      Denise Handlon 6 years ago from North Carolina

      Oh, I have to agree with Cheeky Girl--make the connection with a card company, or start your own line.

      Beautiful sentiments. I LOVE the photo of the heart/hands holding the infant's feet. :)

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Great to have you here John and thank you so much for your comment.

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      john27 6 years ago

      lovely page it remind me to

      romantics love good work !!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      I am thrilled you are a fan, you write so many wonderful hubs Devsir.

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      devsir 6 years ago from Earth

      How Nice your poem is! You can do wonders by your words. I am a fan.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Lovely to meet you @MagicBoy and for your lovely compliments. Well I do hope you fall in love all over again ... a truly wonderful feeling.

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      @MagicBoy 6 years ago from Qatar

      Beautifully written about the best thing which happened to this world..Love..after reading your words, I feel like falling in love all over again..Truly inspiring..Thanks for sharing..Keep the light beaming..

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      I love you visiting Katie because you can really relate to the amazing feeling of love.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Craan for reading my poetry. Yes I too really love the baby feet in hands, I thought it so appropriate.

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      katiem2 6 years ago from I'm outta here

      Love poems and your poems of Our true love is so beautiful you dear have a amazing gift, may your gift always flow freely with love.

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      Sheila Craan 6 years ago from Florida

      What a beautiful poem! I love the little baby feet in hands, how awesome. We all dream for a true love and it is magically found instantly when a little bambino is divinely created.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Micky I so appreciate your visit.

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      Micky Dee 6 years ago

      Beautiful words and I love your pictures!

      3 hubs for the price of one!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Agaglia, I absolutely love it. I am totally in awe of you and very humbled that you should spare the time to write such an amazing poem. Thank you SO much, I shall be straight over to read your hubs.

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      agaglia 6 years ago

      A nice poem on Love. Here's one for you.

      Titled: "within the forest"

      The garden nymph and woodland Satyr

      made love within the forest.

      Upon the moss strewn rocks of shade

      their twinned heads came to rest.

      Through dappled trees, their love-born sighs

      strolled on the summer breezes.

      The gauze of silk she wore that day

      was rent with love’s sweet squeezes.

      Fluttering wings and rapid hearts played

      music soft and mellow.

      The rustling leaves cocooned their love

      in hues of reds and yellow.

      Late summer blossoms bust with joy

      and spent their flower fragrance.

      While Autumn’s chill whispered true

      the poetry of romance.

      I hope you like it. Agaglia

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Katie, I just love your visits because you are the queen of love.

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      katiem2 6 years ago from I'm outta here

      What a beautiful expression of love, our true love is such a touching and inspiring poem. Your a wonderful little cupid! Love and Peace :)

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Dream On you have such a special way with words. Thank you for returning.

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      DREAM ON 6 years ago

      Your thoughts go deeper than the page that I read.So I will come back to feel the sweet emotions you share as beautiful as the air that surrounds me.Thanks for sharing your special gift.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Many thanks for stopping by Kathryn.

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      kathryn1000 6 years ago from London

      Lovely

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      What wonderful comments Sentimental, thank you so very much.

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      Capt Semant 6 years ago from India

      "It flows in you and me it drives that what we wish to call WE....' Pure and sweet narration of culmination.....Truly a Gifted Soul You Are....Regards

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Great to see you again Lovingu - thanks for your comments.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks attemptedhumour (great hub name!). Hey a bit jealous! Have you read my poem on jealousy?!!

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      Lovingu 6 years ago from London

      I do agree definitely Aphrodite. Your poetry is so romantic and beautiful acaetnna.

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      attemptedhumour 6 years ago from Australia

      Hey i'm getting a bit jealous, he can't be that perfect can he, um in words i suppose he can and your words say it all. Rhyme and sweet rhythm purring along in unison. Oh he's a lucky bloke i nearly forgot to mention that. Cheers.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      My goodness what a wonderful compliment Nighthag, thank you so much. I actually feel the same way about your poetry and love reading your hubs.

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      K.A.E Grove 6 years ago from Australia

      One of the most beautiful poems I have ever read... you are truly gifted

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      This is truly wonderful Warm-whispers, thank you. You should make this into a hub, it's beautiful.

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      warm_whispers 6 years ago

      Dear acaetna

      if he love you the way u love him he must say....

      Every time I think about you,

      I'm reminded of the reasons

      why I love you from the depth

      of my heart and soul.

      And I wonder what I'd

      do without you,

      without your healing smile,

      your words of faith,

      the caring and sensitive way

      you touch me,

      lifting me

      just when I need it most.

      Without you,

      what would I have?

      What would I be?

      I can't imagine existing in

      a world where someone doesn't

      love me the way you do.

      You're the only one who ever

      understood me and accepted me

      for who I am.

      And I think you're nothing short

      of amazing.

      Your love always has been

      and always will be,

      life's greatest gift to me!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you DjBryle, true love is such a wonderful emotion and when it is reciprocated ten fold it is even MORE magical! I am a very lucky lady, he is a really special guy.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much jca197493@yahoo.c I am so pleased you enjoyed this poem, it was written from my heart. I will stop by your hubs too.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much Nayothara, yes LOVE is the most beautiful of emotions. Some people wait a life time for it to happen, guess I am SO fortunate.

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      DjBryle 6 years ago from Somewhere in the LINES of your MIND, and HOPEFULLY at the RIPPLES of your HEART. =)

      Beautifully written to captivate the soul! You seem so in love my friend! I love your poems! You are refreshing! =)

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      jca197493@yahoo.c 6 years ago

      This was beautiful! I am very happy I found your writing!!

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      Nayothara 6 years ago

      This is truly beautiful.. You are blessed with most beautiful subject in life.. LOVE!

      Oh so beautiful the way you paint it.. And looking forward to your next poem...

      Cheers!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much Bodylevive for your very kind comments. Me too! I am so pleased I found your writing and will be hopping back to read some more.

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      BODYLEVIVE 6 years ago from Alabama, USA

      First of all, let me say WELCOME and thanks for stopping by I Found Love Just in Time. Your poems are beautiful, I particularly enjoyed this one because it is so ME with the exception of tiny feet.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much You Suggest One, and of course you have, thank you. I will continue to write with my feelings.Hopefully one day soon there will be those tiny feet!

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      you suggest one 6 years ago from NOTTINGHAM ENGLAND

      acaetnna,first of all I want to congratulate you on your superb poem,true love comes but once,after that everything is secondary,and look after those tiny feet for they are where your one true love really lives,secondly the words you use to express your feelings are your words from within YOU,never try to use any other, you will spoil yor meaning,you take care,

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much Littlesecret13. I will certainly look forward to reading more of your wonderful poetry.

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      littlesecret13 6 years ago from inside your mind

      wow, I am totally moved by this poem, it is beautiful! i love it! I'm glad you found me so I could find you!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Dream on I am delighted that you feel much happier when you read my poetry. That is such a great honour, thank you so much. Yes I love the last picture too.

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      DREAM ON 6 years ago

      I felt such a warm rush from had to toe.You clearly express yourself wonderfully.Each time I read one of your poems I am much happier than when I first began.I am hooked on the last picture on your hub.I found the babies feet so adorable.It is the best heart I have ever seen.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Gosh Cheeky Girl, what awesome comments from you. I am new to all of this and I am just writing how I feel. Guess I am just writing straight from my heart and amazingly it seems to be working at the moment! Long may it last! Maybe I should investigate the card companies, are you serious?!

      I so appreciate your words and for taking the time to read my poetry. Thank you SO much.

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      saddlerider1 6 years ago

      I am certain that you both have a BOND of love that is unbreakable and you are both truly in love. That is a fantastic feeling to love and be loved. In return you get to share so much happiness together and build a life and family from that bond.

      It reads like you are both a match made in Heaven and I am so happy for you both. Your poem is expressive and filled with so much feeling. Nicely done, I enjoyed this read. You have a gift, follow your dreams now. peace and hugs from the Saddle

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Lovely comments again from you Hubpageswriter. Many thanks, very much appreciated.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks again Epigramman, I always enjoy your visit.

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      Cassandra Mantis 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Wow, acaetnna - I think the time has come to tell you this - but this poem is a pure Hallmark moment. Have you ever considered writing love rhymes and poetry for them or the Blue Mountain Card company! I'd highly recommend it. This is just amazing. I loved the romantic sentiment here. I am so impressed with your poems, they are remarkable. I think poetry is making a serious come back on the Hub Pages thanks to great writing like this! Cheers!

      PS, I loved the pictures too!

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      hubpageswriter 6 years ago

      Our love will never be matched, we will be totally attached. Now that's a really good line, you're really talented, enjoy this much.;)

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ..well what can I say - when I want to feel good I come here for a poetic hug and some relief from writing The Orange Pekoe Cult - lol lol lol

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much Ellacor. If you feel a deep emotion it is so much easier to write from the heart and that is what I try to do. I appreciate your comments.

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      ellacor 6 years ago

      Acaetnna you hit the mark time and again. Just beautiful, you show such emotion and wear your heart on your sleeve. Awesome and voted up. I just love reading your poetry.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      You are absolutely right Jaggedfrost (great name by the way!)I am very new to this and hopefully in time my choice of words for expressing my emotions through poetry will improve. I am very grateful for your comments, thank you.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Gosh thank you Secretmission for your lovely words.I am sure that you will have found true love, if not I have a feeling you will discover it very shortly. Take care.

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      Jaggedfrost 6 years ago

      ??? There is a lot of love there. I wonder if you might have found a wider word choice to express the obvious emotions underneath this poem if you hadn't been so dedicated to your meter. I wish you the best of luck with your poetry.

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      Secretmission 6 years ago from Sandwich

      So sensual. You sound so loving and sensual. The love oozes through your words. It is when you experience true love that you completely feel it in your language. You are indeed aphrodite and I am so envious of your true love. Voted up, a beautiful poem.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      What a wonderful compliment being likened to Aphrodite. Thank you Richtwf. I am so pleased that you have been blessed with true love too.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Epigramman, I am speechless again, truly lovely comments. Thank you SO much. You have such a way with words and I am really honoured that you have paid me such an amazing compliment. I am truly touched, thank you.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Minnetonka Twin I so appreciate your comments and am thrilled to read that you think I'm a good poet. Thank you, hopefully I will improve as I write more.

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      richtwf 6 years ago

      A simply beautiful poem expressing true love and I especially loved the last verse.

      True love is indeed an amazing feeling and not too many of us ever get that opportunity to experience it but for sure I know I'm one of the very fortunate ones and I thank God for that blessing.

      Wonderful poetry from our Lady Aphrodite of HP!

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      .....my life is always complete when I come here and feel/read the glow of your radiant words - and your 'love' is so contagious that I think you must be the female counterpart to 'Cupid' .......and when I looked up the idea of 'love' in the dictionary it referred to your hubs as the essential manifestation of what love is all about - love ya too, says the epi-man!!!!

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      Linda Rogers 6 years ago from Minnesota

      Very moving poetry. Your a great poet. Nice job.