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Our Secret

Updated on February 10, 2011
It's locked in my heart
It's locked in my heart
Not telling
Not telling
Wont tell!
Wont tell!
Magical words and kisses
Magical words and kisses

Our Secret


It's so exciting to be asked to keep a secret, it's so special to be given the privilege.

Keep it close to your heart and never let it go.




Our Secret

I can keep a secret

Your secret is safe with me

Our love is locked inside my heart

And forever it will always stay


I look at you so often

And words cannot describe

The feelings I have for you my love

So don’t just step aside


You really are my treasure

I love you through and through

Look into my eyes once more

And you will know it’s true


Our love has always been unique

And totally fulfilled

You have strayed away before

My love, but now you never will


For now and ever more our love

Will be constant as the Sun

Beaming down to touch us

As we become just one


This love is indescribable

You have clearly shown to me

Through your words and kisses

That we were meant to be


Always I will care for you

As you will care for me

Together as the Sun shines

Over our loves eternity

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      acaetnna 5 years ago from Guildford

      You are correct Vinaya Ghimire, it is the complete feeling of oneness that is so completely special. Thank you so much for popping by, I so appreciate that. Thank you again.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      When in love the thoughts of duality vanishes,and the sense of oneness becomes overwhelming.

      I loved this poem. Your word pictures are beautiful, expressions very powerful.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Yes to love - completely is unbelievable. We are so blessed when we find true love. To love is the most sensational experience. Thank you so much for your comments TruckStop Sally.

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      Truckstop Sally 6 years ago

      Very touching poem. My favorite line is: You really are my treasure

      Love is a treasure that should be celebrated, appreciated, respected . . . Thanks

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks you Doug - awesome comment - loved it! I am so pleased you read my poetry.. I have a lot to learn but fellow hubbers have been so supportive, it's great.

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      Doug Turner Jr. 6 years ago

      Good rhyme scheme here. Subtle enough to be scarcely noticeable but present enough to give the poem a lyrical feel.

      Browsing through the comments here, I had to laugh. I felt like I had arrived late for an epic party. This is a good example of why hubpages is so much fun.

      Thanks for checking out my innuendo poem, your comment was very encouraging.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Yes definitely a friend, a true and genuine friend can keep a secret. Thanks for your comments Tim, so pleased you came back again, thank you.

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      tlmntim9 6 years ago

      I read this again and it makes me think of a character from from of my stories, yet a bit darker, It went like this,

      "He had no friends. A friend is someone who can keep a secret and how one learns to keep a secret is by having an opportunity not to, and paying the price of doing so. He could not take that chance. He did not give second chances."

      Glad to see your face....ah I mean, photo again..LOL

      Tim W

      Tlmntim9

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Denise.

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      Denise Handlon 6 years ago from North Carolina

      This one goes in the Hallmark card box. Beautiful.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Well Epigramman you certainly deserve the comments. I have learned a great deal from reading your poetry. Love really does make the world go round and I think we are all making a good start here on Hubpages! Thank you for your loyal support.

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ..well my secret (weapon) are your loyal and supportive comments to me - they just simply keep me going and going and moving forward - and in your sweet sweet writing no one (not even Cupid whom I hear was quite a poet in his day) can personify the feelings of love quite the way you can .... that's why I call you our resident Love Doctor - lol lol - it's just the right medicine to keep those blues away and keep the sun shining - and I am proud to say you are my good friend too!!!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Well thank you so much DawnM. I am now coming over to check out your hubs!

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      Dawn Michael 6 years ago from THOUSAND OAKS

      Hi acaentnna, lovely, lovely, lovely, you did a wonderful job!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Wow, wow and double wow, thank you for your truly wonderful comments Erin.

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      Erin LeFey 6 years ago from Maryland

      Secrets between lovers, true loving lovers who want only the best for each other - are always the greatest kind. There should be secrets only the two of you share. I think it adds richness and depth to an already wonderfully mystical relationship that only true lovers who have really "walked in love" with each other ever find. I love your hubs. :)

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks so much for dropping by Kavita. You are so right of course, true love should be shouted from the roof tops. What I was really trying to say in this poem was that our special true love will always remain in our hearts. Once you have truly loved that is where it will always remain! I really hope that you feel like this again soon, I am sure you will. Thank you for rating it up too, I so appreciate that.

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      Kavita Trivedi 6 years ago from London

      A secret can also break us.

      Locking true love up in your heart can be so overwhelming when really, what you truly want to do is shout out loud! Lol. It is such an amazing feeling. I hope to feel like that again one day...

      Beautifully written piece Acaetnna - rated up! :)

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you AngRose, I appreciate your visit.

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      AngRose 6 years ago

      Beautiful writing!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      You have clearly been or are in love yourself, yes it is the most powerful emotion and one that remains in one's heart forever. I am so pleased that my poetry touched your heart.Thank you so much for reading my poetry Craan.

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      Sheila Craan 6 years ago from Florida

      The secret of love is the trust and respect it generates. If someone has not ever been in love with someone he can never imagine what this feeling of love is all about.

      Lovely acaetnna! I am so glad you found me. Your poetry touches my heart.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Oh wow thanks ZulmaDear!

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      ZulmaDear 6 years ago from TheCrosses, LasCruces

      i agree with epigramman.

      you ARE the Love Doctor. :)

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      That's awesome that you came back to read this poem again, thanks Katie. Yes lovers have secrets that no one else will never know!

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      katiem2 6 years ago from I'm outta here

      Coming back to read this again it made me think of all the cute, funny and deep secrets lovers have just between them like little treasures making their love more intense and strong! Love it!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much RNMSN I so appreciate your visit.

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      Barbara Bethard 6 years ago from Tucson, Az

      I love your style of poetry acaetnna/simply beautiful!! voted awesome and beautiful!!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      I simply love your comments Website Examiner - thank you.

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      Website Examiner 6 years ago

      The secret seems to be well-preserved after 60 comments. I'd call that loyalty.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Nell you are awesome.

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      Nell Rose 6 years ago from England

      Hi, this was lovely, and not only are you a great poet, but obviously know the true meaning of love, cheers nell

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Gosh it is such an honour having you here to read my poetry, thank you Petra. Wonderful comments, thank you. Your poetry is just outstanding, I will learn a great deal from reading your work.

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      Petra Vlah 6 years ago from Los Angeles

      Keep the smile and the beautiful and pure heart you have and pay less attention to the "well meaning ones" who considere giving a woman a compliment as beeing disrespectful.

      As it happens Larry is a great poet on his own right and his compliment was sincere, so nothing to fear there

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks attemptedhumour, I so appreciate you stopping by.

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      attemptedhumour 6 years ago from Australia

      Another cracker, keep them coming. All the comments speak volumes about your words, cheers.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks Micky Dee, awesome.

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      Micky Dee 6 years ago

      Very, very smooooth! Buttons up! God bless acaetnna!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      I am glad I found your writing Always Exploring and I am so pleased that you loved what you have read here. Thank you so much.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Where have you been? I love your poem and style of writing.Thank you for following me.I am thrilled to follow you.

      Cheers

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you SO much Secretmission, it is wonderful to be able to express ones love in this way.

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      Secretmission 6 years ago from Sandwich

      I have got a secret, I just love your writing.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks so much Dream On.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Yes true love does remain in your heart forever. I hope that you have also found your own true love.

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      DREAM ON 6 years ago

      Wonderful and very enjoyable

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      Secretmission 6 years ago from Sandwich

      True love remains in your heart forever. I loved the way you made it a secret. Wonderful poem so full of love.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Sorry Epigramman, how could I have missed you out! I am honoured that you have written me a poem - thank you so much.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Cheeky Girl I just love your comments, thank you so much. You always say something so empowering and inspirational. Very much appreciated.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      I am flattered that you have visited this for a second time Hubpageswriter, I so appreciate your comments. Thank you so much.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      I really do appreciate your concern and comments Website Examiner, thank you. I guess I am just naive and maybe I should change my website profile.

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      Cassandra Mantis 6 years ago from UK and Nerujenia

      Wow, this is so wonderful. This is one of your best I have read so far. When love is so special, we can see how it can feel like a secret because we are making is special or it is all the more special for us. Something magical has to be in it to make it that way. I really dig this! So Cool! :)

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      hubpageswriter 6 years ago

      So awesome. And secrets are not meant to be broken, else the trust will be lost. Beautiful poetry at its best.;)

      PS: I just have to comment on this hub twice as it's so beautiful.;)

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      Website Examiner 6 years ago

      Acaetnna, as you may or may not be aware, I have been doing quite a bit of critiquing and reviewing here on HubPages. I never touch poetry, simply because I lack grasp of the genre. However, I must tell you this: It seems that some of your "fans" are having difficulties in distinguishing between your respectable craft and you as a young woman. I find that rather pathetic and a disservice to the kind of workmanship that you represent. What a shame it is that women must (nearly) always be trivialized in this way. I cannot advise you how to respond, and this is none of my business, however I cannot resist the urge to express my dismay at some of these comments. With respect, W.E.

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ..this is no secret - I must write you a love poem right now .....

      Roess are red

      Violets are blue

      if flowers were colors

      then the brightest would be you!

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks Timntim9, glad you stopped by.

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      tlmntim9 6 years ago

      I love your poetry, great rythom! Can't wait to read more

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you Maven101 for your fabulous welcome to Hubpages. I am a complete novice but now feel inspired by lovely people such as yourself. Thank you so much for your comment.

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      maven101 6 years ago from Northern Arizona

      Looking at your beautiful smile, I can see the love lit within...Nothing so pure and honest as a woman in love describing that love...Thank you for this sweet sharing...And welcome to HubPages...a great place with great people to share that love with...Larry

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks for the thumbs up Darlene, I really appreciate that.

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      Darlene Sabella 6 years ago from Hello, my name is Toast and Jam, I live in the forest with my dog named Sam ...

      Beautiful, nice hub welcome to hubpages. Thumbs up

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much Katie, your comments are just so appreciated.

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      katiem2 6 years ago from I'm outta here

      Oh how beautiful and how true. True love is so powerful and so amazing there is just no doubting it! Love Our Secret! Well Done! Love and Peace :) Katie

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      acaetnna 7 years ago from Guildford

      You are absolutely right there Daydreamer13!Thanks for your comments.

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      daydreamer13 7 years ago

      It all depends on the secret you keep. It can be a priviledge or a burden.

      Good writing here. Well done.

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      acaetnna 7 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you as always Prasetio30 for your wonderful comments.

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      prasetio30 7 years ago from malang-indonesia

      Beautiful secret from you. I promise I'll keep your secret. I'll not telling this to anyone. But I can lie to my self that I can't keep this for me. I have to share to the world .Because you are so special.

      Prasetio

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      acaetnna 7 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks Epigramman. Looking forward to your next inspiration!! Take care.

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      epigramman 7 years ago

      ...no secret here .... I can tell we both belong to the mutual admiration society - and thanks for making my day and dropping by ......

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      acaetnna 7 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much Lovingu for your loving comments. So appreciated.

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      Lovingu 7 years ago from London

      It's so important to keep a secret. This is magical, you are so good with words acaetnna. I am loving your poetry.

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      acaetnna 7 years ago from Guildford

      Richtwf - yes, thank you, the love of my life continues to inspire me in every way.

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      acaetnna 7 years ago from Guildford

      Warm_whispers (great name by the way!), thank you once again.

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      acaetnna 7 years ago from Guildford

      I agree Hubpageswriter a secret is exactly what it is, a secret and should be kept. Thank you for your comments again.

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      acaetnna 7 years ago from Guildford

      Thanks DjBryle, wonderful comments from you.

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      richtwf 7 years ago

      A wonderful shared poem indeed

      your love seems - it was truly meant to be

      for you to be inspired - to pen so lovingly!

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      warm_whispers 7 years ago

      just SO wonderful

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      hubpageswriter 7 years ago

      And secrets are not meant to be broken. Beautiful piece.

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      DjBryle 7 years ago from Somewhere in the LINES of your MIND, and HOPEFULLY at the RIPPLES of your HEART. =)

      Hey, I can always keep a secret but if it is too beautiful to share, I just can't help but bring it out! I'll share this masterpiece on FB! Thanks for sharing this very beautiful poem. =)

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      acaetnna 7 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you for your comments Website Examiner, I adore receiving them from you.Everyone seems to be into Halloween at the moment!

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      Website Examiner 7 years ago

      How mysterious... What they might be doing that is such a secret is anybody's guess. It could be a bit of Moonlight vampireism or maybe watching vintage movies that nobody else would understand.

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      acaetnna 7 years ago from Guildford

      Thank you so much Lady_E - it's difficult to keep a secret isn't it?!!!

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      acaetnna 7 years ago from Guildford

      Gosh thank you Ellacor, yes this guy is so amazingly special and I really don't want this incredible feeling to ever stop!Thanks also for voting this up.

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      Elena 7 years ago from London, UK

      Thanks for another beautiful Poem. I can't keep this Poem a Secret. I will have to share it....

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      ellacor 7 years ago

      This is a true love that you have and feel acaetnna. I just adore your poetry. This man of yours must be so special and you clearly have a bond forever more. No one has a chance interfering with this love. I just love your poetry it is so, so sensual. Well done and definitely voting up.

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      epigramman 7 years ago

      ... and a double wow from me - so here goes - wow wow !!!!

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      acaetnna 7 years ago from Guildford

      Wow - thank you x

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      epigramman 7 years ago

      .....well you make this guy feel really special too - it goes both ways!!!! And the feeling is just simply divine!!!!

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      acaetnna 7 years ago from Guildford

      Epigramman, I just love you. You are just SO wonderful and know how to let a girl know that she is special. So thank you SO much. I just love your comments - the great Oracle. x

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      epigramman 7 years ago

      ...and yes you make 'this secret' a very beautiful secret indeed .....

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      epigramman 7 years ago

      ..well you make the world of love a nice place to be - again these are pure words from the heart which belong to you and your loved one - and no one else - and that's what is so special about your writing - it's gives me a warm glow because your poetic feelings are genuine and sincere.

      I may have to give you a new nickname after this one - lol lol - the Love Doctor!!!!

      The Love Doctor - because you know exactly what kind of medicine to prescibe to your patients/readers - and man oh man if more people took this kind of daily dose then the world would be a much better place to live in!!!!!!