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Poem: Creation.

Updated on August 25, 2013

Creation of Man.

Have you ever felt an urge to pen down an burning idea to paper. It will come random and it is inspired by the Holy Spirit, in glorifying the Creator. Some people will not understand the deep spiritual meaning of my poems, but not to miss.

See if you could understand the deeper meaning of this poem, was written as from the Creators view.


Lovingly I lifted you up

Dusting off the red dust

Slowly, as you are frail

Smiling at perfection

The earth and the heavens

Witnessed your creation

Out of the earth I formed you

Red as the clay you’re formed from

Slowly I placed you on the earth

So lifeless it seems, to the unknown

Slowly I bend over to you

Softly I placed my mouth on yours

Softly I blew My breath into you

Slowly I saw My light enter you blood

Softly your frail heart started to pump

Slowly your live-giving blood flowed

Slowly live entered you, movement, at last

Eyelids fluttered, fingertips moved

Shouts of praise rained all around

Heaven and earth rejoiced and shouted, at last!

Softly you surfaced, opening your soul

Lighting up as the Creator, next to you

Brighter than the brightest star, pure and wild

Suddenly you realized and understood

Softly as you came out of unconsciousness

You looked into My eyes and you recognized

The love between us, you my creation

Admiration flared up deep in you, so thankful

Slowly I took you by your hand and lifted you up

Wobbling you stood for the first time

Slowly growing strong, looking at Me

Lovingly, admiringly and so totally dependent

Softly I called your name; you jumped at the sound,

Opening your ears, sound flooded your being

Suddenly you heard for the first time

Then you saw, noticing creation around you

Love flooded your soul, all this is for you

Rule it and name it all

Eat from it and be filled

I AM pleased, My precious man. Your Creator


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    • louisxfourie profile image

      Louis Fourie 7 years ago from Johannesburg, South Africa

      Thank you for the kind words. Creation is always near my heart, His loving Hands creating us, God bless

    • singlmomat52 profile image

      singlmomat52 7 years ago

      Such a wonderful description of our creation by His Hand!!

      Thank you!!

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      William Kovacic 7 years ago from Pleasant Gap, PA

      Beautifully put together, Louis. Thanks for bringing the story to life (no pun intended).