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Updated on August 17, 2013
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Life, life, life

three words present, three syllables, many meanings

left, right, forward, back, future, past

retold, too short, never said, to last

everything is confused, jumbled and chaotic

chaos chaos chaos

organization is never present but the thought that it

is there is everlasting

so what's the meaning of it all ?

you stand just to fall ?

relinquish your doubts negativity and give it your all

no matter if you fall, no matter who God calls

you never give up.

temptation, temptation, temptation,

is to veer your from your dreams

to never reach your goals

just a distraction

that doesn't want your story to be told

Motivation, motivation

it keeps you here ?

or will it take you there ?

a place never seen, a life never lived

what could this all mean ?

to want what you've never had

some passion to try to grab this dream

Life, life, life

three words present, three syllables, many meanings




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      torrilynn 3 years ago

      @DDE thank you

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      Devika Primić 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Wonderful thoughts!

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      torrilynn 3 years ago

      @LadyFiddler I thank you for commenting and I'm happy you liked my poem.

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      Joanna Chandler 3 years ago from On planet Earth

      Sure right torrilynn life has many meanings. Nice poem :)

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      torrilynn 3 years ago

      @Vellur thank you for liking my poem and for voting up. Your opinion is much appreciated.

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      Nithya Venkat 3 years ago from Dubai

      Great poem, very well expressed. Voted up.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @tirelesstraveler thank you and thanks for voting up

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @ocfireflies why thank you !

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @MsDora thank you!

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @NellRose thanks for liking my poem and for voting up!

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @RomeosQuill I agree that you have to change your thought process in order to change your life. Thanks for reading my poem!

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @kidscrafts thanks for liking my poem!

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @Vellur thanks for liking my poem!

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @tobusiness i couldn't agree more and believe that life can take you completely off guard.

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, U.K

      A wonderful poem! The thing about life, you never know where it will take you, so hold on tight and enjoy the ride. :)

      Loved the poem.

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      Nithya Venkat 4 years ago from Dubai

      Great poem, nicely done.

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      kidscrafts 4 years ago from Ottawa, Canada

      Very nice poem! I like the rhythm in it! Thank you for sharing!

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      Romeos Quill 4 years ago from Lincolnshire, England

      An introspective perusal torrilynn, on this mystery we all partake of. Thoughts can govern one's life, though we don't always know where we're going for the future is hidden , but like you've mentioned, we have a trustworthy guide to help us through.

      ' Change your thoughts to change your life ', is what I've learned thus far.

      Best Wishes for a fab weekend;

      R.Q.

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      Nell Rose 4 years ago from England

      serious words on such an important thing, how we live our lives, loved it! voted up!

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      Dora Weithers 4 years ago from The Caribbean

      Some serious thoughts to reflect on as we contemplate the questions you raise on the meaning of life. Good job!

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      ocfireflies 4 years ago from North Carolina

      I have to agree with tirelesstraveler. I love the word play. Nicely done and much enjoyed.

      Thank You,

      Kim

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      Judy Specht 4 years ago from California

      Love the word play. Voted up .

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @PoeticPhilosophy thank you and I sure will!

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @WillStarr thank you !

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @KenDeanAgudo why thank you !

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @oldalbion thanks for the compliment i appreciate your kind words.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @Mhatter99 you are more than welcome!

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @Kamalesh050 im glad you found this beautiful thanks for reading.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @Kamalesh050 im glad you found this beautiful thanks for reading.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @ManOfStrength why thank you !

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @BlossomSB you are more than welcome. Thanks for reading and giving your positive feedback.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @alwaysexploring why thank you!

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @janetwrites im glad you liked my poem!

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @aviannovice thank you !

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @teaches12345 thank you for the positive feedback

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      Well done! I love the play on life and the repetition makes it flow well in meaning.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Life is exactly what we make of it. We must always forge ahead to fulfill our dreams. You hit that nail directly on the head.

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      Janet Giessl 4 years ago from Georgia country

      I love this poem. Very inspirational and meaningful!

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      Ruby Jean Richert 4 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Interesting take on the meaning of life. Nice...

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Interesting poem. Thank you for sharing your thoughts in this way.

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      Man of Strength 4 years ago from Orlando, Fl

      I agree, this is very reflective and interesting. Voted up.

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      Kamalesh050 4 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      Simply Beautiful. Voted Up.

      Best Wishes, Kamalesh

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      Martin Kloess 4 years ago from San Francisco

      Thank you for this reflection

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      Graham Lee 4 years ago from Lancashire. England.

      Hi Torry. Heartfelt and inspirational. Your reader can apply your words to their own lives so easily. Well done.

      voted up and all.

      Graham.

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      Kenneth C Agudo 4 years ago from Tiwi, Philippines

      great meaning and inspiration

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      WillStarr 4 years ago from Phoenix, Arizona

      Well done!

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      PoeticPhilosophy 4 years ago from Canada

      Great meaning in this poem torrilynn thanks :) hope you keep up meaningful posts like these.

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