Poem, poem, poem..Geez!
Life, life, life
three words present, three syllables, many meanings
left, right, forward, back, future, past
retold, too short, never said, to last
everything is confused, jumbled and chaotic
chaos chaos chaos
organization is never present but the thought that it
is there is everlasting
so what's the meaning of it all ?
you stand just to fall ?
relinquish your doubts negativity and give it your all
no matter if you fall, no matter who God calls
you never give up.
temptation, temptation, temptation,
is to veer your from your dreams
to never reach your goals
just a distraction
that doesn't want your story to be told
Motivation, motivation
it keeps you here ?
or will it take you there ?
a place never seen, a life never lived
what could this all mean ?
to want what you've never had
some passion to try to grab this dream
Life, life, life
three words present, three syllables, many meanings
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AUTHOR@DDE thank you
Wonderful thoughts!
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@LadyFiddler I thank you for commenting and I'm happy you liked my poem.
Sure right torrilynn life has many meanings. Nice poem :)
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@Vellur thank you for liking my poem and for voting up. Your opinion is much appreciated.
Great poem, very well expressed. Voted up.
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@NellRose thanks for liking my poem and for voting up!
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@RomeosQuill I agree that you have to change your thought process in order to change your life. Thanks for reading my poem!
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@Vellur thanks for liking my poem!
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@tobusiness i couldn't agree more and believe that life can take you completely off guard.
A wonderful poem! The thing about life, you never know where it will take you, so hold on tight and enjoy the ride. :)
Loved the poem.
Great poem, nicely done.
Very nice poem! I like the rhythm in it! Thank you for sharing!
An introspective perusal torrilynn, on this mystery we all partake of. Thoughts can govern one's life, though we don't always know where we're going for the future is hidden , but like you've mentioned, we have a trustworthy guide to help us through.
' Change your thoughts to change your life ', is what I've learned thus far.
Best Wishes for a fab weekend;
R.Q.
serious words on such an important thing, how we live our lives, loved it! voted up!
Some serious thoughts to reflect on as we contemplate the questions you raise on the meaning of life. Good job!
I have to agree with tirelesstraveler. I love the word play. Nicely done and much enjoyed.
Thank You,
Kim
Love the word play. Voted up .
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@oldalbion thanks for the compliment i appreciate your kind words.
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@Mhatter99 you are more than welcome!
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@Kamalesh050 im glad you found this beautiful thanks for reading.
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@Kamalesh050 im glad you found this beautiful thanks for reading.
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@janetwrites im glad you liked my poem!
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@teaches12345 thank you for the positive feedback
Well done! I love the play on life and the repetition makes it flow well in meaning.
Life is exactly what we make of it. We must always forge ahead to fulfill our dreams. You hit that nail directly on the head.
I love this poem. Very inspirational and meaningful!
Interesting take on the meaning of life. Nice...
Interesting poem. Thank you for sharing your thoughts in this way.
I agree, this is very reflective and interesting. Voted up.
Simply Beautiful. Voted Up.
Best Wishes, Kamalesh
Thank you for this reflection
Hi Torry. Heartfelt and inspirational. Your reader can apply your words to their own lives so easily. Well done.
voted up and all.
Graham.
great meaning and inspiration
Well done!
Great meaning in this poem torrilynn thanks :) hope you keep up meaningful posts like these.
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