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Poetry - Twilight

Updated on March 11, 2011

I head out into the misty cold
not knowing where i belong
I walk down the streets of silence
unsure if i'm right or wrong

Trees withering as the sun is sinking down
my thoughts are spinning inside my head
my eyes darting in wayward directions
for a clue i could use to save myself

the stars lay their curse upon my soul
the moon denies to shine on me tonight
but i try to move on with these memories
leading me into the twilight..


I have come so far
so far away from home
not looking for a destiny
cause i know it will only take me back to me
I wanna lose myself tonight
as i need you by my side
I wanna take us away from here

so come with me

into the twilight...

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      misslee 6 years ago from Beverly Hills, CA

      so very romantic...

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Very awesome! Asking for the hand to take that walk onto the lands of bliss!

      Voted up and awesome!!

      Smiles

      bella

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      h.a.chauhdary 6 years ago from Australia

      =) i'm glad you guys liked it.

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      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      Why is your score so low, and why only 2 followers?

      You're a good writer...that's strange

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      h.a.chauhdary 6 years ago from Australia

      hmmm i guess cause i've started publishing since yesterday.

      lol, i'm not saying that i deserve more score though. but i'm deeply humbled by your comment.

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      BenWritings 6 years ago from Save me from, Tennessee

      You will grow for sure.

      Talent is obvious, regardless of what it's about.

      Please check out some of mine as well. I've been told I write from the heart.

      Thanks

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      K.A.E Grove 6 years ago from Australia

      I am so glad that I found you :) will have to thank benwritings for that...

      this was beautiful and I eagerly look forward to reading more

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      h.a.chauhdary 6 years ago from Australia

      thank you for your wonderful and encouraging comments.

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      La Papillon 6 years ago from Melbourne, Australia

      ;) I voted you up. Love your poetry.

      Louise :)

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      h.a.chauhdary 6 years ago from Australia

      thanks a bunch!

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      Rafini 6 years ago from Somewhere I can't get away from

      This is wonderful! I get it, I mean I can feel it, but struggling to express it. (You'll get there - the moon, stars, and cold wont be able to keep you)

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      h.a.chauhdary 6 years ago from Australia

      thats so kind of you to say!

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      matt 6 years ago

      continue writing your thoughts for they are well worth and audience, be it comprised of one (you) or many.

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