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Prose - Peer Pressure

Updated on September 17, 2011

The spark is there
But you are unable
To let it burn
The fire is waiting
For you
To take your turn
The eyes
Of transients
For a moment
Leaving their mark
On your scroll
To be free
You wilt
To run
From the guilt
Your peers
On your table
So eager
Are unable
To ignore
The force
Of pressure
To conform
To their need
To reassure
Of their
By standing
On your life
With their inferiority
Of character
Of who you are
And what
Is your possession
A life
A future
Of promise
Of what they say
I witness
In you
A kind boy
Who loves easily
Who loves life
Who loves me
As I love you
The frustration
That you vocalize
In this time
Through the transition
To a life
Where your heart
Can run
By nothing
My son
But your own desires
Your own gifts
Your own ambitions
That who you are
Minus their conditions
Will light the fire
To burn
And I know this my son
I am your father


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      Mark Lecuona 6 years ago from Austin, Texas

      Thank you Minnetonka... it is easy to share what is real in my life because it is what is important. I want him to know I am there for him and that I understand the pressures that bear on his life. I know how a parent can possibly destroy a child's confidence and my goal is for him to know of my approval and that he is worthy of anything he wishes to be.

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      Linda Rogers 6 years ago from Minnesota

      This is so beautiful Suburban Poet. Your son is lucky to have a dad that is so there for him in his journey of life. I was also touched by your comment back to Saddlerider. How touching that your son is ok with you going to his school for lunch. That says a lot about what kind of dad you are. Thanks so much for sharing this piece of your heart with us.

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      Mark Lecuona 6 years ago from Austin, Texas

      @Leptirela - Thank you... I think about my children quite a bit and want life to be easier... Maybe I agonize over it all too much but the peer pressure and bullying are big things for me....

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      Leptirela 6 years ago from I don't know half the time

      Absolutely beautiful

      VOTE UP :)

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      Mark Lecuona 6 years ago from Austin, Texas

      You make me smile my friend. I thought of you as I wrote this. I mean that. I wanted you to feel the closeness that is developing between my son and I. He has an email account now and we communicate frequently and it's been great. I'm trying to bring the mix of the wise, confidant with the right touch of parenting and I think it's taking so far. He likes it when I go to his school to have a quick lunch; he said I could come anytime. I always ask, "Are you sure? I don't want to embarrass you" and he always say's, "My friends think you're a cool Dad.' So I have that going for me.... Regardless I want him to know that I'm in his corner and hopefully the strength of unconditional love and approval will give him a boost. He's still discovering himself and that is what this is about. I don't want someone who has a brief presence in his life (his peers) to have a lasting impact unless it is positive. I guess it's the typical parental worry.

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      saddlerider1 6 years ago

      I am truly blown away by this beautiful Prose to your son, I to have a young son who is in the discovery stages of his young life, so many questions, so many needed answers and we as father's are there for them.

      To stand tall with them, give them all the support we can and empress upon their souls the LOVE we feel inside for them and our desire for them to succeed. Bravo my friend, take a bow, rate way UP...loved it all.