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Reasons Why I Cry

Updated on April 25, 2014

I cry I cry I cry

Because inside it hurts

the lies the pain the rain is pouring

never ending its storming

all just a cycle how can anyone break free ?

The love is there

so close to touch but not so obvious to feel

the difference between what is and what is not

is if what is there is even real ?

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      Linda Rogers 3 years ago from Minnesota

      I like the pace and structure of this poem. Having a good cry is great medicine for all of us. Take care of yourself.

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      torrilynn 3 years ago

      @PeggyW i thank you for your comment and your words of moving forward.

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      Peggy Woods 3 years ago from Houston, Texas

      Hopefully with time you have determined what is real and have been able to put distance between yourself and whoever is causing you such pain. Crying can be a great release of emotions.

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      torrilynn 3 years ago

      @livingsta thanks for finding my hub beautiful and thanks for sharing with others.

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      torrilynn 3 years ago

      @prasetio30 you are more than welcome and I agree sometimes crying letting it out learning and moving forward can really help.

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      prasetio30 3 years ago from malang-indonesia

      Just cry makes me "relax" and I fell "free" after crying. Thanks for sharing. Voted up!

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      livingsta 3 years ago from United Kingdom

      Beautiful poem, thank you for sharing :-)

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      Martie Coetser 3 years ago from South Africa

      "....the difference between what is and what is not..."

      Nothing is ever perfect. I have to force myself to focus on the "what is" and not on the "what is not", because I know for sure that even if the "what if not" is it will contain the same amount of "what is not".

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      lyns 3 years ago from USA

      Another good poem, short and sweet why you cry, reminds me of a poem I wrote tears of the heart, I like your writing style, voted up A/B/

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      torrilynn 3 years ago

      @DDE thanks for commenting and I'm glad you understood my message.

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      Devika Primić 3 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Crying does relive pain and your words greatly felt here.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @ChitrangadaSharan I'm glad you found my poem expressive and I appreciate your words. Sometimes simplicity is better.

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      Chitrangada Sharan 4 years ago from New Delhi, India

      Very expressive poem and you did this in just a few words!

      Wonderful and voted up!

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @MsDora I thank you for commenting

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      Dora Weithers 4 years ago from The Caribbean

      You're very talented with spinning the words appropriately. Thank you for sharing.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @MelCarriere thank you for your words.

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      Mel Carriere 4 years ago from San Diego California

      Very heart felt poem, I could feel the sincerity.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @BlossomSB I thank you for enjoying my poem and you are right separating the two is hard but necessary at times. Thank you.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @AudreyHowitt thank you I will take care and I appreciate your comment and your understanding of how I feel.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @teaches12345 thank you for understanding how I feel. Your words and comment are much appreciated.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @aviannovice that is good insight indeed. Thanks.

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      torrilynn 4 years ago

      @rasta1 I agree thank you for your insight.

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      Marvin Parke 4 years ago from Jamaica

      That's just the reality of life, none shall escape pain

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      They say that writing it down is a good step to healing.

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      Dianna Mendez 4 years ago

      Lies will ruin any relationship. Your thoughts ring of the unjustice felt when one is misunderstood.

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      Audrey Howitt 4 years ago from California

      Take care--heart felt write!

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 4 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Sometimes it's hard to separate our thoughts and feelings and the realities of life. I enjoyed your poem, thank you for sharing.

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