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Remember Me, My Love

Updated on August 7, 2009

Remember Me

When the sun rises and the rays stream through the window

Remember me, right next to you

As the birds begin singing their early morning song

Remember me, across from you

Cup of coffee, fresh orange and paper in hand

Remember me, lips kissing you

Door closing gently, in the window I wave good bye

Remember me, watching you go

Tenderly I walk away, beginning my own day

Remember me, close to your heart

When the sun settles and the moon appears with the stars

Remember me, I welcome you

Our day apart ends, alas we are together

Remember me, my hand in yours

Serenity washes over, peace beckons my soul

Remember me, head on your chest

Begin the night, no ill has come, again we are safe

Remember me, unconscious tugs

Tonight sweet dreams begin to play, pulling us apart

Remember me, you dream away

Dark skies splattered in streaks of early light, stars wink off

Remember me, your eyes open

Fingers of light lifting veils of darkness, inch by inch

Remember me, a new day dawns

Soft, tingling caresses, unspoken words of love

Remember me

Written by:

Beth100

July 31, 2009

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      Beth100 6 years ago from Canada

      Movie Master -- Thank you Lesley. Cheers!

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      Movie Master 6 years ago from United Kingdom

      Beautifully expressed, a lovely poem.

      Voted up

      Best wishes Lesley

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      Beth100 6 years ago from Canada

      Magdelene -- Thank you, and I'm glad that you chose this one as your first. I haven't been back to this poem for a long time, and just rereading it stirs my inkling for writing again. Again, thank you. :)

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      Magdelene 6 years ago from Okotoks

      Of all your hubs this is the one I chose to read frist, simply because of the title and I'm very glad I did. Reminds me of Footprints for some reason and I'm not sure why. Very thought provoking, voted up and I think beautifully done.

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      Beth100 7 years ago from Canada

      Kennynext -- You're so sweet for saying this. Thank you very much. It is a compliment that I take to heart. :)

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      kennynext 7 years ago from Everywhere

      remembering and making new memories is what love is about. Many people miss out on really finding love, hopefully your poetry inspires more people to fall in love.

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      Beth100 8 years ago from Canada

      Brandonfan -- Thank you and I'm glad that you enjoyed this poem! :)

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      brandonfan 8 years ago from Mid West

      Very pretty Beth! :) I enjoyed reading this! :)

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      Beth100 8 years ago from Canada

      Hmrjmr1 -- Thank you very much for your compliment. I'll be looking for you next year. Happy New Year!

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      Hmrjmr1 8 years ago from Georgia, USA

      Beth - I join the Chorus of praise for a well done poem. Looking forward to reading more of your work in 2010. :)

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      Beth100 8 years ago from Canada

      Pearldiver -- Thank you. You have a wonderful Christmas too. May the New Year bring peace, light and health to you and your loved ones. :)

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      Rob Welsh 8 years ago from Tomorrow - In Words & NZ Time.

      Nicely written Beth. Have a great White Christmas. Thanks for sharing. Take care.

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      Beth100 8 years ago from Canada

      Misty -- Thank you a wonderful compliment. *blush* I am glad that you enjoyed this one too.

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      mistywild 8 years ago from Houston, TX (Proud Texan)

      another great one, should I expect any less? I think not :D

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      Beth100 8 years ago from Canada

      *grin* :)

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      Steven Escareno 8 years ago

      awww thanks. i like you a lot too. ;)

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      Beth100 8 years ago from Canada

      How could I not? ;)

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      Steven Escareno 8 years ago

      oh i see. lol. i guess that means you must really like me, huh? ;)

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      Beth100 8 years ago from Canada

      Can't say. They'll probably shut my hub down.... lol

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      Steven Escareno 8 years ago

      whats so funny? :)

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      Beth100 8 years ago from Canada

      lol :)

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      Steven Escareno 8 years ago

      i'll bet your really cute when you blush ;)

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      Beth100 8 years ago from Canada

      I never kiss and tell. *blushing again* ;)

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      Steven Escareno 8 years ago

      why are you blushing my dear? ;)

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      Beth100 8 years ago from Canada

      *blushing* lol ;)

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      Steven Escareno 8 years ago

      sure, anything for a lady. ;)

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      Beth100 8 years ago from Canada

      lol Please, and could you untie them as you kiss them? :)

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      Steven Escareno 8 years ago

      lol. sorry to get your fingers tangled earlier. are you okay? would you like me to kiss them to make them feel better? lol j/k

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      Beth100 8 years ago from Canada

      Steven -- Ah, my tangled fingers thank you! (but they never tangle otherwise!) lol

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      Steven Escareno 8 years ago

      your welcome. its okay you can call me steven. besides thats my real name anyway, so i don't mind.

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      Beth100 8 years ago from Canada

      Stevennix2001 -- Okay, I'm just gonna call you Steven from now on, k? My fingers get all tangled up with xxxs and numbers lol I'm really glad that you enjoyed my poem.

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      Steven Escareno 8 years ago

      wow, thats a very deep and thought provoking poem. i wish i could write something that beautiful. i loved reading your poem.

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      Beth100 8 years ago from Canada

      Ralwus -- Why, thank you for your generous comments! My hand is always here -- just reach out! I love that stone too!

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      ralwus 8 years ago

      Well I for one shall not forget your words that pull me in like clean fresh laundry through my window with the smell of fresh Spring air. Wonderful stuff here. I long to hold your hand like that now and feel you flow through my aged hand. "Fingers of light lifting darkness..." wonderful. And I love that stone at the bottom.

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      Beth100 8 years ago from Canada

      To receive such praise from you MPM, is a great honor. Thank you!

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      manlypoetryman 8 years ago from (Texas !) Boldly Writing Poems Where No Man Has Gone Before...

      Wow...Oh, Wow...Such great lines centered around..."Remember me"...I'm sorry, Beth 100...but I wish I would've thought of this statement theme...and how you presented it...FIRST! "Remember Me" is a great poetry read!

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      Beth100 8 years ago from Canada

      Thank you Prasetio30!

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      prasetio30 8 years ago from malang-indonesia

      nice poem. thanks for share.

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      Beth100 8 years ago from Canada

      Thank you for your kind words Brenda! :)

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      \Brenda Scully 8 years ago

      brilliant poem well done

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      Beth100 8 years ago from Canada

      Thank you Dohn121!

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      dohn121 8 years ago from Hudson Valley, New York

      Great poem, Beth! I like your imagery.

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      Beth100 8 years ago from Canada

      Lgali - Thank you for your visit!

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      Lgali 8 years ago

      I Love this part- Remember me, a new day dawns

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      Beth100 8 years ago from Canada

      Invictus -- Love your avatar and name!!! Thanks for dropping by!

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      I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s 8 years ago

      Beautifully expressed!

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      Beth100 8 years ago from Canada

      Deepthought - Gotta love that warm and fuzzy feeling! Thank you!

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      deepthought 8 years ago

      Thoughts that warm the heart and words that whisper to the soul, thank you for sharing

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      Beth100 8 years ago from Canada

      Larry - It's definitely love that helps the world go round and round! Thank you!

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      maven101 8 years ago from Northern Arizona

      Very expressive, Beth...Love is what holds it all together; memories, passions, longings...Thank you for this...Larry

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      Beth100 8 years ago from Canada

      Once again, thank you John for coming by and visiting. Yes, I believe we all want to be remembered. So many daily tasks that keep us busy, but at the end of the day, we want love and to love.

      Mimi -- Thank you for taking the time to come and reading.

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      mimi 2012 8 years ago from Ottawa

      This is absolutely beautiful!! Well done... ;-)

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      John Chancellor 8 years ago from Tennessee

      Beautiful.

      I think your sentiments express what we all want - to be remembered. And the best way to be remembered is to remember - in all the little things and little ways and surely we will be remembered.

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