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Remember Me, My Love

Remember Me
When the sun rises and the rays stream through the window
Remember me, right next to you
As the birds begin singing their early morning song
Remember me, across from you
Cup of coffee, fresh orange and paper in hand
Remember me, lips kissing you
Door closing gently, in the window I wave good bye
Remember me, watching you go
Tenderly I walk away, beginning my own day
Remember me, close to your heart
When the sun settles and the moon appears with the stars
Remember me, I welcome you
Our day apart ends, alas we are together
Remember me, my hand in yours
Serenity washes over, peace beckons my soul
Remember me, head on your chest
Begin the night, no ill has come, again we are safe
Remember me, unconscious tugs
Tonight sweet dreams begin to play, pulling us apart
Remember me, you dream away
Dark skies splattered in streaks of early light, stars wink off
Remember me, your eyes open
Fingers of light lifting veils of darkness, inch by inch
Remember me, a new day dawns
Soft, tingling caresses, unspoken words of love
Remember me
Written by:
Beth100
July 31, 2009

Comments
Beautifully expressed, a lovely poem.
Voted up
Best wishes Lesley
Of all your hubs this is the one I chose to read frist, simply because of the title and I'm very glad I did. Reminds me of Footprints for some reason and I'm not sure why. Very thought provoking, voted up and I think beautifully done.
remembering and making new memories is what love is about. Many people miss out on really finding love, hopefully your poetry inspires more people to fall in love.
Very pretty Beth! :) I enjoyed reading this! :)
Beth - I join the Chorus of praise for a well done poem. Looking forward to reading more of your work in 2010. :)
Nicely written Beth. Have a great White Christmas. Thanks for sharing. Take care.
another great one, should I expect any less? I think not :D
awww thanks. i like you a lot too. ;)
oh i see. lol. i guess that means you must really like me, huh? ;)
whats so funny? :)
i'll bet your really cute when you blush ;)
why are you blushing my dear? ;)
sure, anything for a lady. ;)
lol. sorry to get your fingers tangled earlier. are you okay? would you like me to kiss them to make them feel better? lol j/k
your welcome. its okay you can call me steven. besides thats my real name anyway, so i don't mind.
wow, thats a very deep and thought provoking poem. i wish i could write something that beautiful. i loved reading your poem.
Well I for one shall not forget your words that pull me in like clean fresh laundry through my window with the smell of fresh Spring air. Wonderful stuff here. I long to hold your hand like that now and feel you flow through my aged hand. "Fingers of light lifting darkness..." wonderful. And I love that stone at the bottom.
Wow...Oh, Wow...Such great lines centered around..."Remember me"...I'm sorry, Beth 100...but I wish I would've thought of this statement theme...and how you presented it...FIRST! "Remember Me" is a great poetry read!
nice poem. thanks for share.
brilliant poem well done
Great poem, Beth! I like your imagery.
I Love this part- Remember me, a new day dawns
Beautifully expressed!
Thoughts that warm the heart and words that whisper to the soul, thank you for sharing
Very expressive, Beth...Love is what holds it all together; memories, passions, longings...Thank you for this...Larry
This is absolutely beautiful!! Well done... ;-)
Beautiful.
I think your sentiments express what we all want - to be remembered. And the best way to be remembered is to remember - in all the little things and little ways and surely we will be remembered.
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