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I Promise To Be A Better Man

Updated on April 21, 2013

I admit
I accept
Am every thing that you do not deserve

Am a fool
Being too blind to see
You are everything any man could desire

You are right
I cannot deny
You have every reason to leave

But darling
If you would let me try
I promise, I will be a better man

Hit me
I deserve it
Despise me
You've being patient for too long.

Honey..
You can walk away
But should you decide to stay
I promise, I will be a better man.

You choose me out of the thousand
You stood before the World
And declare Is me that you love
You broke your best friends heart.

Am everything you've ever dream of
Those where the words that ended your Vows
You where promised the World
You refused
"Said without me, the World was Void

All of this scarifies you made
Just for Me to be there when you call.
And I failed..
Am a fool
And should you decide to leave
Am all there is to blame

But Honey...
One more try
And I Promise To Be A Better Man
Should I make you cry after now
Walk away,
I don't and I have never deserve you..

But please
Just this once
Stay..
And I Promise To Be A Better Man..


Darling

I will make each day worth a Million Smile!

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      Ov Overo 6 years ago from Oklahoma

      hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm... A perfect way to end my very hectic day.. thanks for droping by once more... You are God's sent

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 6 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      Capedium.. I really loved this hub.. You did such a great job at this.. Just had to visit again.

      Have an awesome weekend my friend

      Debbie

    • Capedium profile image
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      Ov Overo 6 years ago from Oklahoma

      Sorry Ian.. Am already blushing.. lol!!.. You are all great.. Lots of love...

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      Ian D Hetri 6 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      Hi mary615,

      You don't wanna imagine making him blush with your comment here...lolz..enjoy his poems to..great stuff bro..keep going

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      Mary Hyatt 6 years ago from Florida

      You are such a romantic man! You write beautiful poems that I enjoy. Thanks.

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      Capedium! 6 years ago

      Every comment I get just keeps making me smile..

      And am still smiling

    • Ian Dabasori Hetr profile image

      Ian D Hetri 6 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      Woh! This is brilliant I'm sure you are a genius. The words so perfectly rhyme with the wonderful photos. I taste some romance in the poem. How sweet of you.

      Great hub and you have my vote.

    • Capedium profile image
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      Ov Overo 6 years ago from Oklahoma

      Tobusiness.. You are so nice. Thanks for your lovely remarks.. You making me feel like star...

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 6 years ago from Lincolnshire, U.K

      Capedium, Absolutely beautiful,very romantic, love it. voting up

    • Capedium profile image
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      Ov Overo 6 years ago from Oklahoma

      Thanks.. That's all I want to say.. Thanks .. Lots Of Smiles.

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      Sueswan 6 years ago

      Hi Capedium

      It takes a big man to admit when he is wrong.

      This one is so romantic, heartfelt and sincere.

      Your passion and vulnerability shine through and your words show how much you want to make everything right.

      Voted up and away!

    • Capedium profile image
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      Ov Overo 6 years ago from Oklahoma

      You just put a smile on my face, and it wouldn't seize.

      Thanks for your beautiful remark

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 6 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      wow this is so romantic.. You are so good at this. Your sweetheart must love this.. voted way up

      debbie

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