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Spirits Sat as Mourners (Frank - Jodah - Moms)

Updated on April 8, 2014
Creatures of the Dark
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Berlioz

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4/8/14

But those holy words are no match for me... the Beast.
I would end this tale
with a venomous wail,
as I allow those creatures who live in the dark
to tear your very soul apart,
as they stare into the solemn face
of the hypocrisy who would try to change your fate.
It is futile to search for light
when you didn't take such care in life.
Now my dear just rest your head.
Regret has no use for the dead.
Take your place upon this dark road that offers no grace
for you have made no grand contribution to the human race
& tho your soul has fed the beast in me
there is no need to take these things personally
for what you've sowed has now been reaped
& this is just a job to me.

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      Lissette 2 years ago from Central Florida

      Jo_Goldsmith, It seems that your wonderful comment got lost in the 30+ other 'junk mail' comments and I am sorry for that. I am so happy to read your comment and to hear that you enjoyed the writing.

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      Jo_Goldsmith11 3 years ago

      wow! How in the world did I miss this entry? This was amazing!

      It sent cold chills through me and the hair stood up on the back of my neck! Awesome writing! Shared, Up +++ and tweeted too. :-)

      So glad I finally found and read this. :-) Blessings!

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      Lissette 3 years ago from Central Florida

      I would secretly hope that my writing would be pure fiction and would not remind anyone of anyone else. That is my dreamer side and so far from the truth. I am so happy that you enjoyed it Daniel.

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      newenglandsun 3 years ago

      I liked it--the priest thought he was doing God's will but instead, he was sealing his own fate to that of unison with the beast via his own hypocrisy...it reminds me of own parish priest.

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      Lissette 3 years ago from Central Florida

      Frank, visit as often as you like. I do so love your company and am always happy to have you.

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      Lissette 3 years ago from Central Florida

      Thank you for the visit FlourishAnyway. I like a little wicked perspective now and again. So happy you enjoyed it.

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      still came back to read this piece again moms... and still wowed!!!

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      FlourishAnyway 3 years ago from USA

      This is a wicked one! Loved it and those images that you created with Frank and John's poems.

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      Lissette 3 years ago from Central Florida

      Gypsies do like to take journeys, don't they. What a pleasure to have you down one of my paths. My paths do so love gypsies. Hope to see you again. Thank you.

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      Lissette 3 years ago from Central Florida

      Always exploring... I love your choice of words. What a great compliment. Thank you for taking the time to visit me here.

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      Lissette 3 years ago from Central Florida

      Nice idea Shyron. I am glad that you enjoyed it.

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      Lissette 3 years ago from Central Florida

      Thank you tobusiness... I do not fear the dark and really think that beasts get a pretty bad rap for doing what they were created to do. So happy you enjoyed it.

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      Lissette 3 years ago from Central Florida

      Hi Frank! Thanks for inventing the ride. It was fun to hop on and play.

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      Lissette 3 years ago from Central Florida

      Hi Jodah. I am glad you liked it. Of coarse I don't mind you taking your gift. It was intended for you after all. Love is a strong word and compliment... I will take it with a huge smile. Thank you.

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      Lissette 3 years ago from Central Florida

      Nice to see you again Audrey! I look forward to reading more of you too. Thank you.

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      Lissette 3 years ago from Central Florida

      Kevin, thank you so much for all the actions you took in addition to commenting. That is awesome of you. Glad you enjoyed it.

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      Lissette 3 years ago from Central Florida

      Phylis, it usually does take a lot of time but I found a pretty decent site that shortens it. These sites always have their limitations but this one is not so bad and shortens the process a lot. I can get it for you if you like.

      Honoring the authors was the most important thing to me. :)

      Thanks for the blushing compliments. :)

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      A most fascinating journey.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      Wow, This is beastly and marvelous. Great addition to Frank's challenge. Thumbs up...

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      Cheryl A Whitsett 3 years ago from Jacksonville, Fl

      You did a wonderful job here. Voted up.

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      Shyron E Shenko 3 years ago from Texas

      Moms - how wonderful, I enjoyed this so very much.

      I hope that Frank will put these in a book and publish it in hard copy of which I want 1.

      Awesome Pictures too.

      Voted up, ABI, shared and pinned to AH (Awesome HubPages)

      Shyron

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      Jo Alexis-Hagues 3 years ago from Bedfordshire, U.K

      Mom-Secret, a dark and stylish tour de force. I loved that you wrote from the Devil's point of view. Brilliantly done.

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      Frank Atanacio 3 years ago from Shelton

      wow moms this too was amazing :)

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      John Hansen 3 years ago from Queensland Australia

      Wow, this is amazing Moms-Secret, you have taken it all to a whole new level. Thanks for going to all the trouble to do this. I'll use the one you did of my verse on my hub if you don't mind. Love your stanza. Voted up.

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      Audrey Howitt 3 years ago from California

      Really well done! Looking forward to more!

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      The Examiner-1 3 years ago

      Moms-Secret,

      Neat addition to their entries. I voted it thumbs up, pinned it and shared it.

      Kevin

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      Phyllis Doyle Burns 3 years ago from High desert of Nevada.

      They do honor the authors, Moms. I was amazed and know that kind of work is time consuming and takes creative talent. I am impressed.

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      Lissette 3 years ago from Central Florida

      Phyllis - Nice to see you. I am glad that you enjoyed it. I rather like to explore a little beast now and again. The images - You noticing them gave me a big kool-aid smile! I think creating those took the longest. I knew if I made them, I wouldn't have to worry about my hub being taken down for repeated content. I do love how they turned out. I feel like they honor their original works and authors.

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      Lissette 3 years ago from Central Florida

      What wonderful compliments Faith Reaper. Thank you so much for coming to enjoy it and then leaving such beautiful words. I am taken back by how much I enjoyed the challenge. I have never done one before and only read about it today. I do love Frank and his works. I am sure that had a lot to do with my trying it today, hahaha... biases.

      Much love faith!

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      Lissette 3 years ago from Central Florida

      Thank you Billy! I am glad that you enjoyed it.

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      Phyllis Doyle Burns 3 years ago from High desert of Nevada.

      Very good, Moms. This really takes us deep into the realm of beasties. Very dark, and very well done. I love what you did with the images.

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Wow, Lissette, this is superb and certainly in keeping with the theme!

      Up and more, tweeting, pinning and sharing

      So thrilled you have joined in Frank's month of Poetry challenge.

      Blessings,

      Faith Reaper

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      Bill Holland 3 years ago from Olympia, WA

      I love the response to Frank's challenge. Well done!