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THE PRICED JEWEL- A PROPOSAL

Updated on May 09, 2012

THE PRICED JEWEL [A LOVE PROPOSAL]

I am happy
I am fulfilled
My joy boundless
My heart sweetened

My dear one
You ve flavoured my life
You ve made me special
You ve given me love
my sweet damsel
You re my life

I can't say it but i feel it
I can't see it but i know it
You ve conquered my heart beautiful damsel
You ve stolen my breath
I feel every inch yours
My life would be ruined without you

How beautiful you are
How gorgeous you ve become
How exotic and exquisite
How loving and caring
How unique and precious

My love and my heart
Take me and lead me
Guide me and save me
Make me your better-half

I give you my heart
Take it cos you deserve it
You ve mesmerized me with you love
You ve bribed me with your charm

With my life I promise you faithfulness
I pledge to love you till eternity
I will never hurt you
You re divine

You ve conquered me with your kindness
I can't live without you
please, gorgeous sweetheart be mine.

A love poem written by
Ubani Alexander Thandi

PLEASE I WILL DO FURTHER EDITING AND OTHER NECESSARY ADDITION (S) LATER

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      Angelme566 4 years ago

      This is such a very romantic poem , its oozing with love and affection.Love is a divine thing..must be express !

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      Gail Sobotkin 4 years ago from South Carolina

      So great to see a new hub written by you.

      Thanks for sharing this stunningly beautiful love poem with us.

      Voted up, beautiful, awesome and interesting.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

      Hi Ubani,

      It feels great to read your new hub.

      Feelings of love and longing is so wonderful in this poem.

      I just loved your work.

      Happy hubbing!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. This is a wonderful love poem.

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      Frank Atanacio 4 years ago from Shelton

      Uban gotta hand it to you this was amazingly awesome !!!!

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      Sueswan 4 years ago

      Hi Ubani

      Beautiful,heartfelt precious and romantic. A true treasure.

      Voted up and away!

      Have a wonderful day. :)

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      b. Malin 4 years ago

      Hi Uban, you my Friend, are a True Romantic... This is a Lovely, Love Poem, straight from a man in Love! So glad you're back, missed your Hubs. My Votes of UP, and Beautiful go to you.

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      Joyce Haragsim 4 years ago from Southern Nevada

      I think I've found another Mr. Romantic. This is an amazing poem.

      Vote up and awesome.

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      Jessee R 4 years ago from Gurgaon, India

      Love and romance painted beautifully!

      Good one :)

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      snakeslane 4 years ago from Canada

      So very nice...I am in awe. Regards, snakeslane

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      JT Walters 4 years ago from Florida

      Ubani,

      The women must fall at your feet in your country. You have the most power and seductive words in poetry I have read in a very long time. And if it stirs me here in North America then the women in Nigeria must be chasing you through the streets.

      Almost perfect wedding vows.

      Cheers!!

      JT

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 4 years ago from Lagos

      LOL at Jt, really amazing reading this sweet and wonderful words.

      @Angelme566, surely, true love is divine. if you capture it, do not let it slip. i am glad for your kind and amazing comment. be blessed.

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 4 years ago from Lagos

      dear Happyboomernurse, i am glad to read your wonderful comment. i pray that all the good things of life follow your path. missed you all. glad to be back

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 4 years ago from Lagos

      to my ever kind and hardworking friend Vinaya Ghimire, i am glad to read your lines again. sorry for my absence here but i surely will find my rhythm and take my place here. i wish you all the best Sir. lots of love

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 4 years ago from Lagos

      my dear Gypsy Rose Lee, those great words from you gladden my heart. i can only but wish you all the best of life. you are most blessed

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      Joanna Chandler 4 years ago from On planet Earth

      Hi nice poem ubani ;)

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 4 years ago from Lagos

      Thanks to Frank for the wonderful comment. YOu re amazingly awesome too. All the best to you!

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 4 years ago from Lagos

      A big thanks to Sueswan for a most awesome comment, a true treasure. Be most blessed

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 4 years ago from Lagos

      Dear b. Malin, your motivational comment is most treasured and appreciated. You re golden. Thanks

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 4 years ago from Lagos

      Wow! Writer20, blushing i am. Am really glad to read your comment. You rock!

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 4 years ago from Lagos

      Dear Rahul, you ve painted my heart with those beautiful words. Be blessed

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 4 years ago from Lagos

      Writer20,

      Jt,

      Snakeslane

      ???nd M????????? own Fiddler,

      You all are adorable, sweet ???nd charming. Lots of love

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      James A Watkins 4 years ago from Chicago

      This is truly a lovely poem. Well done! I enjoyed it.

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 4 years ago from Lagos

      Thanks Sir for the encouraging thought.

      Be most blessed.

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      Kamalesh050 4 years ago from Sahaganj, Dist. Hooghly, West Bengal, India

      Wow, what a lovely romantic poem and so sweet! Great work my friend.

      Voted Up & Awesome. Best Wishes, Kamalesh

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 4 years ago from Lagos

      thanks dear for your kind and wonderful expressions. i am so delighted. be most blessed. thanks

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