The Hood’s Stoop
I sat on the stoop in the hood~
While a white plastic grocery bag alone blew by~
In the chilly winter early morn~
Rolling away low on the broken, cracked sidewalk~
Like a tumbleweed in a ghost town~
It soon disappeared in the distance~
Further down multitudes of roads~
With mish mashed homesteads~
As I still sat cold and alone on the stoop~
Pondering various places~
The tumble bag visited.
By Lisa J. Warner AKA Lisa Luv
CopyRight1/30/2014@LisaLuvLLC
Comments
AUTHORThank you so much aviannovice~~ It certainly made me ponder a lot...that one little tumble weed... LOL I constantly ponder things... I guess that goes with the territory of a writers mind. Have a great day!
An interesting concept…could it simply be forgotten trash, the trash of society, or the trash that we all discard on a daily basis? Nice work, Lisa.
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Gypsy Rose Lee I am so glad you could relate! I had the opportunity of sitting on the stoop in the hood while taking care of an injured friend for an extenuating time just recently....generally I sit on my porch in the country...So I was happy to experience a different view.. there might be more stooping experiences to write about in the future for me as well. THANK YOU!!!!!! Have a great day!!!!
Enjoyed this! Thanks for reminding me of my stoop sitting days in NYC.
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KOOL CrisSp !!!! Thank you so much!!!
I was there Lisa....I saw you! Touching thoughts, brilliant write.
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teaches12345 I am so glad it touched you...Happy day to you and Thank you very much..
This reminds me of my childhood home. We saw the world from our front porch or stoop. Your share is touching.
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Eiddwen~~~Thank you so much...sorry my friend I have been away so much lately.... and unfortunately I will be having to go away again for about a week...as I prepare and will assist my 83 year old mother with an operation she is going to have.... But know I appreciate your friendship and love you dearly my gifted friend..
Brilliant Lisa;voted up,shared and here's wishing you a great day.
Eddy.
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Vellur, Jodah, rdsparrowriter Thank you all so much! I am thrilled you came and visited some of my world... May you all have a wonderful day!!!! LOVE YA!!!
Nicely written :) I sometimes enjoy my time wondering and dreaming seated like that ...
Amazing how a small amount of words can be so descriptive and conjure up an image. Well done.
Great poem, loved this one.
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Great Bk42author .... Thank you....and very glad to meet you!!!
Love this! Reminds me of when I used to sit for hours with my family on our stoop!
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sallybea Thank you....I was away for a long time in the hood in contrast to my home environment taking care of an injured friend, so I was able to see a different world and could not wait to put some of my observations and thoughts down in writing....!!!!
Lisa Luv - just my kind of writing! This one caught my immediately - sometimes a picture tells a hundred words and the words did not disappoint either. Thank you.
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Nell Rose Thank you so much! May you have an awesome day!
That was awesome lisa! so simple and yet a second in someones life just pondering the world going by, wonderful! voted across!
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