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The Beauty Who Made Me See Stars (limerick)

Updated on November 14, 2013

It wasn’t cute girl sitting there

That brought on the stars in the air

Or dreams I begat

At what I stared at

It was how wife’s bat parted hair


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      Deb Hirt 3 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Ouch!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 3 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Anger is a wasted emotion and dangerous

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      Victor W. Kwok 3 years ago from Hawaii

      Never make your wife angry.

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      Linda Crampton 3 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

      She sounds like an interesting wife!

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      Bronwen Scott-Branagan 3 years ago from Victoria, Australia

      Love 'til you part? A great chuckle today!

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      drbj and sherry 3 years ago from south Florida

      Guess from now on, you ought to wear a hard hat,

      Which might soften the blow of your wife's handy bat.

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 3 years ago from Southern Illinois

      I'm still laughing..

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      DJ Anderson 3 years ago

      You have a profoundly deep understanding of women! LOL

      I love it!!

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      Faith Reaper 3 years ago from southern USA

      Ouch ... that would make for one good part there : )

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      Shauna L Bowling 3 years ago from Central Florida

      Gee, the wife that appears in your limericks is just flat out mean. Maybe it's time to trade in for a softer model!

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      wetnosedogs 3 years ago from Alabama

      You are the funny one.