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The Problem Was What I Thought (limerick)

Updated on January 31, 2015

I just wasn’t feeling so hot

So my doctor’s advice I sought

He ran tests on me

Till cause was set free

I suffered what he called a thought


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      Devika Primić 4 years ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      Thought scan get out of controlling the mind take care on that note

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      Vinaya Ghimire 4 years ago from Nepal

      Food for thought. Lovely!

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      Michelle Liew 4 years ago from Singapore

      Ah, we all need a doctor when we think too much! Thanks for sharing, Hatter!

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      travmaj 4 years ago from australia

      Thoughts can be a problem - nice to have it confirmed....

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      drbj and sherry 4 years ago from south Florida

      Don't fret, Martin, it happens to the best,

      Just think of it as an intelligence test.

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      DJ Anderson 4 years ago

      Got to watch those thoughts. They can rear up and bite you, when you least expect it!!

      I like your sense of humor.


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      Eiddwen 4 years ago from Wales

      Thinking to much will give us a headache but I am glad that it gave you the notion to compose this great Limerick.Have a great day.


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      breakfastpop 4 years ago

      Thinking can be dangerous to one's health.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Hmmmmm well a thought to take care to be fit enough not to go to Doc wishes....thank you for this one also. Votes up funny and shared.

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      Faith Reaper 4 years ago from southern USA

      A thought, oh my, poor guy . . . lol

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      Lena Kovadlo 4 years ago from Staten Island, NY

      Not sure if the flow was perfect but I still enjoyed the limerick. Thank you for sharing.

      You seem to be a lover of limericks. If you write enough of them (or maybe you already have enough written) you can gather them together in a book. :)

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      Bill Holland 4 years ago from Olympia, WA

      That is quite a burden to carry. :)