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My Flower - Love Poem

Updated on April 7, 2012
Delicate Flower
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I hastened to press myself upon you

Wanting a bond and hoping to break through.

Seems to be the oldest cliché of all

One step forward then two steps back we fall.

Know I’m here for you if you should decide

You no longer need to run and to hide.



My child my friend my one to behold

Something special is nigh is what I was told.

Little flower so delicate in a troubled world

Hide lacy petals and shrink away - terror is here

Tremble with the wind but not out of fear

Whispered rains can soothe your weary soul

Sleep soundly sweet baby, sleep sound tonight.



16 out of 30 A short poem :)
16 out of 30 A short poem :)

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      Sondra 5 years ago from Neverland

      Thanks alocsin :) Shame that the person I wrote this for doesn't even know!! Oh well - isnt that the way love can go?

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      alocsin 5 years ago from Orange County, CA

      Great comparisons between love and the flower. Voting this Up and Beautiful.

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      Sondra 5 years ago from Neverland

      Hello Audrey :) Thank you so much...this poem is particularly special to me so I appreciate you reviving it.

      Thank you savanah :)

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      savanahl 5 years ago

      What an incredible poem. So sweet and beautiful.

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      Audrey Howitt 5 years ago from California

      Tremble with the wind but not out of fear

      Whispered rains can soothe your weary soul

      Sleep soundly sweet baby, sleep sound tonight.

      Beautiful Ardie!

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      Sondra 5 years ago from Neverland

      Thanks! Luv you too Haunty :)

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      Haunty 5 years ago from Hungary

      I love you, Ardie!

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      Sondra 5 years ago from Neverland

      Hi perfectperception and thank you again :)

      Hi Muchime, I appreciate that SO much!!!

      Hello Tammy, thank you and Im so glad you stopped in :)

      Hi Fullerman, thank you for appreciating my poem....I will keep it up ;)

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      Ryan Fuller 5 years ago from Louisiana, USA

      very nice and great words of beauty. Great job on this poem. Keep up the good work.

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      Tammy 5 years ago from North Carolina

      Very touching! Great poem!

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      nuchime 5 years ago from philippines

      lovely poem...I'm always your FAN! nuchime...:)

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      perfectperception 5 years ago from USA

      Really nice one! Voted up. Well worth the vote up

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      Sondra 5 years ago from Neverland

      Fiddleman, thank you – I was worried I wouldn’t do justice to the way I was feeling when I wrote it :)

      Christoph, it is only half as sweet as you!

      Capedium, thank you so much :)

      Cagsil, good to see you here! Im glad you like my poem – I never saw you as a poetry guy.

      Ian, Im glad you enjoyed it! Its short and hopefully sweet :)

      RHW, you’re one of my biggest sources of support! Thank you and thank you and thank you again :)

      Writer20, thank you so much! I appreciate the votes too

      Perfectperception, thank you thank you and thank you :)

      Rebeccamealey, that means so much! I get really nervous publishing poetry…I never know if my words come through.

      Hello Haunty and PCC, another two of my biggest supports! Luv you both :) Im glad you guys enjoyed this and PCC I WILL keep going going going. I cant let you and Haunty down!

      Hello Raci, thank you :)

      AA Zavala, thank you! You’re pretty sweet too. Wait, what? You meant the poem and not me oh hahah Thank you still :)

      Vinaya, wow! I really appreciate that comment from you – I always enjoy your poetry and photography! As soon as this 30/30 is over I will be catching up on ALL of it

      Hello Gypsy, thank you so much!

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 5 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Awesome and beautiful.

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      Vinaya Ghimire 5 years ago from Nepal

      Your flower imagery is lovely.

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      Augustine A Zavala 5 years ago from Texas

      Awwww, so sweet...

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      Steve Mitchell 5 years ago from Cambridgeshire

      Sweet, sweet, sweet! I love your poetry, keep doing doing doing it! Not many to go now, keep going, going, going until they are done, done, done!

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      raciniwa 5 years ago from Naga City, Cebu

      such soothing words...

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      Haunty 5 years ago from Hungary

      This poem is truly the most touching one I ever remember reading. Thank you. You made my day. :D

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      Rebecca Mealey 5 years ago from Northeastern Georgia, USA

      Cool, sweet, yeah you ARE quite the poet.

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      perfectperception 5 years ago from USA

      Wow, wow and wow, is all i can say. Wonderful. voted up

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      Joyce Haragsim 5 years ago from Southern Nevada

      Ardie, your poem is so beautiful. Voted up and awesome.

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      Kelly Umphenour 5 years ago from St. Louis, MO

      Its beautiful and very meaningful:). Awesome job and way to keeeeppppp going:)

      Your a kind soul:)

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      Ian D Hetri 5 years ago from Papua New Guinea

      This is a beautiful poem. Really enjoyed reading it..

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      Cagsil 5 years ago from USA or America

      Hey Ardie, a very interesting poem. Thank you for sharing your feelings. :)

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      Capedium 5 years ago from Texas.

      Sweet.. and beautiful..

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      Christoph Reilly 5 years ago from St. Louis

      Very sweet.

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      Fiddleman 5 years ago

      This is so beautiful.