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Two Mismatched Sandals

Updated on January 24, 2013

A young girl walks through the Holiday gas station parking lot on the west side of town. It's a foggy drizzly night, street lamps illuminate wisps of fog like a tunnel onto sparkling asphalt. She holds herself tight together, arms crisscrossed. Standing in front of the door, she wipes her cheeks, takes a deep breath and pulls the door open.

The attendants resembling uniformity in dress stand apart. The one with brown hair and bright brown eyes; his name tag "Brian" unpacking a carton of marb lights. The other; bald, big and blue is counting the cash. They stop to look at whoever set off the ringing bells. Slim wearing wrinkly jeans over a torn baggy flannel and two mismatched sandals. She looks like all the other west D-town street rats until they see her face; a sore sight. Her eyes are swollen and red looking like rose petals and blue fire, full lips and high cheekbones. Brian's features relax and he frowns seeing her jawline bruised with hand-prints. He feels something here forcing questions to flow and his eyes seem full.

"Can I use your phone?" her voice soft and cowed she looks to the one counting cash.

"Pay phones outside sweets," he points towards the other side of the lot, a glowing Mcdonalds sign making everything yellow. Tears fall one by one, quickly she turns to walk out. Brian's mouth opens as his manager looks for affirmation.

"Wait a minute girl, come back here. I've seen you here before. You're that Arizona girl." She nods. "Are you alright?"

"Ya, fine, just need to use a phone," sniffling, searching her pockets, "I don't have any money, I left my wallet and well everything at..."

"Don't worry, here's the phone," handing her the handset he asks, "the number is?", and she takes a deep breath.

"Thank-you, it's 624-7343."

"ring ring ring.."

Ring Ring Ring...

In the basement of a 3 story house all the way in the back, past the cellar and laundry room is a room with cement walls and posters everywhere. A smoky haze lingers the room, it's filled with ashtrays overflowing, and bottles of whiskey, brandy and vodka lining the basement window ledges painted white. Pink Floyds 'Wish you were here' is playing and Dennis sits humming and foot tapping to the tune. Impatient; wondering how much longer Joey and Lance can go on arguing whose better at dragon slaying. Getting up he grabs for Joeys PlayStation controller,

"Shut up- Joey, let us show you how to do this." laughing he tosses it back as he hears the phone ringing. Flinching internally as he hears shuffling upstairs. It's late for a school night. Eye-brow raised he answers curiously.

"Hello," pause, " Are you alright?", pause, "okay, where are you?," pause, "Ya, get over here, come to the window." He hangs up. Tall, dark and dorky Joey butts out his cigarette," and asks, "Who was that?"


Lance looks up his eyes featured through wisps of dark curls, his stock becomes hard, he looks taller than his typical short frame.

"Is she alright? We should pound that mother fucker!"

"Listen, just be cool ok?" Dennis giving Lance a meaningful look.

Frankie hands the phone back to to manager, mumbling a thank you. He leans forward as Frankie begins to walk out, he presses in grabbing the front of her flannel he pulls her closer to the counter.

"Listen doll, my name is Mike, if you need me to take care of something... just let me know," his fingers grab her chin, running along her bruised jaw line,"ok?"


"Go get yourself something to drink and get out of here." inclining his head towards the coolers.
She grabs a Sprite and runs out the door.

The moon sure is pretty tonight hiding behinds the clouds of fog. Like a giant unwrapped gift all the joy of it is still there, just protected, for none to see. She tries to see through the clouds and forgets to be quiet as she passes the green house on the end,"Oh shit! That damn dog!" Barking loudly she walks by as carefully inching along quietly, even still like a game of domino's; one more dog barking, then two then all the dogs are yowling by the time she makes it past Harold St. I just woke the whole neighborhood! Anxious she begins to run, just 3 more blocks to go. All the houses close together she listens to her flip flop flop and her sandals thud her heart in time too a stitch searing her side.

Her breath ragged she curses her asthma and stops to slow the stitch then walks to the side of the house. She opens the window, feet first she lowers herself. A hand grabs her feet guiding them towards the washer, feet shuffle, that must be Dennis.
"That better be you Dennis!"
Dennis laughs and grabs her feet. "Nice shoes Frankie, couldn't decide the occasion?" Grabbing her hand she jumps to the floor.

"Thought I'd let you figure what to do with me. A luau or camping next to the river, you decide!" She smiles and he reaches a hand out towards her hair, watching her flinch and look ahead past him he reaches still, combing her wild hair behind an ear, seeing bruises graze her neck; softness washes his features and Frankie looks away, a tear falling, then two.

"Hey, hey.. come here." Hugging her close he holds on as long as she will let him. Rubbing her back, welts forming Frankie shrugs him off letting the sting subside.
"Come on, I got a treat for ya in there."

Walking into the smoky room, wiping her cheeks dry there sit Joey and Lance debating heatedly about magic wands and extra lives and like seeing a tub of ice cream warm comfort fills her.

They notice her and say together; "You just couldn't stand being away could you?" Big dumb smiles on both their faces.

"Ya that's it," rolling her eyes, "more like Dennis said he needed help baby sitting." She punches Lance in the shoulder and takes Joeys controller.

Dennis hands her a bottle of Budweiser then sits next to her on a brown plaid couch with foam falling out the sides.


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    • epigramman profile image


      6 years ago

      Well you can do it all Summer as this is a fabulous slice of flash fiction which allowed me to open up my cinematic mind in a film noir sort of way with soundtrack music to match - I love the tension here and how the narrative moves along so nicely in a very naturalistic style thanks to your magic pen of creativity and imagination.

      Sending to you my warmest wishes from Colin who is just about to cut the front grass and then have a stir fry for lunch .... my cats say hello too and I will share and link your Hub Introduction main page at Facebook to hopefully grab you some more readers. lake erie time canada 11:54am

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      Cathy Nerujen 

      6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Hehehe... oh wow. A better fan...? I just love people who write with passion. And it pours from you on to the pages... or screen as in this case. :)

      The best writers are the most passionate ones always, I think. Well, on my continent you'd get those hugs from me too. LOL.

      Your writings always contain something so real and honest.

    • frankieonfire profile imageAUTHOR


      6 years ago from Eureka, CA

      Thanks midget38. Glad you think so! I been experimenting with things other than poetry.. and this is one of those experiments. I have some ideas on expanding it :)

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      Michelle Liew 

      6 years ago from Singapore

      A wonderful story, with wonderfully crafted words and imagery. And I love the passive ending too....somewhat of a surprise! Thanks for sharing this beautiful use of language.

    • frankieonfire profile imageAUTHOR


      6 years ago from Eureka, CA

      You flatter me! I wish you were on my continent. I just want to hug you!!! A better fan I cannot see. You are amazing.

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      Cathy Nerujen 

      6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Well now that I know it is Frankie / Summer I am so happy again to read your amazing writing. We are so happy to have a great writer back here again. :)

      I read your other comments and yes, please write more and gather more. I will read them and when you publish your writing, Frankie I will buy that book. You were right about writing being the same as healing. Take care, Frankie. Yes, Frankie sounds good. :)

    • frankieonfire profile imageAUTHOR


      6 years ago from Eureka, CA

      Oh wow your praise goes beyond what I expected. I am working on a couple collections right now. Gathering them and committing to a point of view is sometimes challenging but I hope to have it in the works soon. Thanks so much for hearing my voice. Cheers!

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      Cathy Nerujen 

      6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Why is the music of beck in my head as I read this? That whole open space trailer park-life sparse sense of nothingness that permeates everything... it is rich and so intoxicating and her wandering soul and narrative draws me in.

      This is writing begging to be read, and you are a powerful writer. Even with the seemingly passive almost non-eventful ending, it is still a continuance and that takes guts to do that. I could read your work all day and all night. Wow, I love Hub pages. Going to tweet this one too. Frankie you are such a great writer. You should be published. Best wishes to you. You write with passion.


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