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Walking Down That Beach

Updated on September 1, 2014
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Walking down that beach in South Jersey


ready for the big moment with no mercy


I walk with you, nearing the breezy ocean


to tell you things... hmmm... that are very important



Up above over that rainbow


DRAGS itself... a plane with that sign


"would you be mine, would you be mine?"


She reads them as I thought


I kiss her lips and kneel down looking her immense love up there above


Taking that deep breathe and controlling myself, like a real man


I waited so long for this moment, here at Atlantic City


and express my feelings with this ring as it is being inserted in your fingers


But, oh oh God almighty... besides this ring being... a little tight


A passing dog think of me as a tree, not caring a bit, just taking his time


and squirts his second thought as easy as free.... on me!


His master comes too late to ask for apologies


I just dive myself in disbelieve into the waves


this way I can wash away this puppy's intentions


and you smile at me and join me in my own redemption


I finish my duty with you, as we swim into that ocean


we kiss and hug with deeper devotion


You accept the ring that I bought you at 'Zales'


suddenly we get a bigger splash this time around


it was a whale that came closer to us to celebrate in its own way


I took you out as my most precious catch


We laid on the wet sand, wrapping around


holding hands and blowing my mind


kissing like never before


making sure that dog is not near us anymore!

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    carriethomson 5 years ago from United Kingdom

    :) that was quick. great hub. well no rains here!! but the dog provided the required drizzle, ha ha :)

    keep making people smile, and keep writing

    carrie

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Lol! I didn't write it! My hands did.. a pleasure reading you again Carrie

    Lord

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    Terishere 5 years ago

    Cute poem!! I love the dog! :)

    Terri

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Hi there Terri,

    Well, I wonder if that dog was meant to be?

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    Terishere 5 years ago

    Maybe it was, for the poem would not be same without it :)

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    If you have kids terri check my math hubs. Have a wonderful day!

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    Terishere 5 years ago

    I do, but they're all grown. But I will check them out tomorrow.

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    HAve a nice nite. Terri

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    Nicole Canfield 5 years ago from the Ether

    Voted up and interesting. The dog was funny. Keep posting your poems, they're quite enjoyable.

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Kitty, hahaha! Omg! people like you make me write and write. Hope you like the other poem ..about my friends the firemen!

    LORD

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    Gail Sobotkin 5 years ago from South Carolina

    Beautiful, whimsical and full of unexpected twists and turns- just like life. As a woman who grew up in North Jersey and always felt the romantic lure of the Jersey beaches, I particularly enjoyed this poem. Rated up, awesome, beautiful and interesting.

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Why you wanna make me cry happyboomernurse? I gotta go to my day job! Lol! Thanks and happy hub!

    LORD

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    saffron12 5 years ago

    Beautiful and very nice

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Thanks saffron12, I appreciate your stopping by.

    lord

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    nikipa 5 years ago from Eastern Europe

    Your father its very romantic! Lovely done!

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    nikipa 5 years ago from Eastern Europe

    oops. Sorry, l meant you are very romantic, and lm sure that is from father! Cheers!

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Thanks again Nikipa,

    Romance is a word that is becoming obsolete to young generations, but still around as you can see.

    LORD

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    leann2800 5 years ago

    That was very cute. I found the whale amazing. That would be even better than the ring from Zales.

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Ihtink it was cute too. Not flipper around or Lassie either, that would interrupt the whole scenario. Thanks for the support Leann2800

    LORD

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    cheatlierepeat 5 years ago from Canada

    Awe, this is such a sweet story. I love it when things don't go exactly as planned and it becomes "a great story" to tell.

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    Joseph De Cross 5 years ago

    Yeah!, Cheatlierepeat,

    was inspired, inside the tub..for security reasons. You never know, you might spill your coffee on your laptop and that would be the end of that. Thanks for stopping by and have a wonderful Thanksgiving!

    LORD

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