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A Whisper: Poem

Updated on March 18, 2013
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Justin W. Price, AKA PDXKaraokeGuy, is a freelance writer, blogger, and award-nominated author based out of Juneau, Alaska.


What is it you're asking?
What am I supposed to make of this?
Am I being taught patience?
Or is this trial to solidify my witness?
I've never been one to hear Your Voice,
I always need some kind of confirmation.
I want to hear You loud and clear
'cause a whisper can be such an aggravation.

What is it you're asking?
What am I supposed to learn from this?
I feel I'm such an ingrate
'cause I get down when you don't grant every wish.
I've never been one with boundless joy,
I always seem to have some kind of crisis.
I want to know true happiness
Because life is not about You granting wishes.





all rights reserved. Copyright Justin W. Price, 2006

my poetry collection

Thanks for Reading.

A FREELANCE WRITER, HONORS STUDENT AND GOVER PRIZE FINALIST, JUSTIN W. PRICE (AKA, PDXKARAOKEGUY)IS A POET, SHORT STORY, BIOGRAPHY AND HUMOR WRITER. HIS POETRY COLLECTION, DIGGING TO CHINA, WAS RELEASED FEBRUARY 2ND, 2013 BY SWEATSHOPPE PUBLICATIONS AND IS CURRENTLY AVAILABLE ON AMAZON AS WELL AS YOUR LOCAL BOOKSELLER.

HIS WORK WILL ALSO BE FEATURED IN BEST NEW FICTION (2014 EDITION), AND HAS APPEARED PREVIOUSLY IN THE RUSTY NAIL, EFICTION, THE CRISIS CHRONICLES, THE HELLROARING REVIEW, BURNINGWORD, SEE SPOT RUN AND THE BELLWETHER REVIEW. HE CURRENTLY SERVES AS MANAGING EDITOR OF EPOETRY MAGAZINE AND THE BRIDGE ONLINE NEWSPAPER. HE PREVIOUSLY SERVED AS THE POETRY AND CORRESPONDENCE EDITOR FOR THE BELLWETHER REVIEW.

HE WORKS AS A FREELANCE WRITER, EDITOR, AND GHOST WRITER, AND IS WORKING TOWARDS HIS PH.D. HE LIVES IN A SUBURB OF PORTLAND, OREGON WITH HIS WIFE, ANDREA, THEIR LABRADOODLE, BELLA, SCHNOODLE, SAUVEE AND BLACK MOOR GOLDFISH, HOWARD WOLOWITZ.

PLEASE VISIT HIS PROFILE PAGE FOR MORE INFORMATION. THANKS!

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      Justin W Price 

      5 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      Thanks dgh. I appreciate that!

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      deergha 

      5 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      A search for the unsaid to be heard clearly above a whisper...poem with much depth and feel. Justin, this can well be related with many here and thank you for sharing this one. I am sharing it too. Voted up way.

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      Justin W Price 

      6 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      Thanks so much for the reads and the shares, eo... thanks also for the follow!

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      eolikes 

      6 years ago from Bangladesh

      Such a nice poem. I enjoyed... voted up and socially shared. thanks PDX

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      Justin W Price 

      6 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      thank u very much onlooker!

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      onlooker 

      6 years ago

      Such hidden depths, interesting.

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      echoe0021 

      6 years ago from Conway, AR

      Okay cool, can do.

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      Justin W Price 

      6 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      sometimes not being "well versed" is better then having studied for years. If you want, you can add me to facebook and maybe we could chat on there. Info is in my hub pages profile

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      echoe0021 

      6 years ago from Conway, AR

      Religion, signs, faith, and basic ideas of existentialism and philosophy. I say basic because I am not well versed in any of the things, but I have my thoughts.

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      Justin W Price 

      6 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      echoe, a discussion about what exactlY? I'm pleased that you enjoyed this!

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      echoe0021 

      6 years ago from Conway, AR

      Wonderful poem, and I feel we've all felt that way. I know I have and at times still do. I'd love to get into a discussion about this sometime, but here is not the place. Great poem.

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      Justin W Price 

      6 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      Thanks Ruchira. I appreciate your read and your comment. I'm glad you understood my sentiment!

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      Ruchira 

      6 years ago from United States

      Wonderful work Justin

      Saying so much yet being discrete about the giver/provider.

      Ending it with gratitude....amen!

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      Justin W Price 

      6 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      Tammy, thank you. That's as good of theory as any, i suppose. I like it. Thanks your comments and appreciation!

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      Tammy 

      6 years ago from North Carolina

      I think sometimes all we get is a faint whisper just so there is proof we are actually listening. This says so much by saying very little. It is a great poem. Well done!

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      Justin W Price 

      6 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      Thanks Sunnie Day. I remember when I wrote this and it seems silly now that I was even bummed out at the time, but, when you're in the heat of a moment like that... well, there's no reasoning. I think it still resonates. I'm glad you enjoyed this! Thanks for stopping by!

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      Sunnie Day 

      6 years ago

      This has been many of our thoughts at some time..I used to hear my mom say.."God is not Santa Claus"...it does take time to hear that whisper and ever after many years..one can still go ...Huh was that you? Trials...boy oh boy what to say about them..they come and go...and sometimes they seem like they never stop...I would like to think as we walk through them it is like a grooming process...so we just handle it better when the next one rolls around..I like the thought that we are like pure gold..refined by the fires...like you said.."Refiners Fire" Thanks PDX...I liked this alot..

      Sunnie

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      Justin W Price 

      6 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      Thanks Audrey. It usually does. Otehrwise, pain would be pointless. The Refiner's Fire...

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      Audrey Howitt 

      6 years ago from California

      Well done Justin---I am glad that something beautiful came out of your pain--

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      Justin W Price 

      6 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      Thanks Linda!

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      Linda Bilyeu 

      6 years ago from Orlando, FL

      Well done PDX! You do have a wonderful way with words:)

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      Justin W Price 

      6 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      cyna, thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed this! My pleasure on the follow!

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      cynamans 

      6 years ago

      Wow Great poem PDXKaraokeguy,

      Very well writen and interesting. I voted this one up, awesome and beautiful.

      Thanks for the follow and Happy Holidays,

      Best C.

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      Justin W Price 

      7 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      Thanks Jami. it's actually a four or five year old poem, but it's a good reminder

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      jami l. pereira 

      7 years ago

      So many times ive been lost and so many times , hes pulled me right through . Im hoping that things land where you need them too , best wishes :)

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      Justin W Price 

      7 years ago from Juneau, Alaska

      Glad to hear u can relate! I firmly believe that trials always have a reason, but when in the midst of one, you don't wannna look at that :-)

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      jami l. pereira 

      7 years ago

      Beautiful ! I voted as such .I too have had to ask many many times , why me? or why not me? and it took alot of soul searching to find who i am today , and ive come a long ways from yesterday .. keep the faith , keep the thought , but most of all "BELIEVE" ,God Bless :)

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