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Will You See My Picture?

Updated on April 11, 2013

Would you believe me if I told you

I took this picture just for you

Of me lying in the sand

By a message that I drew

Wearing a necklace that you gave me

As we shivered in the snow

Before we ever knew

The way the wind would blow

And I haven’t seen you in ages

Now I wonder how you are

If you ever make it back to town

Or if it’s just too far

And I’ll post this picture hoping

It reminds you I’m still here

And you’ll see it in my eyes

I still love you plain and clear





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      krsharp05 5 years ago from 18th and Vine

      Your poem is lovely. I would bet that the picture that goes along with it is just as delightful. -K

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      Kara Monterey 5 years ago from Indianapolis

      Thanks so much!

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      Martin Kloess 5 years ago from San Francisco

      great expression. congratulations on this

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      Nichol marie 5 years ago from The Country-Side

      great poem love it voted up

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      Kara Monterey 5 years ago from Indianapolis

      Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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      Nithya Venkat 5 years ago from Dubai

      Loved this one, voted up.

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      Kara Monterey 5 years ago from Indianapolis

      Thanks so much!

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      Angela Brummer 5 years ago from Lincoln, Nebraska

      Beautiful picture drawn with words about a picture. Great poem.

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      Kara Monterey 5 years ago from Indianapolis

      Thanks Angela!

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      cleaner3 5 years ago

      koshaugh, great poem , like your rhymes. thank you for the follow.

      I only will follow you if i see that you have read some of my poetry. and leave a comment. your poetry is cool my sweet.

      michael

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