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The Invisible War

Updated on November 4, 2015
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CrisSp is your Emergency Specialist at 37 thousand feet. A writer without a niche. Wonderwoman consumed by wanderlust!

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The demons have come

Casting invisible war

They are cunning and fraud

Causing great harm

Robbing peace of mind

Drawing furrow on brow

Creating some situations

Toiled and tensed

They target the feeble minds

Who are at lost

And couldn’t measure the cost

Out of life’s turbulent roll

In the island of grief

Dark clouds hung overhead

Moving slowly billowing fold

And ominous kind swathed in shrouds

While the spirit is deeply wounded

From a battle of this invisible war

The Demons reign

Filling the future with dismay

Trying to accomplish their aims

No offer of a square deal to humbly retreat

But to continue to fight vigorously

And when the heart gets tired

Hollow and so damn weak

In its’ longing to end the battle

To depart this earthly scene

Suddenly becomes a winning streak.

From The Bell Jar

“I took a deep breath and listened to the old brag of my heart; I am, I am, I am.”

—Sylvia Plath

Copyright@ CrisSp~TM / 10-2015. Read me: "The heart of my soul speaks to the soul of my heart by writing." ~

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      Audrey Howitt 12 months ago from California

      Such a powerful write--we all have our battles that we must wage, and some are so difficult. You capture the poignancy of the journey

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      ahorseback 21 months ago

      You so deserve that !

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      CrisSp 21 months ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      ahorseback: Smiling right now in front of my screen reading this...:) Thank you.

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      ahorseback 21 months ago

      Remember , even when you could care less about smiling one more time on that flying machine , It really makes someone's day ! I fight that a lot but the truth is , people feel and need you . Oh go on girl show it !...........See?

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      CrisSp 21 months ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      fpherj48: Dear Paula, Thank you...those words coming from a wonderful writer (you) means a lot. I take it as a privilege to write something inspiring (I try) and what joy it is to know that readers like you come to enjoy it and feel it. Happy to connect. ~

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      CrisSp 21 months ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      ahorseback: Ed my friend, I know exactly what you mean and I feel your sentiments. Courage to us and to all who's been (and still) into this invisible war.

      Love from the sky. ~

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      CrisSp 21 months ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Faith Reaper: Thank you for your great comment and for sharing Faith. You spread kindness all the time. Take care and as always, love from the sky.~

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      CrisSp 21 months ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      aviannovice: To divide and conquer is perhaps the best strategy but one must have a very strong will and power to implement it and succeed. And, to succeed we also need the great understanding of the people around us.

      Nice to see you here Deb. I know you've been very busy writing about our friends in the sky and educating people. So, I appreciate your time.

      Love from the sky. ~

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      Paula 21 months ago from Beautiful Upstate New York

      Cris......You're an inspiring poet. I felt the depth of your emotions. i find I always read Poetry so much slower than prose.....I want to take in every intention. You expose your heart.

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      ahorseback 21 months ago

      Because I feel the demons as I write , as before and after . Actually they never leave us but once in a while they tell us something that we can put down in words . Just as you have ..........;-}

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      Faith Reaper 21 months ago from southern USA

      Wow, Cris, there certainly is that unseen realm of a war going on in the heavenlies and it is not against flesh and blood but powers and principalities of this unseen world for sure. You nailed it here in your powerful poem.

      Those of us who understand all of this, are sure to be mindful to put on the Full Armor of God each and every morning.

      Sharing

      Peace and blessings always

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      Deb Hirt 21 months ago from Stillwater, OK

      Truly, there is a war going on with us all. To divide and conquer is the answer...

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      CrisSp 21 months ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Gypsy: There has to be some music...in everything and everywhere. Happy to see you here. Thank you.

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      CrisSp 21 months ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Eric: Thank you. I think most people had passed by the invisible war zone. Unfortunately, there are some who did not win the battle or simply felt defeated and gave up. *sad*

      But you and me, my friend...WE are the champions and we'll keep on fighting 'til the end.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 21 months ago from Riga, Latvia

      An awesome poem accompanied by great music.

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      Eric Dierker 21 months ago from Spring Valley, CA. U.S.A.

      This is a beautiful piece. Somebody once told me I had to deal with my demons, because they got the better of me from time to time. They were right. I reckon my war is not so invisible. Loved the song and your artistry with words.

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      CrisSp 21 months ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      saddlerider1: Hello! I haven't seen you for a while here and so, thank you for gracing this page. I love Ms. Plath too and although many can relate to her writings, she was more often misunderstood indeed. I must admit, she was my muse in this piece.

      We'll hang in there!

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      saddlerider1 21 months ago

      Interesting work indeed, Demons are prevalent in many writers lives, they insist on multiple attempts to cast our pen to Hell. I choose to hang on tightly to mine. Sylvia Plath was a very misunderstood poet, depression kills many, sad but so true. She was a magnificent poet. Keep writing, never fear the Demons are they will absorb your gifts.

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      CrisSp 21 months ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Flourish: You're so right about Sylvia and I just love her too. And yes, we'll push back the demons.

      I hope you're having a great Sunday!

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      CrisSp 21 months ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Genna East: Thank you. You have paid me the highest compliment by simply reading and leaving a comment.

      Your presence here is greatly appreciated.

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      FlourishAnyway 22 months ago from USA

      Push back the demons. I love Sylvia Plath, by the way. She is a dangerous obsession as a writer. Powerful but God, she can suck you down deeper.

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      Genna East 22 months ago from Massachusetts, USA

      I really like the way you wrote this poem; and "Demons" is the perfect complement and compliment to this provocative work. Well done, Cris.

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      CrisSp 22 months ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      DDE: Thank you. Always great to see you pop by! And, you cut your hair! :)

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      CrisSp 22 months ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      MizBejabbers: I'm very sorry about your mother. Must have been very sad and painful a situation for you (and your family) then. However, I like the way you take the poem and glad that you like the song as well.

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      CrisSp 22 months ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      DaveOnline: Thank you. It isn't easy to win this battle but we have to fight hard. We have to try.

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      CrisSp 22 months ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      manatita44: Thank you. I am pleased to know you can relate...meaning, I am not alone. :)

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      Devika Primić 22 months ago from Dubrovnik, Croatia

      An important message and you said it so greatly in a poem.

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      MizBejabbers 22 months ago

      I especially loved your last verse. It perfectly describes my mother's battle with cancer, but it can describe any type of war one must wage while occupying the earthly body. Very apt and descriptive of the two types of people who look forward to the other side, the very religious and the truly spiritual.

      Fantastic song, too.

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      David Edward Lynch 22 months ago from Port Elizabeth, South Africa

      Good poem! The demons certainly have bothered me at times in a war that can't be seen. You're ultimately winning though.

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      manatita44 22 months ago from london

      Powerful one, CrisSp. I'm glad you're on a winning streak. (Chuckle) We all need one. Always a joy to relate to you and your work. Hari Om!

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      CrisSp 22 months ago from Sky Is The Limit Adventure

      Thank you Jodah! I am marching in as part of the watchdog. I personally love Imagine Dragons too and Demons is one of my favourites on the playlist.

      Hugs back and love to you from the sky. ~

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      John Hansen 22 months ago from Queensland Australia

      An amazing poem Cris. There certainly is an invisible war raging and we need to be forever vigilent and willing to fight. Great song "Demons" by Imagine Dragons" one of my favourites. Well done. Hugs.