The Invisible War
- Memento Mori
Life, live it now because no one knows what happens when we die. And death, the most inevitable thing we are all afraid to speak of, when it happens, accept it. Embrace it. Embrace the mystery of the unknown. - Selfie and the Imperfect Me!
I yawn. I stretch. I paint. This is my kind of selfie. ~
The demons have come
Casting invisible war
They are cunning and fraud
Causing great harm
Robbing peace of mind
Drawing furrow on brow
Creating some situations
Toiled and tensed
They target the feeble minds
Who are at lost
And couldn’t measure the cost
Out of life’s turbulent roll
In the island of grief
Dark clouds hung overhead
Moving slowly billowing fold
And ominous kind swathed in shrouds
While the spirit is deeply wounded
From a battle of this invisible war
The Demons reign
Filling the future with dismay
Trying to accomplish their aims
No offer of a square deal to humbly retreat
But to continue to fight vigorously
And when the heart gets tired
Hollow and so damn weak
In its’ longing to end the battle
To depart this earthly scene
Suddenly becomes a winning streak.
From The Bell Jar
“I took a deep breath and listened to the old brag of my heart; I am, I am, I am.”
—Sylvia Plath
Copyright@ CrisSp~TM / 10-2015. Read me: "The heart of my soul speaks to the soul of my heart by writing." ~
© 2015 CrisSp
Comments
Such a powerful write--we all have our battles that we must wage, and some are so difficult. You capture the poignancy of the journey
You so deserve that !
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ahorseback: Smiling right now in front of my screen reading this...:) Thank you.
Remember , even when you could care less about smiling one more time on that flying machine , It really makes someone's day ! I fight that a lot but the truth is , people feel and need you . Oh go on girl show it !...........See?
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fpherj48: Dear Paula, Thank you...those words coming from a wonderful writer (you) means a lot. I take it as a privilege to write something inspiring (I try) and what joy it is to know that readers like you come to enjoy it and feel it. Happy to connect. ~
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ahorseback: Ed my friend, I know exactly what you mean and I feel your sentiments. Courage to us and to all who's been (and still) into this invisible war.
Love from the sky. ~
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Faith Reaper: Thank you for your great comment and for sharing Faith. You spread kindness all the time. Take care and as always, love from the sky.~
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aviannovice: To divide and conquer is perhaps the best strategy but one must have a very strong will and power to implement it and succeed. And, to succeed we also need the great understanding of the people around us.
Nice to see you here Deb. I know you've been very busy writing about our friends in the sky and educating people. So, I appreciate your time.
Love from the sky. ~
Cris......You're an inspiring poet. I felt the depth of your emotions. i find I always read Poetry so much slower than prose.....I want to take in every intention. You expose your heart.
Because I feel the demons as I write , as before and after . Actually they never leave us but once in a while they tell us something that we can put down in words . Just as you have ..........;-}
Wow, Cris, there certainly is that unseen realm of a war going on in the heavenlies and it is not against flesh and blood but powers and principalities of this unseen world for sure. You nailed it here in your powerful poem.
Those of us who understand all of this, are sure to be mindful to put on the Full Armor of God each and every morning.
Sharing
Peace and blessings always
Truly, there is a war going on with us all. To divide and conquer is the answer...
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Gypsy: There has to be some music...in everything and everywhere. Happy to see you here. Thank you.
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Eric: Thank you. I think most people had passed by the invisible war zone. Unfortunately, there are some who did not win the battle or simply felt defeated and gave up. *sad*
But you and me, my friend...WE are the champions and we'll keep on fighting 'til the end.
An awesome poem accompanied by great music.
This is a beautiful piece. Somebody once told me I had to deal with my demons, because they got the better of me from time to time. They were right. I reckon my war is not so invisible. Loved the song and your artistry with words.
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saddlerider1: Hello! I haven't seen you for a while here and so, thank you for gracing this page. I love Ms. Plath too and although many can relate to her writings, she was more often misunderstood indeed. I must admit, she was my muse in this piece.
We'll hang in there!
Interesting work indeed, Demons are prevalent in many writers lives, they insist on multiple attempts to cast our pen to Hell. I choose to hang on tightly to mine. Sylvia Plath was a very misunderstood poet, depression kills many, sad but so true. She was a magnificent poet. Keep writing, never fear the Demons are they will absorb your gifts.
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Flourish: You're so right about Sylvia and I just love her too. And yes, we'll push back the demons.
I hope you're having a great Sunday!
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Genna East: Thank you. You have paid me the highest compliment by simply reading and leaving a comment.
Your presence here is greatly appreciated.
Push back the demons. I love Sylvia Plath, by the way. She is a dangerous obsession as a writer. Powerful but God, she can suck you down deeper.
I really like the way you wrote this poem; and "Demons" is the perfect complement and compliment to this provocative work. Well done, Cris.
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DDE: Thank you. Always great to see you pop by! And, you cut your hair! :)
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MizBejabbers: I'm very sorry about your mother. Must have been very sad and painful a situation for you (and your family) then. However, I like the way you take the poem and glad that you like the song as well.
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DaveOnline: Thank you. It isn't easy to win this battle but we have to fight hard. We have to try.
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manatita44: Thank you. I am pleased to know you can relate...meaning, I am not alone. :)
An important message and you said it so greatly in a poem.
I especially loved your last verse. It perfectly describes my mother's battle with cancer, but it can describe any type of war one must wage while occupying the earthly body. Very apt and descriptive of the two types of people who look forward to the other side, the very religious and the truly spiritual.
Fantastic song, too.
Good poem! The demons certainly have bothered me at times in a war that can't be seen. You're ultimately winning though.
Powerful one, CrisSp. I'm glad you're on a winning streak. (Chuckle) We all need one. Always a joy to relate to you and your work. Hari Om!
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Thank you Jodah! I am marching in as part of the watchdog. I personally love Imagine Dragons too and Demons is one of my favourites on the playlist.
Hugs back and love to you from the sky. ~
An amazing poem Cris. There certainly is an invisible war raging and we need to be forever vigilent and willing to fight. Great song "Demons" by Imagine Dragons" one of my favourites. Well done. Hugs.
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