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Worldwithoutyou

Updated on July 25, 2012
this poem is dedicated to Jess ( with due permission from Michael...Thanks to You.
this poem is dedicated to Jess ( with due permission from Michael...Thanks to You. | Source
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World without You…!

Just a while ago I killed myself

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Times will pass by

Rivers will flow on,

Days will fly over

You will move on.

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World will not stop

…. If I am no more…!

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Just a while ago I killed myself

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For one bud…world will be little empty

The bloom will not be all glow,

The bud deserves me more

I can’t kill it and I have to flow.

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The bud will still bloom

….If I am no more…!

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Just awhile ago I killed myself

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There is no world without you,

World is TIME.

Time will alter,

The bud will color.

One day……..,

The color will be time.

I will live on……….

As I am lifeless

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Just awhile ago I killed myself

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A symphony won agony,

Some clamor with harmony.

Agony is peaceful as

Some blood spilled from the bud,

Harmony is crying as

A throne pinched the heart.

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There will be no symphony

…..if I will be no more.

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Just a while ago I killed myself

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Some lost foot prints

….in the empty world….

I will live on….

…as I am no more.

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A sea of burning fire cried…..

For the world without you.

to dear JESS.......

I hope and i wish....if you would have been around You would have considered me as your sister...

I hope you would have shared your feelings of week moments and reasons of tears with me.....as there would have been many to be with you when you are happy

( present tense)......

for me your are here,

for me you are there....

for me you are still everywhere......

for me you will be far and wide....

Brother,,,,,a world full of love and regards to you...

from a sister ......whom.... you did not knew.

(p. s. ......Jess...................always be happy and be in peace ...wherever you are.....but you are with us always.)

Jess...a loving brother who is now beyond this life......!
Jess...a loving brother who is now beyond this life......! | Source

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      Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      This speaks to me on a more personal basis, I have lost dear ones when I was much younger...those of my age that wanted the glory of death and sadly those that did not (2 due to cancer as teenagers)...Regardless of how they left this life, their memories live on...however, those that decided to take their own life a tragic mystery still lays...for there are many that loved them and many wished them to stay!!!

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      Michelle Liew 4 years ago from Singapore

      Very passionate and heartfelt. Life is an endless cycle though... you may die, but as you rightly put, your spirit lives on.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you for your comment @ Patty Kenyon.

      Cant agree more....but their are some wounds which hardly recovers with time. Its personal of course. Poem for me is more about personal feelings than outer circle. Feelings which are unspoken, I like to express through words. Thanks again for stopping by and reading my hub.

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      Thank you @ midget38 for your kind words. I appreciate that you liked my poem.

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      Patty Kenyon 4 years ago from Ledyard, Connecticut

      Wow, I am sooo sorry...normally when I comment, I state how I voted on the Poem, ...I am truly sorry for that...I forgot to mention that I thought your Poem was Awesome...you captivated what many cannot...so sorry, for truly you captured a message that many could not!!! Awesome Job!!!

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      THank you Patty, your comment is much precious for me. I am flattered. ******blush*****

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      Sarah Chewings 4 years ago from Nottingham, England

      This is an amazingly heartfelt piece of writing, it must have been difficult to create. Well done on saying things that were so hard to express.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @sarahmoose for you stopped by and commented on my hub. heart felt appreciation from my side.

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      rmichaelf 4 years ago from North Central West Virginia, where the green grass grows...

      How intense with subtleties blending like pastels amidst hues that shift as you read... I felt my heart moving as I read.

      It also seems apropos to my story you just read, "On Compassion and Forgiveness." Though you said there that "words are very few to express my feelings," in your comments. If that is true it is only because you left them here in this poem.

      If I could figure how, and with your permission of coarse, I would love for people to have a link to this after reading my story. You speak of things in the foundation of my being.

      Thank you,

      Michael

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Hey THANK you from bottom of my heart.

      To be honest i just posted the poem and then i saw your hub while hubhopping.....its kind of as if God sent.....then i was in office and could not manage to read your hub. But something deep in my heat told me that i must not miss this one and i followed you to read your this hub.

      Then after I read and rest is history....yeah i also do feel the

      connection to be honest.

      You are most welcome to do whatever you want ....to link up or whatever i mean.

      Rather with your due permission, I would like to dedicate my poem to Jess. God bless his soul and trust me......his soul is happy and in peace.

      Waiting for your response........!(left a mail to you also)

      Thanks and regards,

      Deergha

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      Shining Irish Eyes 4 years ago from Upstate, New York

      This never ending cyle we call life. I appreciate the way you ended this as well.

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      Christy Birmingham 4 years ago from British Columbia, Canada

      Beautiful and haunting at the same time. Well done poem.

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      Chitrangada Sharan 4 years ago from New Delhi, India

      Simple and beautiful!

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      rmichaelf 4 years ago from North Central West Virginia, where the green grass grows...

      Deergha,

      Thank you for this reply... I too felt as if I was directed to this poem... I thought I had randomly selected a story of yours to read to get to know you. Thank you for following your heart and grabbing my attention to find this jewel. And yes, I would be so honored and grateful for the dedication, as he will be also. :-)

      And yes, his soul is happy and at peace, as is mine slowly returning... I never doubted that is would, just never knew when the Universe would be able to bring the teachers and experiences to me for that to occur. but, I knew it wwould, and it has... begun??? How much more to follow, and I hope my attention is alert to them so they get less difficult to bear! lol

      By the way, I recieved your email all right, but when I tried to send my reply, to both the address that was suppose to lead here, as well as to your gmail, my gmail returned them as "undeliverable." I kept those notices as they have info about the why to one who can read that sort of thing... in case you need that info if something is truly wrong... Hence this long reply :-)

      Namaste,

      Michael

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      harliquinn 4 years ago

      Absolutely beautiful poem. Very emotional and passionate and something many can relate to. I really liked the repetition you used and it gave that extra "oomf" to the message.

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      IntegrityYes 4 years ago

      I definitely voted up! You are so deep.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @ Shiningirisheyes for your comment. Life is a never ending cycle if we can take it like that...i agree with you.

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      Thank you@ harliquinn for you liked my poem.

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      Thank you @ IntegrityYes ofr your continual supprt and inspiration. It is much appreciated.

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      Namaste .............Michael,

      I am thankful for your kind effort to send me mail. I don know as i am receiving many mails from friends from hubpages link. I am not getting anyway what is going on about the mail you wanted to send me.

      I hope I gave you my mail id correctly....(some times I tend to do mistake he he he.....) anyways i am mailing you again in case it was wrong yesterday,,,,you can check it.

      Have a good day ahead.

      Deergha

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      Thank You@ my friend Christy for your continual support ......its very precious for me. Have a great day ahead.

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      Thank you@ChitrangadaSharan for you stopped and read and commented on my hub.

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      vedicmonk 4 years ago

      Quite introspective musings ! deeply philosophical !!!

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you@vedicmonk for your kind words.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and awesome. Boy is this heavy and beautiful and it touches the heart. Just remember even though you feel you can't go on without someone there is always someone else who can't go on without you.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @ Gypsy, for your continual support and inspiration. Your words will go a long way, friend.

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      BeyondMax 4 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      Intense. Deep poetry, emotional journey. Hugs and prayers my friend! Never ever give up!

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thanks @ BeyoundMax for your words are precious for me.

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      shalini sharan 4 years ago from Delhi

      this was a really passionalte and heartfelt poem , i really enoyed it

      sharing it

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @ Shalini for enjoying the poem. Many thanks for sharing also.

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      TIMETRAVELER2 4 years ago

      I am very sorry for your loss, but am glad you wrote this poem. It is heartbreakingly beautiful. Thank you.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you @TIMETRAVELER for you stopped by and get time to comment on the poem.

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      Ann-Christin 4 years ago from UK

      One of the most beautiful and heart wrenching poems I have read.

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      deergha 4 years ago from ...... a place beyond now and beyond here !!!

      Thank you@christin for your visit here. your comment is much appreciated.

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