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YOU JUST LEFT

Updated on January 28, 2011

 

You just left~

With hugs and handshakes~

Gone as it snowed~

To be here no more.

 

You just left~

With my heart amending~

In the daylight your on the road~

Pure love I am sending.

 

You just left~

A solitaire shoestring on the driveway~

Amongst the slush I stand alone~

I know you had to get away~

Yet my spirit still moans.

 

You just left~

Giving away your guitar~

Why did you do that? ~

I still can not believe you’re going so far?

 

You just left~

Leaving clothes and other stuff~

I wonder if you’ll miss it~

I know I fuss too much.

 

You just left~

Now we will all have to adjust~

This is very emotionally ruff~

You didn’t even take your quilted puff.

 

You just left~

And we already miss you~

Did you say goodbye to Kitty? ~

Now I dab my eye with an already soaked tissue.

 

You just left~

And I wonder what more I could do~

You just left now our family is few~

You just left~

For sure my feelings are numb and blue.

You just left~

What now can I do?

 

By

Lisa J. Warner

AKA

Lisa Luv

CopyRight1/28 /2011@LisaLuvLLC

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    • Lisa Luv profile imageAUTHOR

      Lisa J Warner AKA Lisa Luv 

      7 years ago from Conneticut, USA

      Thank You Michael~~~~~BLESSINGS................

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      michael ely 

      7 years ago from Scotland

      Hi Lisa, I really like this. Great poem.

      Michael.

    • Lisa Luv profile imageAUTHOR

      Lisa J Warner AKA Lisa Luv 

      7 years ago from Conneticut, USA

      I don't think it will rain on you pol1ce...Thank You for the read...I am glad you liked it...Blessings

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      Paulo Pta 

      7 years ago from the Right Place

      Beautiful, "do you real feel it?!"

      I vote Up

      and

      I vote Beatiful

      I'm sharing alot today, maybe tomorrow will rain on me, who knows

    • Lisa Luv profile imageAUTHOR

      Lisa J Warner AKA Lisa Luv 

      7 years ago from Conneticut, USA

      Thank You Dear Sister

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      Betty Bolden 

      7 years ago from Bucyrus Ohio

      wonderful sis

    • Lisa Luv profile imageAUTHOR

      Lisa J Warner AKA Lisa Luv 

      7 years ago from Conneticut, USA

      Thank You Kim Lynn...Blessings

    • Kim Lynn profile image

      Kim Lynn 

      7 years ago

      I understand how that feels and you expressed it perfectly. Beautiful poem!

      Many Blessings,

      Kim

    • Lisa Luv profile imageAUTHOR

      Lisa J Warner AKA Lisa Luv 

      7 years ago from Conneticut, USA

      DeBorrah K. Ogans Thank You....My son just left today...I guess I am feeling the empty nest thing again...

    • DeBorrah K. Ogans profile image

      DeBorrah K Ogans 

      7 years ago

      Lisa Luv, Nice! What well expressed emotions when one feels abandon or is grieving… Thank you for sharing, Peace & Blessings!

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