You Make Me Feel... - Haiku
Like a new spring bud
Waiting for the kiss of sun.
Beautiful blossom.
Power of a storm
rising up. Lightning. Thunder.
Satisfied stillness.
Bountiful Harvest.
Fruits born of summer labor.
Love overflowing.
Frosty days. Cold dark
nights. Tempered by warm glow of
fire fed by love.
Comments
AUTHORananceleste - I guess it is safe to say you like it... Thanks, :)
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Debbie - Thank you!
Perfect.
my dear this is just downright beautiful...
debbie
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Daisy - Thanks for the compliment. I am totally hooked on haiku. When I can I try to stay true to the traditional "rules" of seasonal words, juxtaposistion, no rhymes, making the lines flow... It is SO rewarding!
Dana,
You've done a great job of capturing the four seasons in your haiku collection. Your haiku are beautiful!
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tobusiness - I am the one saying wow. What a wonderful comment. This did come from the heart. I find some of my best work pours directly out from that place... Thank you!
Dana, wow.... Amazing haiku, simply beautiful, but you don't need me to tell you that, just look at the oodles of comments, and keep writing what is in your heart.
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Laurinzo - thank you. I am pleased how these turned out. Never did I ever dream that I would be a romantic poet. Or any kind of poet. I just write what is in my heart and it makes me so pleased when it is well received
I love the way you write about love. Incredible beautiful way that you weaved these haiku Dana...
Laurinzo
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Thank you Jamie! I am always so happy to have a visit from you. I have to stop by sone of your work soon. Summer is such a busy time for me that I unfortunately don't have a lot of time for hubbing
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ignugent17 - thank you for the compliment. Haiku is really a beautiful form of poetry. If you haven't tried writing one, you really should.
Excellent Haiku's. Thank you for sharing. Jamie
Lovely voted up! I am really appreciating Haiku now. It is very intersting.
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KDuBarry03 - good to see you at another one of my hubs. and wow! thatnks for that comment! knowing i have "fans" out there motivates me to keep putting quality work out that i hope you will enjoy.
see you around!
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mismazda - that is what i love about haiku. the least possible words to say the most. glad u like it
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Maria - Thank you for dropping by. I am humbled by your comment. I find something very beautiful and powerful in haiku, especially when the "traditional rules" are followed. There is something so enjoyable about mulling over words and feeelings until you get that combination that feels right.
Thank u for the votes too :)
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Vinaya Ghimire - wow. i am sincerely honored by your comment. what a compliment!
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midget38- Nice to see you! when I was wrting this I had in mind all of the crazy things loving someone can make you feel. I am happy to hear that it came through.
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Made - thank you. i am pleased you enjoyed this. and thank you for he fan mail. i hope i can trun out some more works that you will enjoy just as much.
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Bobbi - Thank you for your beautiful compliment. It seems that my best work come from my heart. I am so please that I could share the love with you.... hubhugs!
Absolutely astonishing! This is very beautiful, Dana. I always enjoy reading your work!
sweet, short and simple...I like it..:)
Dear Dana,
You have a natural ease and affinity for haiku, relating emotion to nature is beauty to me. Voted UP & AB. Hugs, Maria
Wonderful word pictures. Fresh imagery giving vitality to the very essence of haiku.
You've captured the ups and downs of love well in this haiku, Dana. All the way!
This is so warm and beautiful. A really enjoyable read.
Hi,
That was so lovely and from the heart. I like the love overflowing and that is what we need more of---overflowing love. And I think we got it from your poem.
Your Hub Friend,
Bobbi Purvis
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Sunshine625 - thank u Linda. This set had some great inspiration. :)
Well done Dana! Your haikus are amazingly awesome!:)
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cclitgirl - Thank you so much. I had great inspiration for this one.... I appreciate the compliment considering how much I admire your writing.
Aw, how beautiful! The imagery is great and I love the way the words flow together. You are such an awesome writer! :)
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teaches - Thank you so much!
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IntegrityYes - Thank you for the vote! and fo the reccomendation of re-reading! That is an honor.
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mythicalstorm273 - Thank you for sharing such a beautiful powerful moment! I am so pleased that I could take you back there.
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Minnetonka Twin - Thank you. I like that one a lot too. The pictures are something I need to start putting more time into. That doesn't come to me as easily as the writing. Glad you liked these.
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PHILLYDREAMER - I am so honored that you took the time to read my work condisering your aren't a Haiku-lover. And then to know that you appreciated it. wow! Thank you!
If I could sum this up it would be "the seasons of love!" Another beautiful post reflecting your talent.
It is definitely one of those awesome poems,that should be read many times. I voted up for sure.
I had to read this a few times because I was just overwhelmed by the power your words had to portray an image into my mind. I loved the visualization and even though this isn't exactly what you wrote I thought about a time where I was sitting on the ground looking up into the sky late at night while a storm was brewing on the horizon. I was in my boyfriend's arms as he warmed me in the chill night air and we were just looking at the stars. You wrote a little more variety but together I just felt as if I had been whisked back into time at that one place where I felt all the seasons combined. Very beautiful!
Love you haiku's my friend. I especially connected with "Power of a Storm." Great job and great pics.
Nicely done. I'm not a big fan of Haiku, but even I have to appreciate how you expressed such passionate emotion so simply.
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TT- Thanks!The four seasons linked my a theme seems to be my latest craze.... Do you Hiaku?? I would love to se that! ... Thanks for VUM-ing :op
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rajan jolly - Thank you. So glad to hear such a wonderful comment. I believe that poetry fueds the soul just as food feeds the body. It warms my heart to know tha tI have provided something of quality that is enjoyed. :)
DanaTeresa, great job of capturing all the seasons! Great haikus! VUM!
These are some amazingly beautiful haikus Dana. Voted up, awesome and beautiful.
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Hi Josh!... i will keep writing mine if you keep writing yours! :op
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iamaudraleigh - I am awfully fond of that one myself.... So truly happy you liked them. (hub hug)
Dana,
Beautiful haiku as usual! :) Keep writing them!
Dana, you chose nice pictures to go with your wonderful written words!
Power of a storm
rising up. Lightning. Thunder.
Satisfied stillness.
...my favorite!
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Thanks Bill (blushing)
Dana, I am always in awe of anyone who can convey feelings in so few words...you did it very nicely.
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Mhatter99 - Oh there will be many many more. I can't stop the darn things. This one came to my as I was driving home from work today!
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Bill - That is the best coment ever! 1) cuz u know i admire your opinion and I am glad u like it 2) the nerdy writer in me is positively tickled that I effectively conveyed an emotion.... I am a nut and I love it. Hmm? Next theme perhaps?
Yep, that's love alright! Great job Dana!
nice haiku. I expect to see more.
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unknown spy - your comment warms my heart. thank you so very much.
Dana,.,,such amazing haikus! very lovely.all my votes.
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Nell - that line was the hardest for me to write. i am so glad you like it!
thanks for the vote up too! take care.
This is so beautiful, I particulary like the line fire fed by love. great stuff! voted up! cheers nell
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Olde Cashmere - coming from you, that really means a lot. thank you so much.
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Debbie - thank you for reading. you are such a sweetie. :)
Incredible and beautiful lines in this haiku DanaTeresa. Voted up, awesome, and beautiful :)
Dana your Haiku poems so beautiful....blessings..debbie
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