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You Were Almost Perfect

Updated on November 26, 2012

You were almost perfect

For me

But sometimes in life

And in love

Almost doesn't count

So many flaws can be overlooked

So it is especially painful

When someone is everything

They need to be

Except the one thing

That really matters






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      Randi Benlulu 4 years ago from Mesa, AZ

      How true that is. I'm sorry. Thank you for a great poem! Voted up+ and shared!

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      Kara Monterey 4 years ago from Indianapolis

      Thank you!

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      Deborah 4 years ago from Las Vegas

      Hi Koshaugh, another beautiful and provocative poem. Thanks!

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      Jonathan McCloskey 4 years ago from Cinnaminson, New Jersey

      Great poem; all the glitters is not gold so they say.

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      Deb Hirt 4 years ago from Stillwater, OK

      Now that is a deep thought. What really matters is truly the top of the charts.

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      Gypsy Rose Lee 4 years ago from Riga, Latvia

      Voted up and beautiful. I agree with Jon. Not always is everything as it seems.

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      Deborah Brooks Langford 4 years ago from Brownsville,TX

      wow what truth in this lovely poem.

      so many times the person would be so perfect at first and then wow..great poem

      sharing

      Debbie

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      Eric T. Shortridge 4 years ago from MidWest

      wow, you hit the nail on the head... powerful ink!

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