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Your Love Is More Than Gold - Poem By Cathy Nerujen

Updated on January 11, 2017

Your Love Is More Than Gold

Your love is more than gold -
and your lips are more than wine -
your kisses never miss me -
cos your love is so divine -
your love it shines right through me -
and my heart it warms and melts -
this love I feel is so surreal -
it overrides all else.

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You found me for a reason -
and you give me love and hope
You love me through the seasons -
You teach me how to cope -
your loving touch I crave for -
an everlasting high -
like sand and rolling beaches -
of the soul of Boracay.

We swim within this ocean -
so tanzanite and warm -
your skin it feels like velvet -
your eyes wake up the dawn -
we blend inside these currents -
of nature's majesty -
you take my hand and kiss me -
till I'm floating in your sea.

We roll upon the shoreline -
and we kiss among the palms -
we lose our clothes and garments -
and lie naked on the sand -
Your eyes so warm and tender -
your woman's touch so bold -
I love and so adore you - cos
Your love is more than gold.

Your Love is more than Gold” is quite a true statement, and it is felt through the amazing friendship and love of a special woman. The rivers of my imagination never run dry, because my heart is so inspired by Fehl Dungo and I warmly dedicate this poem to you. You inspire my poetry so much. You inspire me to be more than I am. Gosh, you are so rare and so beautiful. Thank you for this, Fehl.

I should also say a big thank you to Cassy for all the help and love with everything in my life. Bless you both.

Copyright (c) 2011 to 2017 Cathy Nerujen. All rights reserved. This poem is published as part of a forthcoming book of romantic poetry by Cathy Nerujen to be published in 2017. More details at www.flashstarmagazine.com.

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      Cathy Nerujen 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Colin, that is so nice of you. Thank you so much for the warm energy and wishes. :)

      You are madly and gladly welcome always. My romantic poems are now being added to my new book, and I am publishing it soon. I am lucky to have wonderful readers checking out my poetry. Have a sweet day at Lake Erie, Colin. :)

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      epigramman 5 years ago

      a hall of fame title - one in which I wish I had written and some of the most beautiful words I've ever read - which follow ...... lake erie time 1:18pm that is why I am madly and gladly back for a revisit to a timeless classic - sending you warm wishes and good energy

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      Cathy Nerujen 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Thank you BeyondMax. :)

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      BeyondMax 5 years ago from Sydney, Australia

      How heartwarming and sensual, sweet loving erotic poem, amazing!

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      Cathy Nerujen 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Hi Jspot, thank you for this. Love is beautiful. :)

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      lost love 5 years ago from Flames of water and love

      I remember the first time I read this, almost at tears, almost a smile hinting at what I should feel inside. Lovely your ways are in feeling. Beautiful piece.

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      Cathy Nerujen 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Thank you caroline, I'm so glad you liked this. How I see her is with my heart, and it is how she sees me too. She really is an Angel... :) I'm glad that you love my poetry. Your comments are much appreciated. :)

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      Caroline Marie 5 years ago from Close to Heaven

      This poem is so beautiful. It shows how everyone should see the person they love as. Keep writing. I love your poetry. :)

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      Cathy Nerujen 5 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Hi icciev, thank you for the kind comments. And thank you for the vote up. :)

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      icciev 5 years ago from Kuwait

      can't say anything less than awesome, voted up

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Hi Mamadrama, I guess everyone know you are a great writer, and you deserve to be published. :) Yup, I read that hub and I loved it so much. I know the passion can just fuel the words to flow onto the page ... I think the more passion, the less effort almost, in some ways. Passionate writers are the best writers, I think.

      Yes, what you say here is so true. Well, thank you for this. :) And I appreciate the many comments from you today. Thank you for the follow. I will be a regular visitor to your hubs. :)

      Hi makusr, thank you for the follow too, wow, I love getting new followers. LOL. H'mmm, well okay... if you like flow and rhyme and if you like plenty of emotion I can easily recommend my other poems to you, as I write from my heart always. And flow to me is everything. Poetry should flow like water...

      Thank you for the vote, and the love too. Lots of love back. :)

      Cathy.

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      Manoj Kumar Srivastava 6 years ago from India

      Astra Nomik,

      Greetings from MAKUSR. This poem is good in emotion, good in rhyme and good in flow. That's what I call 'The Poem'. Voted very high! I'll love to follow you.

      Lots of Love,

      MAKUSR

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      Mamadrama 6 years ago from Upstate NY

      This is beautiful!! And I see why you liked my "Taste of a Woman so much!"

      You can feel the passion and the delicate of the love from a woman, which apparently you and I both can write about with experience.

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Hi Ken, oh wow what a lovely comment. Ken you are a terrific poet. This means a lot to me. Why is it my poetry does that? Heh. Maybe its the passion...

      My poems come from the heart... yes, my muse would have it no other way either... but she knows.... :) That is so sweet, Ken. Wow, my English teacher would be proud to see that in my hubs. :) Thank you Ken. Bowing now... ;)

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      saddlerider1 6 years ago

      Absolutely stunning piece of work. Your talent is explosive, it leaves the reader with very pleasant goosebumps all over. I loved your tenderness and passion expressed in this classic romantic art, you weaved it beautifully.

      I heard your heart for your mate beating fast and filled with emotion and love. I admire your talent and I to write from my heart, my Muse would have it no other way. Expression is a form of beauty and you my dear have that aced. Well done, Bravo take a bow, your audience applauds you.

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Hi Troyangeluk: thank you for the nice comments, I am happy you feel good. Poetry can do that.

      hi jesusmyjoy: thank you for this. :)

      Hi Colin: oh wow, yes I do have my admirers. LOL. Its okay... people like my poems as they are so romantic..."hall of famer"...? Wow. I am blushing now. Heh. I have listened to some of Sarah's music, she is great. Aw thank you Colin. (Hugs you now...)

      Cats, lake and coffee ... sounds divine.. :)

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ......back this glorious morning Cathy to revisit a classic and a classic it surely is because this fabulous piece has your lovely poetic persona written all over it - and yes you have 'your' male admirers too - like me, and the title reminds me that it could be a song by Sarah McLaughlin - yes that title is a hall of famer but then again - so is the person who wrote it - love and hugs to you both courtesy of the man who adores the Cassie and Cathy show!

      lake erie time ontario canada 7:50am up early to feed my unruly cats so I took a walk along my beach to greet the daybreak and made a coffee

      and posting this beauty to my FACEBOOK page with a direct link back here .....

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      Betty Bolden 6 years ago from Bucyrus Ohio

      this is so beautiful

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      Troyangeluk 6 years ago from UK

      This made me feel good today :) truly beautiful

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Hi spotlight: thank you for the nice comment. Yup, romantic is an apt word for this. :)

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      Jennifer Pena 6 years ago from California

      Hello Astra such a very romantic poem you wrote here very good!

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Colin, this is so beautiful. Thank you for saying this. If my poems could not be honest, then love would be nothing. Wow, that would drive me insane. Ugh. You are right, and maybe it is too raw sometimes... but I write from the heart. There are some things I can't hide or lie about. And especially for special people that I love so much.

      You are right, love is love. I think anyone can understand the feelings in here. As for the gift thing...well, We'll wait till I publish my poetry collection and then see if I have the gift of selling any. Hehehe. Aw, well I cherish your poems too, Colin. You are a National Treasure. :) We cherish you always. Hugs from me. ^_^

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      epigramman 6 years ago

      ..you have such a direct way of speaking to your reader and that makes it such a raw, honest and emotional experience - most writers would take a lifetime to come up with something this pure and sincere - but you my friend have a gift of such a flowing and noble heart - and as I see it, love is love, no matter what the gender or set-up, but the love of your writing is certainly something for the epi-man to cherish .....

      lake erie time 10:04pm ontario, canada

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Thank you Neil. :) I discovered there is a wisdom inside love... it is so unusual,or maybe I am still a learner...LOL. Thank you for the nice comment on my poem. :)

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      Neil Sperling 6 years ago from Port Dover Ontario Canada

      Deep and touching -- I love this line ... You found me for a reason -

      and you give me love and hope

      You love me through the seasons -

      You teach me how to cope

      beautiful

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Hi ubanichijioke: thank you for this, me rare to find...um...wow, I am flattered. I just write with passion for what and who I believe in. Plus I am a total romantic. Its a nice compliment, I appreciate it. :)

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      Alexander Thandi Ubani 6 years ago from Lagos

      You ve the lines of a great poet. People of your worth are rare to find. I am wowed! Thank you

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Hi Sharyn, thank you for the kind comments. Oh I am more lucky than I could ever hope for, I know. She is so special and amazing. :) I am holding on very tight. And thank you, I won't be discouraged, my mind is set. :)

      Your slant on things is very poignant. Have a wonderful weekend, and blessing to you, Sharyn. :D

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      Sharon Smith 6 years ago from Northeast Ohio USA

      Beautiful poetry. Beautiful photos. You are lucky to have found her. Hold on tight and don't let anyone discourage you.

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Hi acaetnna, oh wow, that's a lot of "ups". LOL. People might ask questions. Hehehe. I am kidding. :) Thank you for the wonderful comments. Have a sweet weekend.

      @JadedLove: I think poets have to use feelings to create meaningful poetry and writing. Otherwise it won't seem real somehow. And painters are the same. I wish I could paint. I appreciate the comment.

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      JadedLove 6 years ago

      Very touching your love is. I don't see with blind eyes making the barriers in light and love. You are a wonderful feeler in painting this piece of love so beautiful.

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      acaetnna 6 years ago from Guildford

      A stunningly erotic piece of work. Voting up, up and up.

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Hi Rena, may I call you Rena? (It is on your profile.) Yes, in my poetry I let it all out, so seductive, passionate and emotional will be in there... Heh. Yes, they are certainly prevalent with this poem and the amazing person who inspired this. Wow, thank you for the warm comments. Yes, Love can be just incredible... and the person helps to make it all the more incredible...

      Have a sweet day. :)

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      ROMANCER OF LIFE 6 years ago from Honolulu, Hawaii

      Whoa... very seductive, passionate, emotional... and all things needed for a wondeful relationship! I loved it. I'm speechless I tell ya! Love, love, loveeeeed it!

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Hi Enigmatic Me: understanding love is simple. Love is love. The feelings are really the same. Well to be inside the "clan" requires only that people who love and enjoy poetry simply read my poems, as they are only about romance. You will see the common theme running through all my hubs, though they might vary in obvious ways. I am a romantic at heart.

      A tryst is no less true for lovers who love each other. And yes this love here is very real, and feelings must be absolute in order for poetry to be real too. The function of my poetry is to explore that feeling and reclaim the amazing sense of what that love is...words can venerate the person we love so much.

      If you doubt that, just read my other poems. LOL. Though you will see they all point like different compasses....all towards one magnetic point. *True love*, *Love* and always Love.

      Thanks you for the excellent comments.

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      6 years ago from East Coast Canada

      Of feminine love and lovers, no male can understand, but keep writing like this and keep me inside this little clan. A tryst like this can only be, if things are true and safe, and I trust the words before me mean that love like this is real, god woman you know how to write what you feel!!!!!

      Well done!

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Bill, it is pain and sometimes torture that invoke an emotion or reaction in us, and it is how we filter that and respond and how we express that emotion.

      But it is not always torture. Love and romance are beautiful things and so is being in love. There are other things to write about. But to write about them one has to believe in them. To believe in them, one has to feel them.

      Maybe some like Hemingway loved the torture or some are addicted to pain, or they need to feel pain to know they are alive. But writing from heart's pull....um...it sounds interesting. Me...wondrous...LOL.

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      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      Hmmm. so it just makes great sense, to be a great master, just be a tortured soul,or just like our wondrous Cathy, just write from heart's pull...

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Oh I love Hemmingway, he had a romantic slant to his writing, and he invented the modern approach to writing dialogue that I learned at school, he stopped adding names to sentences spoken by people in dialogue pieces, and you had to concentrate harder on what was being said in conversations that he penned. I had to read through parts of his books several times. And of course everyone copied his writing. And yes, he won the Nobel Prize for Literature. I am glad Nikki mentioned Hemmingway to me earlier in another place. Such a great writer.

      Oh I would urge anyone to check out his many wonderful books, Bill. Yes he was a tortured soul, but just look at the quality of his writing...

      Hi Dim: how can it be full of deep profound feelings? Um...because they are real. Now you know my secret. The person I wrote about here is someone I love so very much. Love... it will fuel the words... what can I say?... I am thankful for the warm and kind comments. Bless your heart, Dim. :)

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      Dim Flaxenwick 6 years ago from Great Britain

      your love is more than gold. How can such a simple sentence be so profound and full of deep feelings?

      Absolutely lovely.

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      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      Read Hemmingway Nikki..you have to..then you'll you know that place to be of tortured geniuses (like us).. that'll have lap dances..but rather than enjoy it..everybody just writes and cries at the same time about it...just sayin'..

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Nikki, Earnest Hemmingway is who I was thinking about when I said that. He's one of my favorite American writers. That's why I said writerly. Heh. Maybe it's a lapdance club. Who can say? LOL.

      Blaise, I mean Fehl...I know you are just teasing. I love that. LOL. ^,^

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      was just teasing... ^,^

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      Nikki Wicked 6 years ago from Louisiana

      I will Cathy Thanks! and I have no idea what Hemmingway is lol but my friend said I should go there I should have asked her what it is, but I can Google it lol

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Hi Nikki, I saw the new extra pages and photos and poetry photos. Oh please keep ding this as it looks more and more awesome. And yes, enjoy that day out with your BF. :) Hemmingways sounds very um...literary and writerly...hehehe. I think it will be inspiring for you. Oh beaches...I love beaches, Nikki. Take care today and all days... :)

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      Nikki Wicked 6 years ago from Louisiana

      Yep I saw it. I like it. Thanks for adding it. I added some more photos to my website, and some self portraits i played around with a long time ago. also learned how to layer photos did a couple of those and will be adding more.

      and I am going to drive out to pensacola for a day with the bf, spend the day out there, check out some place on the beach called Hemmingways, my friend told me about, and drive back. its only 3 hours away so I wont be driving all day. Yes beaches are awesome and so relaxing. I am over due for a nice little get away, even if it is only for a day.

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Hehehehe. "Who is Fehl Dungo"? She's the most....um...I will email you, Fehl. LOL. Please read the darned hub again... LOL. Who are you jealous of, Fehl?... Heh. ^_^

      Nikki, I was wondering would you see the comment boxes there, the new ones. Yes, I will leave some. People can leave their avatar pictures on the comments too...just like in Hub Pages.

      Oh your holiday for July 4. I am a total beach freak as you can tell from my poetry. I am planning a beach holiday of my own some time. Beaches are so cooooooolll. :)

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      Nikki Wicked 6 years ago from Louisiana

      hehe aww thats awesome! I added some comment boxes to the photography and poetry page so if yall want to leave me awesome comments that would be kewl. idk if i will get any comments. and I have no idea what we are doing yet, but i am spending at least one day at the beach for sure.

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      Fehl Dungo 6 years ago from close to you...

      Who's Fehl Dungo.. I'm so jealous ^_^

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Hi Nikki, I am so happy your website is coming on so well. It's now advertised in three websites of "Team Cheeky". Woohoo. LOL. (That's our nickname that Cassy and I gave ourselves.) You must have a bbq on July 4th, Nikki. Get some burgers and steaks or shrimps, whatever they throw on the "barbie" these days. LOL. Well a long weekend off and a day at the beach...sounds delightful and relaxing. Go for it. :)

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      Nikki Wicked 6 years ago from Louisiana

      awww i just saw yours and bellas comments thanks so much. you guys are awesomer. lol more awesome. hehe. yes cathy, 4th of july is independence day, i dont celebrate it much, we might have a bbq or something with the family, but i get work off that day so that is always a plus. and its a monday this year so i get a 3 day weekend yay! and i so wanna go to the beach nothing far like Boracay, but I bet it is beautiful.

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Hi Nikki, thank you for this. The beach in question is a magic pace in the Philippines called Boracay. Cassy went there a few years ago. I am so jealous. Ha. Oh 4th of July is a Big Holiday in the USA. Aah there's nothing like being on the beach and being with the ones you love. :)

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      Nikki Wicked 6 years ago from Louisiana

      That was breathtakingly beatiful. I so want to go to the beach, even more now. Hopefully for 4th of July weekend. But this made me feel as if I was there already, laying on the sands with my loved one.

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Hi HatieMattieMae; what a cool name that is. :) Thank you for this, yes the photos are very um...perfect. LOL. :)

      Hi dreamreachout; yes, I love losing myself to the feelings and being inside that moment...yes the belonging thing I understand too. Thank you for these comments. have a sweet day. :)

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      dreamreachout 6 years ago

      Very touching, very moving!! You generate the sense of belonging in us with this poetry!! Wonderful!!

      Cheers!!

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      HattieMattieMae 6 years ago from Limburg, Netherlands

      Wonderfully done and illustrating it perfectly! :)

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Hi Acer, love of this amazing woman is more, cos gold will never love me the same way or make me as happy...have you seen any poems about jewelry in my hubs? Heh. I thought not. I am a Romantic at heart.

      Hi angoliver, thank you for this wonderful comment and thank you for the fanmail too. Mwah. I think I see a future in this writing poetry thing. LOL. I write from the heart. Wow, read more than once. I am blushing at these compliments. I don't deserve this much. Bless you angoliver.

      Hi Ruby, aw, wow...I so agree...it is more precious than gold. Yes, it's because the person this is about is just so special. Thank you for the lovely sentiment. Cheers too. Have a sweet day, Ruby. ^_^

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      Ruby Jean Fuller 6 years ago from Southern Illinois

      This is so beautiful Astra, full of emotion, and yes, love is more precious than gold. Lucky you, to have found it.

      Cheers

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      angoliver 6 years ago

      What a very beautiful poem, Astra. Full of love and sensuality! It was so good, I read it more than once :) You are a fantastic writer!!

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      Mentalist acer 6 years ago from A Voice in your Mind!

      Love of gold is truly worth our survival,for without it,we'd not exist.;)

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Hi Dezirya, thank you for the wonderful comments. I am glad you enjoyed this. I have been checking out your vampire stories too, and welcome to Hub Pages too.:) I think lots of people can relate to this. Feel free to check out my other romantic poetry. Have a sweet day. :)

      Hey Kimberly: wow your comment skidded right off the page. LOL. Aw thank you, honey. You are awesome.

      (kiss back)

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      kimberlyslyrics 6 years ago

      BBBBEEEEEEAAAAAAAAUUUUUUTTTTTTTTTIIIIIIIIFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUULLLLLLLLLL

      just like you

      kiss

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Bella, thank you...and yes, Nikki is awesome. She writes and tells it straight from the heart. :)

      The Suburban Poet: Hi Mark, um...yes, it is a love poem and more besides...I love rhythm too...the photos I pick for showing the tender,gentler side of love. I appreciate your input. :)

      Hi Bill: I love the way you sneak certain words into your comments. LOL. You are getting very happy in my comments about my poetry, and waxing lyrical too. I am a lucky woman, and Cassy is a blessing to me, and Fehl is too. The bonus to the world is that they both write here in Hub Pages too.

      Words were meant to be put to good use and can express so many beautiful things. Oh I love exotic beaches and Boracay is one I have been reading up on recently. I want to travel there some day and go with special friends and explore it. You and that shower. Ha.

      Hi ExoticHippieQueen: thank you for the kind words. Oh, I have a few other poems in a similar vein to this. I do my best to keep it real, and decent too. There are some special people in my life and I worship them. :)

      Hi Augustine: um yes, I dedicated it to two wonderful people. Aw, you wish you wrote it? Heh. I am looking forward to the guest hub spot coming soon. And thanks to you. Best wishes. :)

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      Dezirya Austin 6 years ago from Wichita, Kansas

      Amazing piece of script, I enjoyed reading this and can relate to the emotions.

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      Augustine A Zavala 6 years ago from Texas

      Very sensual, erotic, beautiful. I wish I wrote it! Mmm...

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      ExoticHippieQueen 6 years ago

      That was beautiful.............I have never read a peom about one woman's love for another.........it was amazing. Well-written, beautiful rhythm.

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      bbnix 6 years ago from Southern California

      Hey, I'm the romantic who loves those beaches, especially those hidden canyons, but I guess there's room for all of us whose naked and in love... no fair peaking though...

      You two are very very lucky to have each other and I feel particularly honored that you share such incredible feelings and words with us, but I gotta tell you, I'm spending a hell of a lot of time in that damn cold shower..ha ha ha...love you both!!!

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      The Suburban Poet 6 years ago from Austin, Texas

      Well Astra... what can I say but that this is a very loving poem and it also has a natural rhythm to it... nice pictures too....

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      Yes I had first Dibs, Nikki is the greatest and no problem!!

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      Cathy Nerujen 6 years ago from Edge of Reality and Known Space

      Hi Bella. Wow, first dibs to you. LOL. Thank you for this, and yes, it is sensual and emotion filled, but then that is how I felt writing it. I saw Nikki's poem about you just a moment ago, it is lovely. It's always great getting your input... ^_^

      Have a sweet day, Bella.

      Cathy

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      Erica Sanchez 6 years ago from California

      This is very emotion filled. Very sensual as well Great job Astra!!

      bella