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Rise and fall
Her breath
Rise-and fall
Her chest
In the darkness, as she sleeps
I watch her silhouette
Her breast
Breathe out-breathe in
Fall, rise
Like the moment her being did
First fill my eyes
In love I did fall
Emotions intense did rise
Like a child on a seesaw
Lost in play
Up, down
Rise, fall
Love you, my darling
Breathe for me
I fall
Deep into sleep
Deep into love
I breathe
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Thank you very much, PD. I appreciate the visit. I notice I am following you but I haven't seen any of your work lately.
Nice work Poet and much appreciated... thanks to rebekahElle for the introduction... thanks to you for a glimpse of perfect! Take care.... PD
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Thank you very much Dianne.
This is a very unique and creative.
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Hi, Cat! Thanks for the nice compliment. You're always a dear! : )
wayne,
So simple, so sweet. You have the abilitity to make such an "insignificant" thing so meaningful and romantic.
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Thank you again, Dana. the woman in the painting is my wife, Brandie. I painted the picture about two years ago.
This is the first thing I saw this morning after sleeping in. Thanks to Leslie. I just had to read it again. You paint an imimate portrait so beautifully and poetically... Breathe, breath. Such simple words but so powerful. They are life, soul.... You have reminded me what it is to breathe and to appreicate a breath. and love, ad life.....
I told you this before, I have to tell you again. I adore that painting of the woman....
Love your profile pic too :)
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Thank you, Dear Leslie! Thank you once again for your kind words and for gracing my page with that beautiful smile!
i can't believe how much that...moved me! So SO sweet, dear Wayne..
i feel my heart - as you feel hers..
beautiful!
sharing onxx
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You're up late...early...
Thank you for the re-visit, Colin. You're always welcome
Darn, Sir Wayne, I just had to re-visit a Wayne Barrett classic as my poetic lullaby before I go to bed here at 3:04am and hopefully put me in the mood for deep sleep (REM) and erotic dreams so I wake up in the morning with a smile on my face and a tent in my bed and then drink neurotic coffee. (lol)
And then thank Uncle Wayne - and say man that was better than viagra.
Because these words here are like poetic Viagra. lol
Just listened to the Yardbirds and now the party is over
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Why thank you, Darlin'. And the apple doesn't fall far from the tree.
My father is a very talented artist and writer. He makes me so proud.
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Ed: Thank you again! Yes, Beth is the one who introduced me to the Hub, and now my youngest daughter is getting involved.
The painting is mine as well as a few others that I have used on my Hubs. The woman in the painting is my beautiful wife, Brandie.
Such a beatiful way of writing Wayne ! And a daughter to share with too ! Did you paint that picture ?
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Thank you sweetie.
So beautiful and lovely Dad. The affection that still shows clearly between the two of you gives hope to the world.
Alrighty then.
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Thank you, Beth. I will be sure to come pay your Hubs a visit.
I loved this.
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Thank you my friend. I see I procrastinated on responding to your compliment. Not intentional...just another usual brain fart! I read your poetry, so I feel completely comfortable using such terms : ))
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Thank you so much, James!
Up, down ..breath but here breathtakingly awesome poem,up,up ..voted.
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Thank you very much Adrienne.
This was a very passionate, heartfelt piece. I love it and the artwork is beautiful.
.....simple, pure and perfect, Sir Wayne.
It's so erotic too - I could visualize this one in my mind - and yes it took my breath away - I so do love your words here - it's great art in the making - sending you warm wishes and good energy with a nice cuppa tea and some shortbread. lake erie time ontario canada 9:59pm
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Thank you Dana, for the compliment on my poem, and my painting.
This is incredible. So very passionately beautiful. And that painting - I nearly cried looking at it. Gorgeous - the color scheme, the little details, the way she is positioned seems so perfectly imperfect... I adore this hub!
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Thank you again, B.
Up and Beautiful and shared with followers. It's a lovely poem expressing love.
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I appreciate your compliment. I am looking forward to enjoying more of your work.
Lovely--the brevity of the line is wonderful
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Thank you xstatic.
Very good poem!
So beautiful and sweet!
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Thank you billybuc.
Some of the best poetry I have read manages to say a great deal with a minimum of words. You accomplished that here with this excellent piece of writing.
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