|HubPages Device ID||This is used to identify particular browsers or devices when the access the service, and is used for security reasons.|
|Login||This is necessary to sign in to the HubPages Service.|
|HubPages Traffic Pixel||This is used to collect data on traffic to articles and other pages on our site. Unless you are signed in to a HubPages account, all personally identifiable information is anonymized.|
|Remarketing Pixels||We may use remarketing pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to advertise the HubPages Service to people that have visited our sites.|
|Conversion Tracking Pixels||We may use conversion tracking pixels from advertising networks such as Google AdWords, Bing Ads, and Facebook in order to identify when an advertisement has successfully resulted in the desired action, such as signing up for the HubPages Service or publishing an article on the HubPages Service.|
Its a sleepy day today
the sky is dusted
with bullet smoke and powdered sugar.
The barren trees
rigidly shake their long white fingers.
raking the sky.
We travel down Acorn road.
Passing an old decrepit barn, grain feeder and haybales.
We pass an abandoned bus
surrounded by angry cedar trees
that needle the sky with their thorny arms.
patches of chartreuse grass dot the countryside
little mishaped blots of rainwater gather.
More abandoned farm houses.
Rows of cottonwoods with a creek winding alongside
A weathered barn-red fence stretches across the lonely hills.
We've reached a Junction.
Do you realize that you have just duplicated your entire Hub on this forum post? If you can still edit this, you should remove your post.
Wow. Remarkable poem. Very powerful.
It needs a teeny bit more, though - it's a bit too committed to what it is, a ride down a road. Needs a bit more of the allegorical element suggested in the "bullet smoke and powdered sugar" and the "abandoned bus."
The poem's last line is almost determinate enough to take the reader into that realm on its own, but...not quite.
If that doesn't make sense...I want to see my own specific "critical junctions" in the words and images, and I almost do, but I still need just a little more of a booster from the text to tell me I'm not taking that journey alone.
But a beautiful poem even as is.
Copyright © 2018 HubPages Inc. and respective owners.
Other product and company names shown may be trademarks of their respective owners.
HubPages® is a registered Service Mark of HubPages, Inc.
HubPages and Hubbers (authors) may earn revenue on this page based on affiliate relationships and advertisements with partners including Amazon, Google, and others.