How should the following sentence be punctuated? I love it when everyone is say

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    janna Templeposted 7 years ago

    How should the following sentence be punctuated?  I love it when everyone is saying go Savannah...

    when I have the ball and cheering me on when I make a goal.

  2. Julie Simmonds profile image59
    Julie Simmondsposted 7 years ago

    Break up the sentence into several.

    I love it whenI have the ball. Everyone is cheering," go Savannah," when I make the goal.

 
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