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a new day

  1. theinspiring1 profile image56
    theinspiring1posted 7 years ago

    last nights tears, laid dry on my cheeks
    as i watched the sun rise, up from the east
    my body felt empty, hollow to the core
    as i said to myself, i can't do this anymore
    i can't cry, i can't fight, i can't feel sad or blue
    i can no longer take, what you put me through
    i have to open my eyes, and see life in a new way
    you are yesterdays news, and today is a new day...
    i have to be strong, to pull happiness closer
    and drop all of this negative weight, off of my shoulders
    i need to let go of my anger, and all the bitter contempt
    from our countless fights, and arguments
    all the pain, sadness, hurt and dismay
    i refuse to endure, because it's a new day...
    so many opportunities, and new things to do
    i can now concentrate on me, instead of crying over you
    or waste time being suspicious, skeptical or jealous
    because i knew you were secretly, seeing other fellas
    i gave you a love, that was innocent and pure
    and you turned me into someone, that was so insecure
    so if this is the way, that true love is shown
    i would rather save my heart, and remain all alone
    i once thought it would be impossible, to turn and walk away
    but now i know i'm over you - because today's A NEW DAY...


  2. Dame Scribe profile image60
    Dame Scribeposted 7 years ago

    Very nice but ...shouldn't this be in a Hub and not in a forum or would you like us to discuss this? hmm

  3. SandyMcCollum profile image72
    SandyMcCollumposted 7 years ago

    Ahem... You have 0 hubs, but you post a poem in the discussion forum? Testing your work before you make a hub? Or.... what?

  4. theinspiring1 profile image56
    theinspiring1posted 7 years ago

    hi sandy and dame,
    I actually just joined Hub early this morning and am not quite sure how it works. But I wanted to share some of my work so I typed the first place I saw post....if you could briefly explain how it all works I would greatly appreciate it...thanks

    1. tantrum profile image61
      tantrumposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      It's very easy!
      Why don't you read the help section? It seems you need help, don't you ?

  5. theinspiring1 profile image56
    theinspiring1posted 7 years ago