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  1. freddykrueger profile image55
    freddykruegerposted 8 years ago

    waking up to another great day/thinking how special it is,so when i pray/i can thank god for letting me wake up to my family/listening to my daughter playing and my wife asleep/who can ask for more, i know i can't this is great/seeing her open her eyes from sleeping so soundly/hopefully keeping me in her dreams/loving every momment witnessing my baby/taking her first footsteps learning how to walk it's amazing/seeing her from birth crying .feeding her,changing her,just fathering/knowing that im shaping her into a great young woman/theres no other great feeling like it,true loving/with her cut lil' nose to her vampire ears resembling me/theres no denying carolina was sent here to me/an angel from heaven to witness my transformation/from a young idiot to a grown man,now that's amazing/thank you carolina

    1. Red_Dragon profile image54
      Red_Dragonposted 8 years agoin reply to this

      Nice poem, keep it up.

      Anyone wanna freestlye/rhyme?

      I use to freestyle back in the day was pretty nasty too :p

      1. you suggest one profile image60
        you suggest oneposted 8 years agoin reply to this

        isn't wonderful how creation can change your lie.

  2. Sadie Blue Eyez profile image60
    Sadie Blue Eyezposted 8 years ago

    beautiful poetry freddykrueger! smile