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    UNLOVED ROHITposted 7 years ago

    In this stage, I grow up, in this stage. I try to understand the world.
    The feeling is so special that cannot be described in a word.
    I start weaving dreams for my future. Whatever I may do I'll respect my culture.
    Sometimes I imagine myself curing sick people, sometimes
    Wearing a black coat. Fighting for truth and
    hiving autographs to a large crowd
    whatever I may do I'll do something to make my parents proud.
    The childish behaviors I had is slowly diminishing.
    I'll go become a rock star is what
    I'm thinking
    There are changes in my room
    I feel I am a flower bud ready to bloom
    The shelves which were full of dolls and toys are
    Now filled with CDs, music system and thick novels
    I am not the girl who lives in her
    dreams, I believe in reality
    I believe, in this world everyone must respect humanity.
    I learn the importance to tackle my complication
    I know this will help me reach my destination.
    I know that my precious moments belong to my teenage
    But this is the period, I suffer the most due to hair breakage.
    I am glad that I am a teenager right at this moment.,
    I dream to be someone special, someone prominent
    I'll not waste my golden age by just having fun and fooling around
    Though I am free I think I am bound
    I assume that teen spirits fade away
    But without fulfilling my dreams I'll never walk away.

    1. sofs profile image84
      sofsposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      Good one Rohit! You need to check your spellings before you publish anything. I learned that. Some work on your grammar would help.
      I Enjoyed the rush of teen and the day dreams that they bring!

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        UNLOVED ROHITposted 7 years agoin reply to this

        sorry its a poem so i didn't cared about any grammars or spellings

        1. micadeolu profile image46
          micadeoluposted 7 years agoin reply to this

          You are right for being yourself especiallt when its about writing art. Move on but create a constitution for yourself as you move in the journey of life.