Bleeding Roses

  1. Desired Devinely profile image57
    Desired Devinelyposted 7 years ago

    losing what i desire most
    goin threw that stupid depreeing state
    i have tried not to cry
    and i have tried not to feel pain
    but when the rose died
    i took my last breath
    stupid people all around
    heart break here and everywhere
    i have consumed all that i can take
    a sharp pain down my arm
    cold wet driping on my hand
    puddles on the floor
    pain in my heart that is broken
    people singin sad songs
    i high pitch bell rings
    foot stepsgettin louder then softer
    roses laying on the casket dieing
    pitures bein placed where they belong
    the peacher is giving his speeech
    pronounsed words sre spoken
    and people are leaving the church
    and tears being shead
    the night are peacefull
    for that is the last night i lie awake

    1. Jaggedfrost profile image80
      Jaggedfrostposted 7 years agoin reply to this

      To your credit, this one is a lot more legible then some of your others but the theme has returned to the more morose.

  2. WryLilt profile image93
    WryLiltposted 7 years ago

    Lovely poem. Just wondering if you realize you can put this into a hub? Click "Start a new hub" in green at the top of the page.