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MYSTIC LOVE- a poem

Updated on February 2, 2013
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When i inquire into the past

i see a spark

burning in the dark

was it a feeling

or was it a pain

or was it love?


A sort of frenzy struck my mind

and mystically i fell

into it

The feeling was so deep

it felt so hard to climb through

yet it felt like a dream

a very happy dream


i knew for some while

the cupids arrow fell on me



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    • suzanno profile imageAUTHOR

      tesslyn suzanne 

      5 years ago from kerala, India

      @ mellyunpluggeed Thank you for your comment and encouragement!....god bless you.

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      Melvin Augustine 

      5 years ago from India

      Nice one Suzano...Great thought process!! Keep writing !!

    • suzanno profile imageAUTHOR

      tesslyn suzanne 

      6 years ago from kerala, India

      Amy Becherer,

      I'm honored on hearing the kind words which you have for my poetry .Your comparisons have truly made my day.

      Thankyou so much for the read and comment . Have a nice day:)

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      tesslyn suzanne 

      6 years ago from kerala, India

      Bravewarrior,

      Thankyou so much , I'm overwhelmed with joy, to be compared with someone like you. Even you began writing at your teens adds to the glory.

      Thanks again for the read and comment. Have a great day:)

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      Amy Becherer 

      6 years ago from St. Louis, MO

      Profound thoughts for one so young. You have impressive talent, Suzanno. The photo, dramatic and telling, like falling off the edge of the world, captures the sensation of giving oneself over to the mysterious depth of love. Beautifully thought-provoking!

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      Shauna L Bowling 

      6 years ago from Central Florida

      What a sweet poem! I began writing when I was a teenager, also. I'm happy to say, your thoughts are much lighter than mine were at the time!

      Welcome to HubPages and thanx for the follow. India seems to spawn some pretty amazing poets!

    • suzanno profile imageAUTHOR

      tesslyn suzanne 

      6 years ago from kerala, India

      smga,

      Thankyou for the read and comment. im glad you found it interesting :)

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      smga22 

      6 years ago from Dhaka, Bangladesh

      suzanno. Thank you for this beautiful and lovely poem. :)

    • suzanno profile imageAUTHOR

      tesslyn suzanne 

      6 years ago from kerala, India

      suzzycue, Im totally enlightened by your words . i truly agree , falling in love is the most amazing feeling. All those emotions you are talking about is making me fall in love again. thanks for finding time to read and comment :)

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      Susan Britton 

      6 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      suzanno a like how you wrote this poem with the ending being falling in love. There is no better feeling in the world than falling in love. Isn't it wonderful that when we are in love we see the world and everything in it so wonderful. We are on top of the world, when we are in love. I received this from your poem.

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      tesslyn suzanne 

      6 years ago from kerala, India

      Irob- Thankyou :)

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      Irob 

      6 years ago from St. Charles

      nice poem

    • suzanno profile imageAUTHOR

      tesslyn suzanne 

      6 years ago from kerala, India

      Sunnie day,

      thankyou for reading my hub and commenting. I agree that love is a nice yet a mixed feeling of mystery. Im glad you liked it. :)

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      Sunnie Day 

      6 years ago

      Hello Suzanno,

      Remembering love and how it felt. Such a nice feeling but at the same time a mixed feeling of mystery. Thank you for sharing. I loved the picture.

      Have a great day,

      Sunnie

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