MYSTIC LOVE- a poem
When i inquire into the past
i see a spark
burning in the dark
was it a feeling
or was it a pain
or was it love?
A sort of frenzy struck my mind
and mystically i fell
into it
The feeling was so deep
it felt so hard to climb through
yet it felt like a dream
a very happy dream
i knew for some while
the cupids arrow fell on me
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Comments
AUTHOR@ mellyunpluggeed Thank you for your comment and encouragement!....god bless you.
Nice one Suzano...Great thought process!! Keep writing !!
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Amy Becherer,
I'm honored on hearing the kind words which you have for my poetry .Your comparisons have truly made my day.
Thankyou so much for the read and comment . Have a nice day:)
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Bravewarrior,
Thankyou so much , I'm overwhelmed with joy, to be compared with someone like you. Even you began writing at your teens adds to the glory.
Thanks again for the read and comment. Have a great day:)
Profound thoughts for one so young. You have impressive talent, Suzanno. The photo, dramatic and telling, like falling off the edge of the world, captures the sensation of giving oneself over to the mysterious depth of love. Beautifully thought-provoking!
What a sweet poem! I began writing when I was a teenager, also. I'm happy to say, your thoughts are much lighter than mine were at the time!
Welcome to HubPages and thanx for the follow. India seems to spawn some pretty amazing poets!
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smga,
Thankyou for the read and comment. im glad you found it interesting :)
suzanno. Thank you for this beautiful and lovely poem. :)
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suzzycue, Im totally enlightened by your words . i truly agree , falling in love is the most amazing feeling. All those emotions you are talking about is making me fall in love again. thanks for finding time to read and comment :)
suzanno a like how you wrote this poem with the ending being falling in love. There is no better feeling in the world than falling in love. Isn't it wonderful that when we are in love we see the world and everything in it so wonderful. We are on top of the world, when we are in love. I received this from your poem.
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Irob- Thankyou :)
nice poem
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Sunnie day,
thankyou for reading my hub and commenting. I agree that love is a nice yet a mixed feeling of mystery. Im glad you liked it. :)
Hello Suzanno,
Remembering love and how it felt. Such a nice feeling but at the same time a mixed feeling of mystery. Thank you for sharing. I loved the picture.
Have a great day,
Sunnie
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