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LOVE LONG LOST-A poem on lost love

Updated on January 29, 2013
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I have heard people say

First love is the hardest

To despair

I shook my head

Like I hardly care

Until then, I fell for one


It was beautiful, yet strange

How this one person

Can get your heart racing

The name, the sound,the scent,

Or whatever it was

Had the power to turn my head


Simple it was

Under the coat of innocence

When I wrote letters

But didn’t have the guts to send


Sad it was

To see you with someone else

Hoping we’d be friends someday

And sweeter it was

When it came true


I still remember

The first time you phoned me

Thunderstruck I was

Gasping for air


Time went by

With messages and chats

And somehow you came to know

About my hidden secret


Calmly you asked

Is it all true?

With shivers covering me

I posted a yes


Answerless I was

To your questions.

This ended in the quote of love which said

“Love is something which requires feeling from either side”

And you never felt anything for me


Yet you promised

We’ll stay as friends

Is this friendship?

With no talks

No chats

And no YOU?

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      Princess Prisca 5 years ago from Heaven living on Earth

      Suzanno,

      Welcome to HubPages, I hope that you will always enjoy the community of creative talent here.

      I like your poem. It is bitter sweet and lovely at the same time. Good Job!

      Blessings!

      Ciao...Princess Prisca

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      tesslyn suzanne 5 years ago from kerala, India

      Princess Prisca,

      Thankyou so much for reading and and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed this one.

      take care and wish you a wonderful day.

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      Jamie Lee Hamann 5 years ago from Reno NV

      Thank you for sharing this poem. Jamie

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      chivs86 5 years ago from Baldock/ Letchworth, Hertfordshire. UK

      Very good. I liked how your poem was written, in a way I could understand it. I also felt it was quite a deep meaningful piece and I enjoyed reading it.

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      Byron Wolf 5 years ago

      beautiful and bittersweet. and love the fairies!

      thumbs up.

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      tesslyn suzanne 5 years ago from kerala, India

      Thankyou jaime

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      tesslyn suzanne 5 years ago from kerala, India

      chivs, thank you! I appreciate your read and comment! Take care!

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      tesslyn suzanne 5 years ago from kerala, India

      Byron Wolf,

      I appreciate your kind comment . Thank you for enjoying this poem with photos.

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      Liz 5 years ago

      great poem. very personalized...

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      tesslyn suzanne 5 years ago from kerala, India

      Thankyou so much..:)

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      Susan Britton 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      You write from your heart with no strings attached. First love is the hardest. My first love was not meant to be because my parents split us up and then he had an accident that killed him. I still love him and it was ten years later his brother told me of the accident. I felt your pain. good poem. keep writing.

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      Adarsh S 5 years ago

      Awsuuum wrk...proud f yu da..keep writing!!:):)

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      tesslyn suzanne 5 years ago from kerala, India

      suzzycue,

      Thankyou for finding time to read and comment.

      first love is not just the hardest but the sweetest too. happening for the first time itself brings the whole beauty in it. your story is so touching. im glad you have survived such a deep pain. i truly feel like giving you a hug.

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      tesslyn suzanne 5 years ago from kerala, India

      adarsh s...Thanks a ton . Keep supporting :)

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      Susan Britton 5 years ago from Ontario, Canada

      Thanks for the hug. Your are sweet!

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      tesslyn suzanne 5 years ago from kerala, India

      :)

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      I G 4 years ago

      There was LORD BYRON,ALFRED TENNYSON,GOETHE,SHAKESPEARE,SYLVIA PLATH,ROBERT FROST,RUDYARD KIPLING...................................and now there's TESSLYN.........This is stupendous,heart touching.................I'm unable to say anything.......Just God Bless you with everything Good............

      From

      THE ALL-TIME VILLAIN(Why so Serious??)

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      dreamseeker2 4 years ago

      Beautiful poem, although sad. Life can be cruel sometimes, but its also a lesson we sometimes need to learn to move on. Voted up, of course!

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      tesslyn suzanne 4 years ago from kerala, India

      Thanks dreamseeker2…for stopping by here and leaving your vote and motivating comment. Your support and inspiration is very much appreciated. Take care and God bless you....:)

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